li0nheart

ao3 // ffnet. 31. F. I like to live vicariously through Marauders Era fanfiction. Travel around the blog using the Portkey at the top🥤✨ ask me things!

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This is so accurate I'm rolling 💀💀💀

[li0nheartstories]

Yes.

[hxuse-xf-black]

[Before they got together] Lily, muttering: I really want to kiss you. James, not hearing what she said: What? Lily, panicking: I said if you die I won't miss you.

[li0nheartstories]

I've just found a secret pen in my phone and:

It'sa me, tashio.

[projecttreehouse]

how to write relatable characters

writing relatable characters may seem like an easy task, especially when you’re constructing your protagonist. but what if you want to make your antagonist likeable? what if you want people to hate your protagonist but still root for them? all of this and more requires that your characters be relatable. they need to feel real, so how do you do that? here’s how:

- flaws: this is probably obvious. everyone has flaws, so we should give our characters flaws, too. this applies even if your character is non-human; they cannot escape the personification that we as writers or readers project onto them. we are humans reading, so we expect to see human qualities everywhere we look. if you’re having trouble of identifying your character’s flaws, here are some prompts for ways to think about flaws beyond a list:

what skills do they lack? what do they struggle with?

can their strengths be turned against them as a weakness?

what makes them react emotionally or impulsively?

are they aware of their flaws? if so, do they want to improve them or change them?

- quirks: these are what make your character unique or special, and no, i don’t mean purple eyes or unique physical traits. i mean: what makes your character authentically themselves? what traits define them that few others have? some ways to think about this are:

how do they react when nervous? do they have a tell? similarly, how do they react on behalf of any emotion?

what skills do they have that hardly anyone else has?

what obscure thing are they obsessed with?

do they have a unique outlook on life compared to their peers?

- values: these come from life experiences: where we were raised, our family and friends, our community, religious affiliations, etc. i suggest identifying eight to ten values that define your character and then narrowing that list down to five values that mark their core or essence. think about how these values influence their choices, decisions, and ultimately, the plot of the novel. here are some more prompts to think about values:

how do they react when their values are challenged? are they one to speak up or do they sit back in the shadows?

what, if anything, will change or shatter their values?

are their actual values misaligned with their believed values?

- stakes: what is at risk for your character? what is motivating them? stakes don’t need to be over the top or life or death; they can be as simple as maintaining a relationship or reaching a goal. unless there’s an outside influence (ie. percy’s mother being kidnapped in The Lightning Thief), most stakes—especially those relatable—tie back to values. even those influenced by outside factors can tie back to values: the only reason percy is motivated to get his mother back is because he cares for her and she is the one person who has always advocated for him and cared for him. he values family and riordan uses his family to motivate him and incite the plot. generally, there will be one overarching stake for your character, but throughout your novel, there should be several smaller stakes. these may not service the plot but should elaborate on your character nonetheless. some ways to think about stakes include:

how can i use internal or external factors to create convincing, relatable stakes that tie back to basic values?

why does the overarching stake matter to my character? why do they care?

how can i raise the stakes or introduce new ones that are relevant to my character and illustrate them as a relatable being?

- connection: even if your character is an introvert, they will still be connected to someone, something, or even an idea. we, as humans, look to certain people, pets, objects, and ideas to maintain our sense of reality whether we realize it or not. if your character prides themselves in having no attachments, think about the ideas or themes that mark the cornerstones of their reality. most human beings strive for some form of connection, so here are more prompts for thinking about your characters and connection:

what does connection mean to my character? how do they show how they value their connections or relationships?

how does my character’s behavior change when around different connections?

what connections define my character and their reality? how will these connections influence my character and/or the plot?

how will removing or challenging a connection change, influence, or motivate my character?

a good rule of thumb is to treat a character as a human, not a plot device. there is a time or place in which a character must act as a plot device, but if you’re wanting your readers to be compelled by your narration and the characters within them, you should strive to write your characters as human (aka as relatable). one of the greatest pleasures i find in writing is when other’s identify themselves in my writing.

you’re not just here to tell a story, you’re here to connect with others through the illustration of your characters. let the reader navigate your prose as a detective, to search for and identify the evidence provided by you. that is to say, show us how these things manifest in your character. don’t tell us.

happy writing! hopefully this post gave you some ways to start thinking about how to show the relatability of your character. if you have any questions about implementing these tools or about writing characters, our ask box is always open.

[norelationtoatticus]

Listen. Harry James Potter was an accident. 

You cannot convince me otherwise. Lily and James were 19 when they got pregnant. There’s no way that was on purpose. 

Please picture it. 

Lily tells James they’re pregnant. James panics, leaves, finds the other Marauders and demands a lads night, you know, no reason, just some drunken shenanigans for no reason at all with friends! Remus notices something seems a bit off and keeps an eye on his friend, but no one says anything. It’s only several hours later, when James is drunkenly crying and wailing on the floor, “He’s going to be so small! How can I protect him? SO SMALL!” that they realize what’s going on. They ask him if he is going to be alright. He sobs, tears and snot running down his face, and nods furiously. “This is the happiest I have ever been!” The others look at each other, shake their heads, and pull him to his feet. Sirius marches him back home to Lily, who has been waiting, scared, alone, and more than a little pissed off at her boyfriend for the better part of the night. She softens when she sees James drunkenly leaning on Sirius, Sirius shrugging in apology, because James is a mess but at least he’s home now. James falls to his knees in front of her and says, “I’m so sorry I ran off. I got scared. I’m still scared. But I’m happy too.” Lily can’t help but smile. “It’s alright, James, we’ll figure–” But James loudly shushes her and points at her stomach. “Wait. I’m talking to my son.” Lily glares at him and reminds him that it could be a daughter. Sirius adds, “Could be twins! Or quintuplets!” Lily glares more and tries not to laugh while James murmurs into her belly, “’M gonna ask your mum to marry me, but keep it secret ‘cause I have to buy a ring first. And a broom. Not for the wedding. For you. Do you like quidditch? You probably don’t know what that is yet. Don’t worry. I’ll teach you. I’ll teach you everything.”

[violentdevotion]

someone in the UK threw eggs at Charles and was arrested and has been banned from openly carrying eggs in public and has since been sent death threats but their statement on the matter was so fucking good

[li0nheartstories]

My boyfriend and I have just had a very in-depth discussion about the loopholes in this ban.

Tennis ball launchers and super soakers were top of the list.

"Obviously, you'd have to whisk them first."

"Nah, you could just shake it up and blast him. 'Hey Charles - it's yolkin' time.'"

[precision-instrument]

[clumsyclifford]

questions for fic writers

a collection of questions i, as a writer, would love to be asked !!!

1. What fic of yours would you recommend to someone who had never read any of your work? (In other words, what do you think is the best introduction to your fics?)

2. Go to your AO3 “Works” page, to the sidebar with all the filters, and click the drop-down arrow for “Additional Tags.” What are your top 3-5 most used tags? Do you think they accurately represent your writing habits?

3. What are some tropes or details that you think are very characteristic of your fics?

4. What detail in [insert fic] are you really proud of?

5. What do you wish someone would ask you about [insert fic]? Answer it now!

6. What’s one fact about the universe of [insert fic] that you didn’t get a chance to mention in the fic itself?

7. Any worldbuilding you’re particularly proud of?

8. What song would make a great fic (to either write or read)?

9. How do you find new fic to read?

10. How do you decide what to write?

11. Are you partial to a certain character/pairing or are you more equal-opportunity? If you are partial to any character/pairing, why do you think that is?

12. Are there any tropes you used to dislike but have grown on you?

13. Are there any tropes you used to like but don’t anymore?

14. Are there any tropes you would only read if written by a trusted friend or writer?

15. What’s your favorite AU that you’ve written?

16. What’s an AU you would love to read (or have read and loved)?

17. What highly specific AU do you want to read or write even though you might be the only person to appreciate it?

18. If you wrote a sequel to [insert fic], what would it involve?

19. If you wrote a spin-off of [insert fic], what would it involve?

20. If you wrote a prequel to [insert fic], what would it involve?

21. If you wrote a “missing scene” in [insert fic], what would it be?

22. Who is your favorite character in [insert fic] and why?

23. What’s a trope, AU, or concept you’ve never written, but would like to?

24. Are there any easter eggs in [insert fic], and if so, what are they?

25. What other websites or resources do you use most often when you write?

26. Would you rather write a fic that had no dialogue or one that was only dialogue?

27. How long did it take to write [insert fic]? Describe the process.

28. Does anyone read your fics before you post them? If so, who?

29. What songs would be (or are) on a playlist for [insert fic]? Explain your choices if you want!

30. Have you ever written something that was out of your comfort zone? If so, what was it, and how did it affect your approach to writing fic thereafter?

31. What’s your ideal fic length to write?

32. What’s your ideal fic length to read?

33. If you write chaptered fics, what’s your ideal chapter length to write? Is it different from your ideal chapter length to read?

34. What aspects of your writing are inspired by/taken from your real life?

35. What aspects of your writing are completely unlike your real life?

36. Do you visualize what you read/write?

37. Promote one of your own “deep cut” fics (an underrated one, or one that never got as much traction as you think it deserves!). What do you like about it?

38. Did any of your fics get surprisingly popular (whatever that means to you)? Which ones? Why do you think they were so successful?

39. Is any aspect of your writing process inspired by other writers or people? If so, who?

40. Do you tend to reread fics or are you a one-and-done kind of person?

41. Link a fic that made you think, “Wow, I want to write like that.”

42. Have you ever received a comment that particularly stood out to you for whatever reason?

43. If you take/write prompts: what’s your favorite prompt fic that you’ve written?

44. If you take/write prompts: do you prefer dialogue or scenario/narrative prompts?

45. What’s something you’ve improved on since you started writing fic?

46. Do you prefer writing on your phone or on a computer (or something else)? Do you think where you write affects the way you write?

47. If [insert fic] was a pair of shoes, what kind would it be? Describe the shoes.

48. What’s the last fic you read? Do you recommend it?

49. What are you currently working on? Share a few lines if you’re up for it!

50. Answer any question of your choice, or talk about anything you want to talk about!

[li0nheartstories]

Francesca Fallow, 1971. A herd of hippogriffs grazed peacefully in the adjacent field, their young frolicking in the long grass. Verity giggled as one fell face-first into the muck. She ran to catch up with her mother, who was striding down the long driveway - a sense of purpose in every step. They passed the stables and made straight for the house. It was an ancient, red brick building, held together by love, patience, and lots of spell-work. Paint flaked off of the blue stable door as her mother rapped on it. Several locks clicked and popped, but the door remained shut. Behind it, they could hear a cacophony of muffled curses, squeaks, and pleas. "Oof – Wilf! - Will ya – UGH – hold STILL – Wilf, please! Just one minute! Let me – get – AHA!" The top of the door swung back to reveal a puff of blonde, squiggly hair...and a niffler trying to make a run for it. "Fran, dear? Is that you?" "Hiya! Do you – want – me to get – mum - for you?" Wrestling the mole-like creature in her arms, Fran looked positively desperate. "Don't worry, you take Wilf back inside; I'm sure we'll be able to find her." With a grateful nod, the girl adjusted the creature in her arms and high-tailed it out of the boot room.

[li0nheartstories]

Alice Fawley, 1971. Verity wrapped her cousin’s pinky finger tightly in hers. “Promise?” “Promise,” said Alice, a forlorn smile tugging at her lips. Tears beaded on her lower lash-line as she smoothed her dress over her knees. Ugly words bounced around her skull, making so much noise she could barely think. “I - I don’t understand why Avery was being so horrid. He’s always been a bit mean, but this was different. It felt like he hated me.” “Alistair is a giant dung beetle; you didn’t deserve that at all.” “Thanks, V.” Skin flaked like cracked paint on Alice’s lips, and she began to nibble at it, lost in thought. “Do you think I am a - a bit wet, though? Do you think I belong in Gryffindor?” “Alice, stop it - you’re one of the bravest people I know. You’re not wet, you’re...soft, and there’s a lot of bravery in being a softy. When everyone else is ready to throw insults and hands...or jelly leg jinxes...you’re on the front line with your arms wide open, talking about love and forgiveness. That’s far more courageous. Don’t let anyone convince you otherwise. Especially not Alistair Avery, who has less courage in his entire body than you do in your little finger.” With that, Verity finally released the small digit she had been clutching for dear life.

[dollysgothworld]

[approvers]

[rebel-heart-gypsysoul]

[clare-with-no-i]

when I make a fake twitter account for NAR!verse James Potter, what then

[clare-with-no-i]

Jedward Greatest Hits Unofficial (@JamesPotterForReal): @bumblebffUK I told my mate I’d found the girl of my dreams and he asked me for lecture notes can you help me I’m in dire need

[clare-with-no-i]

Jedward Greatest Hits Unofficial (@JamesPotterForReal): unstoppable force of me eating three almond croissants on the way to training versus immovable object of me chundering on the pitch

[clare-with-no-i]

Jedward Greatest Hits Unofficial (@JamesPotterForReal): what if I just dueled Piers Morgan like with swords

[clare-with-no-i]

Jedward Greatest Hits Unofficial (@JamesPotterForReal): got my research paper on developmental neuromechanics published! thanks to Oxford Journal on Health and Sciences. if anyone mentions that I misspelled my middle name on the cover page I will actually smite them 

[clare-with-no-i]

Jedward Greatest Hits Unofficial (@JamesPotterForReal): the debate is over. green is superior colour. no I will not be taking questions

[lsleofskye]

Untitled | bryanminear

[darklesmylove]

[moonyandtoasts]

Remus and his Halloween sweater 🎃

[li0nheartstories]

Getting into the spirit of things 🐺