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Some thoughts above Kyoshi x Rangi✅

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HOW TO WRITE A CHARACTER WHO IS IN PAIN

first thing you might want to consider: is the pain mental or physical?

if it’s physical, what type of pain is it causing? — sharp pain, white-hot pain, acute pain, dull ache, throbbing pain, chronic pain, neuropathic pain (typically caused by nerve damage), etc

if it’s mental, what is the reason your character is in pain? — grief, heartbreak, betrayal, anger, hopelessness, fear and anxiety, etc

because your character will react differently to different types of pain

PHYSICAL PAIN

sharp and white-hot pain may cause a character to grit their teeth, scream, moan, twist their body. their skin may appear pale, eyes red-rimmed and sunken with layers of sweat covering their forehead. they may have tears in their eyes (and the tears may feel hot), but they don’t necessarily have to always be crying.

acute pain may be similar to sharp and white-hot pain; acute pain is sudden and urgent and often comes without a warning, so your character may experience a hitched breathing where they suddenly stop what they’re doing and clench their hand at the spot where it hurts with widened eyes and open mouth (like they’re gasping for air).

dull ache and throbbing pain can result in your character wanting to lay down and close their eyes. if it’s a headache, they may ask for the lights to be turned off and they may be less responsive, in the sense that they’d rather not engage in any activity or conversation and they’d rather be left alone. they may make a soft whimper from their throat from time to time, depends on their personality (if they don’t mind others seeing their discomfort, they may whimper. but if your character doesn’t like anyone seeing them in a not-so-strong state, chances are they won’t make any sound, they might even pretend like they’re fine by continuing with their normal routine, and they may or may not end up throwing up or fainting).

if your character experience chronic pain, their pain will not go away (unlike any other illnesses or injuries where the pain stops after the person is healed) so they can feel all these types of sharp pain shooting through their body. there can also be soreness and stiffness around some specific spots, and it will affect their life. so your character will be lucky if they have caretakers in their life. but are they stubborn? do they accept help from others or do they like to pretend like they’re fine in front of everybody until their body can’t take it anymore and so they can no longer pretend?

neuropathic pain or nerve pain will have your character feeling these senses of burning, shooting and stabbing sensation, and the pain can come very suddenly and without any warning — think of it as an electric shock that causes through your character’s body all of a sudden. your character may yelp or gasp in shock, how they react may vary depends on the severity of the pain and how long it lasts.

EMOTIONAL PAIN

grief can make your character shut themself off from their friends and the world in general. or they can also lash out at anyone who tries to comfort them. (five states of grief: denial, anger, bargaining, depression and eventual acceptance.)

heartbreak — your character might want to lock themself in a room, anywhere where they are unseen. or they may want to pretend that everything’s fine, that they’re not hurt. until they break down.

betrayal can leave a character with confusion, the feelings of ‘what went wrong?’, so it’s understandable if your character blames themself at first, that maybe it’s their fault because they’ve somehow done something wrong somewhere that caused the other character to betray them. what comes after confusion may be anger. your character can be angry at the person who betrayed them and at themself, after they think they’ve done something wrong that resulted in them being betrayed, they may also be angry at themself next for ‘falling’ for the lies and for ‘being fooled’. so yes, betrayal can leave your character with the hatred that’s directed towards the character who betrayed them and themself. whether or not your character can ‘move on and forgive’ is up to you.

there are several ways a character can react to anger; they can simply lash out, break things, scream and yell, or they can also go complete silent. no shouting, no thrashing the place. they can sit alone in silence and they may cry. anger does make people cry. it mostly won’t be anything like ‘ugly sobbing’ but your character’s eyes can be bloodshot, red-rimmed and there will be tears, only that there won’t be any sobbing in most cases.

hopelessness can be a very valid reason for it, if you want your character to do something reckless or stupid. most people will do anything if they’re desperate enough. so if you want your character to run into a burning building, jump in front of a bullet, or confess their love to their archenemy in front of all their friends, hopelessness is always a valid reason. there’s no ‘out of character’ if they are hopeless and are desperate enough.

fear and anxiety. your character may be trembling, their hands may be shaky. they may lose their appetite. they may be sweaty and/or bouncing their feet. they may have a panic attack if it’s severe enough.

and I think that’s it for now! feel free to add anything I may have forgotten to mention here!

[nsk96]

Writing Help

General Tips

The purpose of writing

Important: only you can tell your stories

Every fanfiction genre has value

HOW TO STAY MOTIVATED!

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Reasons to Keep Writing

Stretch your hands and fingers

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Fanfiction is legitimate (featuring Neil Gaiman)

Angst and Horror: if you can't handle it

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Sentence length matters!

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Part 2 ->

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キスの日 kiss day 5/23

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[patientno7]

the suffering never ends

[sinksanksockie2]

This is the real process

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Resources for you!

Character Ideas:

Character creation masterpost

Character Alignment Chart

More character alignment descriptions

Muslim Character questions

Characters with magical powers

Building a new character advice

How to create a character for an online or tabletop RPG (also a good guide on creating characters in general)

Royalty/nobility TV Tropes page

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Random character generators - (1), (2), (3), (4)

D&D Character Building Tool

Character Design Ideas:

How clothing affects a character’s personality

Character Design Inspiration blog

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Create your own character model using HeroForge

For horned characters

Body and hair types guide

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Amazing site with an endless amount of naming resources

General advice on avoiding naming appropriation

Hispanic Surnames

Gothic Victorian names

Huge master list for character things in general

Masterlist of names of all types - including but not limited to ancient/old world names, Celtic, African, Northern European, Southern and Central American Native names, Japanese, Chinese, Mongolian, Polynesian, and more

Another name masterlist

How to pick a character name guide

Yet another names masterlist

Creating Background/backstory:

Character Sheet/Development Sheet

Another character development list

In-depth character personality, motivations and traits sheet

320 talents and passions for characters

On writing likes and dislikes that aren’t frivolous

Why you should write non-human characters non-conforming to the gender binary

Stereotypes, tropes, and archetypes

Random backstory generator

Assassin and thief character tropes to avoid

Character Interactions and putting your character into your world/story:

Comparing character height/height references

Characters who are scientists and writing about them doing science

Describing what different voices sound like

Describing skin tones

Writing friendship interactions that are platonic

Why having one character knock their friend unconscious to prevent them from doing something is a bad idea

Advice on shipping OCs with canon characters and what to avoid doing

Sweet Polly Oliver and Sweet on Polly Oliver situations (think of Disney’s Mulan for an example)

How to write multiple viewpoints/juggling a main cast of more than 4 to 6 characters

How to make readers care about your morally gray hero/anti-hero

On platonic OC and canon character relationships

How to avoid Godmodding in RPs

When it’s cheap to kill off a character

Writing dialogue

Things you shouldn’t do to canon characters

Avoiding purple prose in writing and RPs

Slang resources

Dialogue tips

Websites to chart your story/plot/character relationships

Bonus art masterlist!

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BLESS EVERYONE IN THIS POST.

[nick-and-judy-daily]

@crewefox

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*Gulp* oh boy…

[kulkum]

Hm… I always just think “Hey, this could be fun. I’ll add them.” The rest of the steps above are sort of slipped in as I write. Find that sweet spot that makes the character what they are and build from it. Ah, the process.

[ecstaticasusual]

Angel.

[ecstaticasusual]

[Please don’t tag any ship]

I WANT TO SEE MERCY BEAT GENJI WITH HER STAFF

Part 1 // Part 2 // Part 3 // Part 3.5

[i-dagger-you]

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Sophia shared this Loki + Sylvie cosplay in her ig story and it's so cool. Plus the cosplayer really looks like Sylvie/Sophia! My Sylki heart is so happy~

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PSA: HOW TO TAG YOUR ANTI POSTS

i want to believe most of you mean well, or as well as you can, when you make an anti post. but the tagging is… lagging. you may not know this, but tumblr breaks apart tags that are phrases, and sorts by the words. so if you are using the ship tag in your anti tags as a word of its own, your post is getting sorted right into that ship tag and shoved in the face of all the shippers, who do not want to see that content, and will probably argue with you. here is how you avoid that: 1. use anti(the ship) as a tag, all one word, no spaces, eg: antilokius. do NOT tag as anti lokius (with a space between words) because your post is going straight into the ship tag. 2. do NOT use the actual ship tag to tag an anti post – no rant posts about how you hate lokius, tagged just as lokius. that is extremely rude. 3. if you want to use a tag phrase, like ‘all lokius shippers are insane and need therapy’, then use a character replacement – replace one letter in the ship name with an * or an ! or whatever, eg: lok!us p.s. i would honestly also refrain from just ranting about the ship you hate and then tagging it with the ship you like. most shippers are not going to the tag to see how much you hate some other ship. tl;dr: stop leaving spaces in tags and tagging anti posts with the actual ship name, whether alone or in the middle of phrases anti lokius – getting sent to the ship tags antilokius – not getting sent to ship tags lokius shipper are fetishists – getting sent to the ship tags lok!us shippers are fetishists – not getting sent to the ship tags if you are still confused about how any of this works, feel free to message me and i will try to straighten you out.

[discoscoob]

There is a piece of dialogue in the last episode that bugs me and some might disagree but here’s what I think, the part I am talking about is this:

Sylvie: What was I thinking trusting you? Has this whole thing been a con?

Loki: Really? That’s what you think of me? After all this time.

In particular “after all this time.” All this time? I appreciate that time moves differently in the TVA, however following Loki and Sylvie’s interactions they couldn’t have possibly spent more than 3 days together, and that’s pushing it.

I have no problem with the time frame in which they developed feelings for one another, I know some people think it rushed, however I think through everything they experienced together it only helped strengthen their bond and speed up the development of their feelings, which is why I think it would have made more sense if Loki said:

“Really? That’s what you think of me? After everything we have been through together.” Instead of “after all this time.” because a long 24hrs to 3 days isn’t a lot of time, certainly not enough time to expect someone who never trusted anyone in their life to suddenly start trusting you, where as if he made reference to everything they’ve been through, it would have made more sense. If you can’t build a bond with someone over an extended period of time you can build one over intense shared experiences and teamwork.

[quiche-draws]

<Loki Spoilers in the first two images>

Finally got to doodle some Sylki 💚💚💚💚 I absolutely loved this show and these characters!! Hoping these two reunite eventually and hug (or kiss) it out! Give me a HEA 😭

PLEASE DO NOT REPOST! REBLOG ONLY!

[quiche-draws]

Did some Sylvie practice sketches! She’s quickly become my favorite MCU Phase 4 character 🥰🥰💚💚 (Definitely gonna draw her again in the future hehe)

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[quiche-draws]

Something more self-indulgent >u<

It’s the far-near future, they’re together again and they’re being all gross and romantic now 😝😆💚

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[odins-sonofmischief]

She was in love. She hated him.