my dream as a fanfic writer is for one day, one of my fics to be someones comfort fic. like the fic that they reread when they don't feel good and want to be happy. i want my words to comfort someone one day
There's only a couple of points I wanted to bring attention to before the next update.
Really proud of Mo (naturally) and HT, which I wasn't expecting so much but the boy has made some major growth here.
I wanna start with where we are brought back to the present, after finding out what She Li did to MGS (I can only imagine how hoarse Mo's voice must sound ;n; ). This was a stand out moment for me because HT made a real step here. In this moment he is commiserating with Mo and not putting his own feelings first. How many times has He Tian responded with anger (often at mo himself!) For being a target of She Li. This is also (in my, typically wrong, opinion) not so much an apology of "I'm sorry I wasn't there". Nor was Tian trying to erase what Mo went through; he just wanted to sit with Mo in his pain, to be there in THAT moment- no where else. ( @ sarniewolf made a point about this, so props to them!)
Now for the scene that made every heart bleed out. Mo did more growing, (along with the recent chapters) here we got a glimpse of him making an effort to be understood! It was very honest (and through his wrecked voice) to ask He Tian to believe in him; Mo is admitting a lot of things. A tacit plea of "I had the courage to try to change. Now I'm daring to dream, but I need you there to support me; to steady me." (Ch.346)
Speculating on the art composition is NOT my forte (I hope you don't mind too much Fujoshi ;3;) but I'm trying to pay more attention. One thing is how they are both center and pretty much eye level; like they're totally on the same page and understand each other without question. Another is their particular perspectives; He Tian is not seeing Mo in a vacuum but how Mo exists in the world he was born into. A world of poverty, disrespect, the futility of fighting to find a better life AND Mo's iron will to keep fighting anyways.
Mo in return is no longer seeing the world, he only sees He Tian. Seeing a face showing (probably) the most hurt and bare emotion Mo has ever seen. It's a face that does not lie; if Mo had doubts of HT's motivations then I think that look alone will fix that.
Bonus!
This panel (ch.199) caught my eye. I think it's safe to say when this chapter came out He Tian did NOT fit this description (of presumably Mo's best fit for a partner) but with this most recent chapter? Well he's changed a lot- hopefully only more of this caring, gentle, and understanding side of HT to come!
The comment : TU is the best. Its a masterpiece already. Incomparable. No 1. Nothing, absolutely nothing can replace or top it. Yi/zhan is best. Natural. Best chemistry.
Me : the fuck?
Seriously what the actual fuck??? I cant even--??? How can ppl like that? Ew?
pov : you are Xue Zhengyong come back from heaven rift battle in butterfly town just to see a bleeding stairs and one of your elder is dead beside your unconscious nephew
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