I wanted to try and write for my story Level Up for the theme digital since the characters are trapped into a game world.
Also if there is any improvements I can make with my writing I would like to know, sense I'm trying to find my own writing voice.
Erica slowly opened the door to a desolate bar, she closed the door as she sat down. The bar stools were surprisingly comfortable, she leaned on the bar to take a rest. Where was she? She asked herself, she doesn't recognize anything around her. This bar was the only familiar thing she has come across for the past hour.
She started tapping on the wooden surface of the bar counter, "gettin' a little antsy there buddy?" A voice said as a person sat down next to her. She turned to the voice to see a cowboy. His face was covered by a zorro mask and bandana, Erica scanned the man as he let out his hand.
"No, no thank you" Erica said as she waved his hand away, "so the siren can sing?" The cowboy said as he brought out a bottle of alcohol and a deck of playing cards. "Want to play a game?" He asked. Erica thought for a bit, the guy looked at her as she thought. "No" She said, the guy gave an affirmative nod as a transparent screen in front of her appeared. With the word level and one on it, "you're a smart lady" he said as he grabbed the drink and cards. "Not many get past me." He said as he got up from the stool, tipping his hat at Erica "See you later siren" He said as he walked out of the bar.
"Get back here!" Erica yelled as she ran after the man, she almost lost her balance as the ground in front of the door wasn't there anymore. She turned back and the bar wasn't there anymore, only the door frame was standing. She gripped the door frame as she closed her eyes, even without having a fear of heights, this was mortifying.
Opening her eyes she was being pulled into a train car, she fell onto the ground as the train door closed behind her. Getting up Erica looked up at the person who pulled her into the train, she had blonde hair with visible dark roots and pink streaks. She flinched at a thud sound heard behind her, she turned around in fear as a grotesque face was pressed up against the glass of the train car. "you're new to this world aren't ya?" She said with an annoyed huff, she grabbed something from her jacket pocket.
"Judge, Jury, and Excursioner!" She yelled as Erica grabbed onto a poll and hoisted herself to avoid this girl from hitting her. The train door looked like it was blown away with the area that was once the door looking like it was made of cubes. "And that's how you destroy a rejected player" the girl said as the dust cleared to reveal her holding a massive gavel. The gavel looked like it became blueprints and returned a miniature state. Erica fell from the poll she hoisted herself on hitting her head on the train floor. She put her hand on the back of her head and looked at it, no blood? NO BLOOD!? She got up in a panic and tested it again, still NO BLOOD! Looking up from her hand she saw the other girl looking outside of the train car.
"This coast is clear, come with me newbie" She said gesturing for Erica to follow her.
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