speaking of events from others' pov, i now wonder what the final day would have looked like written from jack's pov.
like, mina's was detailed, but it also was about her own condition, how much she can sense her husband's presence, and his actions then after he appears.
would jack be focusing on his dreadful gut feeling more? his words and separation from quincey when they saw the carriage? would he be searching desperately for van helsing? what brief words did they exchange upon reuniting? would he be fascinated by the unnaturalness of jonathan, and curious about what he'll finally do with that knife he'd been fidgeting with? would he talk more about quincey's dying and how he reacted at seeing the fatal wound?
God the final chapter would have been such a different beast!! Let's assume Jack gets a phonograph to speak into, otherwise he could never record what happened with such detail.
-Jack would mention how tired and cold he is, and yet he and Quincey are relentless at tracking Dracula's coffin, now that it's within sight.
-he would mention the strain the horses feel but they press on
-when they held up their guns, and he caught a glimpse of Van Helsing and Mina, still alive and pointing their guns on the henchmen, and Jack was breath a sigh of relief that he hasn't even realized he was holding in.
-how Quincey flung himself off of the horse immediately after ceasefire, how he and Jonathan had a one track mind that was the epitome of manhood and while Jack kept his Winchester gun steady, his heart was throbbing from the action
- how he and Arthur, despite having not seen each other for days, both moved seamlessly to pressure the henchmen to not attack Quincey and Jonathan. It would have been too late though, and Quincey was bleeding.
-Jack's mind switches to doctor mode. He knows he can't compromise the mission, but the way Quincey is pressing his side to stop the bleeding is worrying. His view is blocked because Jonathan used his insane strength to throw down the coffin on the otherside of the wagon. He can only pray it is treatable.
-maybe a little wishful thinking, he wonders if he can silently communicate to Van Helsing that Quincey is hurt and he will need help stopping the bleeding. It must be treatable, otherwise he will lose another person he loves.
-at that moment, Mina screams. Jack snaps out of his thoughts and demounts from the horse, rushing over past the other henchmen to see Dracula defeated, turning into dust. Quincey stabbed him in the heart with his Bowie knife, and Jonathan beheaded him cleanly with his kukri knife.
- the Romani people seemingly snap out of a haze and begin to leave them alone with an empty coffin. Jack looks up to Van Helsing and their eyes meet, the professor gives him the signal to stay, as his begins to descend from their hideout. He notices Mina stays where she is.
- the Doctors run to each other, Jack trying to explain that Quincey is bleeding to death if they don't do anything about it, and Van Helsing interrupting him saying he saw him get cut down, the blood flowed freely. There was nothing they could do to save him.
- Jack's mind begins to fog over the implication that Quincey will die, and he and Van Helsing rush over once he collapses into Jonathan's arms. He knows he's too late, but suddenly everything happened so fast. All those days they focused on tracking, all those precious memories, and he is the only one who will remember these past few days together
-Jack sees Mina run and hold Quincey's hand ans he lays dying. They all kneel on the ground and Arthur is already crying. As Quincey gives his last words Jack realizes Mina's scar on her forehead is gone. As his best friend leaves this world forever, he took Mina's curse with him. They were free of the devil called Dracula, but why did Quincey have to pay the price?