Hey I’m back and I have a full rough draft of my movie, EDGELIGHT
If you can please give it a read and tell me what you think.
Alestyna sits in a mirror in a beautiful wedding dress with the most depressed face. She is being married off to a person of mutual despise but her back is against the wall for the sake of power consolidation, the merge prize? A greater catalyst crystals and the end of a war.
Warned beforehand by her true love, Daes, that this is a death sentence and that she should run but the only thing strong enough to set her free is a power from the catalyst crystal a plan is hatched to save her life. She is punished for the thought of running away but that sets her resolve.
Daes visits her for one last time to embrace and hatch her escape. They spend this time saying their fair wells and wishes that they could have had that peaceful life. The plan is set, he vows to give her an opening and swear that he will be safe
Before she’s led to her doom, alestyna uses the plan catching all attendants in shock at her action and the catalyst crystal of the joint clans are in her hands, her radiant glowing body stops the room as a crack in the space opens pulling her into the void. As she falls through the void, and even though she looks more powerful than before, she falls crying and alone, not sure if she deserves a new world.
We wake up late in the afternoon, a man Tut wakes up in bed to the orange from a proto hightech window. He grabs his phone and he has 5 messages and 3 of them are late bill alerts the other 2 are his mother reminding him to take meat out the freezer. He gets up and gets dressed for work heading down stairs to grab his lunch and head out into a cramped barely cared for neighborhood that is swarmed with S.H.A.D.E. (Super Humans Against Devesating Events)soldiers that are similar in style but dressed in different attire. Their high tech suits and gear catches the eye, especially Tut who wanted to be like them to have a hand in helping his province rebound from its downfall but was sent to work in the factories making their gear.
After a long shift it's nearly time to go until tut makes an accident that puts his job on the line and in the end after pleading he is given a suspension and sent home. While on his way home thinking about what he is going to do when suddenly a crack in the open and out flies alestyna with the catalyst and once the crystal hits the ground, it shatters sending most of its shards across the world.
Tut tracks down the impact site and once he arrives he finds alestyna in a crater with crystal shards around ground zero of the event, after waking her up she frantically starts to regather the shards until Tut started to help to her dismay and at that moment Tut was overwhelmed with flashes of realizations that was forced on to him, the visions of new dimensions were too powerful for him he couldn't contain his fear of facing the unrecognizable and in the physical world around him, its began to rain granite ore sideways across the earths horizon causing devastation in the city he dreams to protect.
Alestyna catches him and helps him calm down helping him control his powers in that moment. Sirens approach and after finding out that they would be in trouble if they stay and he should run but Tut kept his faith in S.H.A.D.E. praying that he could use the powers for good but once they ran test on Tuts ability all they talked about was how they could use his for infrastructure or a secret soldier, in those moments S.H.A.D.E. said too much, letting it be known that S.H.A.D.E. is the occupying force that robbing Tuts province, he remembers what alestyna tells him and he makes his escape.
After escaping tut goes into hiding and stays hidden in an abandoned messy home in the worst part of town as a manhunt is underway shutting down the city. He doesn't know what to do and he contemplates the unthinkable to spare himself from this fate thats when alestyna finds him again to stop him “if you are brave enough to face that fate into the unknown then imagine using that fearless resolve to stop what is bring you to these ends” Tut agrees to go on this mission with her, she teaches him how to use his powers, he helps her collect all the lost pieces of the catalyst crystal and together they learn how to survive in this new mode of life.
Alestyna teaches tut about the basis of his powers while he teaches her things about the history of Edgelight. Realize a great deal of his issue is the ability to stay calm enough to stay in control of his powers in order to collect the shards
Alestyna picks up on an active shard and realizes its time to act but they ran a risk of running into S.H.A.D.E. but the thought of them getting the shards before them propelled them in action. The crisis kicks in when dealing with the crystal shard, S.H.A.D.E. starts to learn what the crystals truly are fully mobilizing to collect them and fighting Tut along the way
Show down over a particularly dangerous shard that puts Edgelight into crisis danger once S.H.A.D.E. unleashes its energy a city block was put in danger. Tut and alestyna spring into action to get to the shard before anymore damage can be done.
The treasure at the end of the ordeal is won by tut and the shard and adds it to alestyna collection making the catalyst full again, S.H.A.D.E. watches and plots to make a move.
In tuts meditation to find more shards they were ambushed and caught off guard by S.H.A.D.E. the catalyst is stolen along with alestyna who managed to help tut escape. Tut now alone enters a new trial.
Tut realize what's fully at stake. If alestyna is placed in the same situation he was in they were gonna turn her into a soldier and with the semi complete catalyst they would have more than enough to enter a period of world domination. So he begins to train with what he has
While tut is fighting out in the streets to get to Alestyna, he stops to gain more fire power from the shards that were still lost. In S.H.A.D.E. HQ alestyna is being pressured to talk about the catalyst. Feeling like she is being reminded of her home she ran from she becomes really defiant and will not cooperate until they silenced and began to look through her memory on how to use the crystal properly soon all the soldiers became stronger mobilizing for something big.
Platoons of soldiers flood the streets blocking S.H.A.D.E. hq and they are using powers they told the citizens to stay away from and a fight between the helpless citizens and S.H.A.D.E. begins. People are getting hurt until tut steps in with his arsenal where he fights off many soldiers until wolfgang and macintosh appears. It was a hard fight, tut lost most of his arsenal but he came out victorious as he enters his place of business where he was suspended to find a tapped out brain washed alestyna and they being to fight
Tut uses the same method alestyna used to bring him back to reality and after being beaten to a pulp tut manages to break through to alestyna saving her life.
Alestyna and tut teams up and use a team attack alestyna promised to show him once he did something amazing or worth her while and they begin to destroy S.H.A.D.E. HQ tut finds the control panel to all the used and hoarded resources and programs some codes
Commander Brine is still alive along with the most dangerous members of S.H.A.D.E. though they declared themselves victors, that thought faded once dams reopened, food and seeds delivered by drone dropped goods and packages over the city and proof that they do live in a good world/the powers that be were behind the degrading of lives across the province.
A new public service team steps up to the plate for edgelight with Tut on its team to help maintain the catalyst problem that still continues and help open the world to its new source of abundance and security. Even though its been set by a higher power and packed with people that were the problem, tut vows to keep an eye on them all, setting a new stage behind closed doors for…change.
A new era is shown to be formed, though the citizens are weary and timid for the future. Tut makes himself the example to flow through meditation like alestyna showed him to control his mind and imagination.