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祝日 / Permanent Vacation
Alisa U Zemlji Chuda
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Janaina Medeiros
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I'd rather be in outer space 🛸
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occasionally subtle

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YOU ARE THE REASON
"I'm Dorothy Gale from Kansas"
PUT YOUR BEARD IN MY MOUTH

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Sydney & Luca + glances I can't stop thinking about
THE BEAR (2022—) 3.10 | Forever
I don't know if you've done this before but what are some good ways to describe speech?
Ways to Describe Speech
-> feel free to edit and adjust pronouns as you see fit.
His voice was deep like the rumbling of the earth.
She had the voice of a singer, smooth and rich like chocolate.
Their voice reminded him of spring rain.
He often paused in his speaking, like a car radio that had lost signal.
She had a lilt to her voice that made it seem like she was asking a question.
Their voice was monotonous, threatening to put her to sleep with every word.
He couldn't put her voice into words. It was... otherworldly.
Her voice was brittle, as if she were on the verge of tears.
Their voice was authoritative. Their words carried like a loud command.
His voice, unapologetic and unwavering, made her shrink back.
Her voice was barely above a whisper.
Their words were cold with anger.
Other Words to Use to Describe Voice:
Firm
Formal
Frank
Hesitant
Humorous
Passionate
Playful
Adra Pillars in Avowed (Obsidian Entertainment, 2024)
Honkai: Star rail | Boothill
Hey we saw you from across the glade and we really hate your vibe.
all the dialogue tags you'll ever need
said
mutter
groaned
grumbled
clarified
screeched
mumbled
murmured
clarified
scolded
reprimanded
begged
retorted
replied
blurted
confirmed
protested
laughed
exclaimed
disclaimed
agreed
relented
babbled
gushed
chortled
rambled
declared
shrieked
recalled
grunted
concluded
realized
consoled
offered
noted
rasped
spat
whined
cried
proposed
assented
jabbed
sneered
hissed
moaned
demanded
cajoled
insisted
lamented
sneered
glowered
cried
wailed
breathed
ordered
boomed
promised
swore
cursed
gasped
chimed (in)
threatened
warned
questioned
queried
quipped
Dialogue tips that actually work:
You are not writing a movie (ignore this if you are). The reader doesn't need to know every word the characters say for the duration of the story. Less is more.
Dialogue can happen within the prose. "And they awkwardky discussed the weather for five minutes" is way better than actually writing five pages of dialogue about the weather.
Balance your dialogues. Surprise yourself with a monosyllabic answe to a dialogue that's ten sentences long. Don't be afraid of letting your character use half a page for a reply or nothing at all!
Don't write accents phonetically, use slang and colloquialisms if needed.
Comma before "said" and no caps after "!?" unless it's an action tag. Study dialogue punctuation.
Learn the difference between action tags and dialogue tags. Then, use them interchangeably (or none at all).
Don't be afraid to use said. Use said if characters are just saying things, use another word if not. Simple. There's no need to use fancy synonyms unless absolutely necessary.
Not everyone talks the same way so it makes sense for your characters to use certain words more often than others. Think of someone who says "like" to start every sentence or someone who talks really slow. Be creative.
Use prose to slow down the pace during a conversation.
Skip prose to speed up the pace during a conversation.
Would an 8 foot monster guy be too tall? Mc would be about 5'8, lol.
We have poll abilities let’s start discourse. Decide.
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poll results:
i’m so glad i started writing when i was young enough not to care that i was bad otherwise i absolutely would not have persevered long enough to become a good writer
I've been thinking about this a lot recently. There was something really special about being able to write with such reckless abandon when I was 10 years old.
Was it good? God no, of course not. The story didn't make sense, the writing was all over the place, I didn't understand sentence structures, characters were not consistent, there were unexplained loopholes and impossible, not-realistic things everywhere...
But I was writing completely unrestrained by knowledge, rules, and even the idea of what "good" writing was. I didn't worry about not finishing anything, I just wreaked havoc in whatever I felt like doing, patted myself on the back and moved on without cleaning up.
So it wasn't good writing. Not in any measure that we would judge writing by, but it was inspired. It was wild and free and absolutely magical in a way that only someone unburdened by wisdom and convention could actually write.
And I don't know, I just find that really poignant.
I also remember being 13 and posting my writing on Figment back when it was a thing. I got a very kind, and well-articulated review talking about how my plot was completely unrealistic, how this would never ever happen in real life and that I needed to do more research to make a coherent story. And they were right, it was a very valid piece of criticism. I'd probably say the same thing myself at this point.
But I also kind of want to go back in time and grab this person by the arms and say "that's not the point"! This was a story that I wrote with my friend as we giggled about all of these crazy ideas and how they were so freaking cool and we actually wrote it and it turned out even cooler that we thought.
The point was never to make it a good story, or a coherent plot, or have it be grounded in realism or even for it to be someone else to read. The point was for it to exist, for us to go absolutely wild with unrealistic ideas that we would never actually write now that we are much more experienced and knowledgeable writers, because we could and because it was fun.
I have so much more to say, but this is getting long so I'll wrap it up with this: I am so thankful that I got to experience this as a beginner writer without ever receiving criticism (constructive or not), or looking into any writing advice because I feel like it was such an important part of my development as a writer.
Ive always wanted to mess around with animating. Heres a couple of halfbaked experiments that Im REAL happy with for a first try!
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Fallout new vegas just has this… indescribable atmosphere that feels so personal and intimate yet it never loses its absurdity. Like once I walked over a small ridge right as the sun was going down and at the top was a grave with a radio next to it that was quietly playing im so blue and I was just in awe at this beautiful little moment and no more than five minutes later I was jumped by a group of Roman cosplayers and a pack of coyote rattlesnake hybrids at the same time
A sample of haunting and troubling gifs of famous paintings. (Via giphy.com) From the artwork Beauty, by Rino Stefano Tagliafierro.
VAMPIRE THE MASQUERADE: BLOODLINES - SECOND STREET/DINER
DRAGON AGE SERIES (2009-?) dev. Bioware
show, don't tell:
anticipation - bouncing legs - darting eyes - breathing deeply - useless / mindless tasks - eyes on the clock - checking and re-checking
frustration - grumbling - heavy footsteps - hot flush - narrowed eyes - pointing fingers - pacing / stomping
sadness - eyes filling up with tears - blinking quickly - hiccuped breaths - face turned away - red / burning cheeks - short sentences with gulps
happiness - smiling / cheeks hurting - animated - chest hurts from laughing - rapid movements - eye contact - quick speaking
boredom - complaining - sighing - grumbling - pacing - leg bouncing - picking at nails
fear - quick heartbeat - shaking / clammy hands - pinching self - tuck away - closing eyes - clenched hands
disappointment - no eye contact - hard swallow - clenched hands - tears, occasionally - mhm-hmm
tiredness - spacing out - eyes closing - nodding head absently - long sighs - no eye contact - grim smile
confidence - prolonged eye contact - appreciates instead of apologizing - active listening - shoulders back - micro reactions