Since I can't seem to post my comment on AO3 as it's considered a spam - dunno why, here it is:
You know what's coming into mind, reading 'Unteachable' in a whole and the last chapter? The faint possibilty of CC wanting WSW to top him eventually. I don't know if it's where you are planning to head, but there is potential here, just hear me out! As much as WSW is a natural in sex — let's be honest, this young man is clearly both curious and sets on breaking CC without knowing he's actually doing it already —, CC is still the one in control, right? A control he is slighty beginning to lose, in some ways. But what if, at some point, by 'teaching' WSW, by molding him into the perfect sex partner he could ever ask for (putting all feelings aside as story unfolds) or maybe ever dreamed to have... what if, at some point, he was starting to wondering about what it could to have him in a different way, and what could WSW be able to do to him... topping him? Maybe even proposing WSW to try, even before the idea reaches WSW's mind, or accepting right away if WSW lets the idea slips one day because CC would have already thought about that, or even by having a WSW doing it maybe once and then, satisfied, clearly not asking for it a second time... maybe? and then having a CC enjoying way much more than expected... losing control over the last part of him, while still monitoring everything — as he does since the beginning — and being the one, in the end, demanding, asking for it, sometimes? How would it be? How would it be to have a (unexpected) reverse CC/WSW, pulling and pushing the rope of control as one starts to be more confident in himself, and the other one losening a bit? Just an idea.
Anyway, I really like the way you write and use words to convey both emotions and 'action' and put a steady pace, keeping everyone on their toes as the story goes, while everything being smooth! I enjoy the fact that we can see some same patterns from a story to another (of yours), as wording may differ, but characters keep some features in behaviors, which is really nice. Words may be a bit repetitive sometimes...? but it feels familiar at the same time. I read almost all of your works in one go, so now, I'm in the same boat as everyone: waiting for updates. I'll try to comment as much as I can every updates, I know how it's important for a writer to get some feedbacks! Thank you for all these stories you brought to us. And as for 'Unteachable', I can't wait to see how it goes for CC and WSW! I'm ready for whatever happens!
Omg that's such a nice message.
I truly love it when others go in the same Rabbithole for characteristic and psychology 😊
Your ideas are very good and logical.
I never thought about it that way, tbh for me CC will always be the top. He bottoming? Hm no sorry not in my storys. But rlly your text let me think about it more than ever.
Ty for your kind words. I try do spice things up and change enought that the fics arent the same too much.
I'm afraid at one point everyone who writes, writes in the same style.
Really really Thank you! For your kind words, for reading and your comments you leave!☺️
Update is on the way actually 🤭😁
