#chapter 4 update

[fir-fireweed]

Y’all.

I just hit 50k words on chapter 4. That’s the same as chapters 1 and 2 COMBINED.

I… I’m not done yet. 😳

Between all the choices, ROs and attunements, the branching is INSANE.

Send help.

Translation: send wine and fuzzy blankets. 🙏🏻🍷

[thelonelyshore-if]

hey, I don’t know if someone else has pointed these out already, but I noticed a couple small issues with the “build a character” feature (specifically for skipping to chapter three, I don’t know if chapter four is the same way). Firstly, there’s no way to select eye color during the character creation, so where the eye color would normally be it just says “unknown” (both in the character profile and dialogue). And secondly, even though I made my mc nonbinary, the option to tell Beck that they were also nb/genderfluid/etc didn’t show up for some reason, just the general queer option. Maybe you already know about those, but I figured I’d mention it just in case.

While I’m here, I also wanna say that the lonely shore has very quickly become my favorite interactive fiction I’ve played. Your writing is anmazing and the “voicemail” scene genuinely gave me chills the first time I played. Very very excited to see what comes next :)

thank you so much for reporting these!!! the character builder my beloathed genuinely and fr. i love including it because i think it's helpful but remembering all of the variables needed is becoming........Challenging.

eyes are pretty basic tho lmao my bad!!

these should, in theory, be fixed <3

and awww thank you so much!! i'm super touched to hear that. i really love this story and getting the chance to share it with everyone has been incredible, and I also can't wait for what is to come!!

[th3p0rtalmaker]

Incarnate Chap. 4 Update:

4,036 Words

19 Pages

I think I've gotten the "interim scene" mostly figured out. Next big scene is Adira's glorious info-dumping about her Tundra Walker heritage and some expanded history of the Moonstone!

Which may or may not be pushed back to chapter 5, so that I can go ahead and post a drastically short (and extremely juicy) chapter 4...

We shall see. 😈

[cylawsonwrites]

Chapter 4 Partial Update!

I decided to wait til now, but here it is! The partial update to Chapter 4! I do apologize if the RO scenes aren’t as good as they could be, I’m still a bit rusty on writing them and they’ll progressively get better :)

https://dashingdon.com/play/bottlecaprabbitgames/mind-games-trepidation/mygame/

[jaelafish]

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Chapters: 4/? Fandom: My Hero Academia, Boku no Hero Academia, mha, BnHA Rating: Teen And Up Audiences Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings Relationships: Dad for one - Relationship, dad might - Relationship Characters: Midoriya Izuku, Yagi Toshinori | All Might, AFO, All For One - Character Additional Tags: dad for one, All for One is Izuku's father, Dad Might, age change Summary:

After Izuku gets hit by a quirk that ages him up, he ends up looking eeriely similar to his father, All For One. Unsure of what to do, Izuku reaches out to All Might for help only to find All Might has mistaken him for his archnemesis and isn't interested in talking to him as much as trying to kill him.

CHAPTER 4 UPDATE

[skinsharpenedteeth]

An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works

Chapters: 4/? Fandom: Roswell New Mexico (TV 2019) Rating: Explicit Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply Relationships: Michael Guerin/Alex Manes, Michael Guerin/Original Male Character(s), Michael Guerin/Original Female Character(s) Characters: Michael Guerin, Alex Manes, Original Male Character(s), Original Female Character(s), Rosa Ortecho, Kyle Valenti, Isabel Evans, Maria DeLuca, Jesse Manes, Max Evans, Liz Ortecho Additional Tags: Internalized Homophobia, Past Child Abuse, Other Additional Tags to Be Added, Alternate Universe - Prostitution, Alternate Universe, Explicit Sexual Content, Anal Sex, Anal Fingering, sex gift baskets, Blow Jobs, Cock Warming, 69 (Sex Position), Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder - PTSD, Shower Sex, Oral Sex, Possessive Behavior, Light BDSM, Angst, Smut, Fluff, I'm Bad At Tagging, Panic Attacks, Bisexual Michael Guerin, Canon Disabled Character, Homophobic Language, Jesse Manes is His Own Warning Summary:

Alex was just trying to get a job outside of Roswell. He'd served his tours, gotten his leg blown off, and was ready to rest for a while in the "big city" while he got used to civilian life again. But the universe is funny like that and Michael Guerin is nothing if not her play thing. For the first time, Alex feels himself falling desperately for a this near stranger faster than he thought possible. But the more he finds out about him, the more he wonders if he just traded one war for another.

Updated the summary and I may update it again. I'm trying, I really am. Read the tags. Updates every 2 weeks unless otherwise noted.

[yuki-rose-20]

I have unfortunate news. I was going to be posting chapter 4 tomorrow but somehow, I’ve lost the draft and will be needing to write the whole chapter again. I don’t know when I’ll be able to get it typed up and posted since I need to write the draft again.

Please bare with me whilst I do this.

Artist- Akakumu43

[jklpopcorn]

Perfection.