I’m gonna say this now, none of the stuff that happens in here is actually real. Like the name implies, it’s all just a bad dream, but still it’s way darker than my usual stuff so I don’t blame you if you don’t read it. I wrote this in under an hour so it’s definitely really rough, but I’m super tired and I just want to have it posted and out of the way.
TW/CW: hard vore, fatal vore (it’s all a dream, but still)
If Ethan isn’t bothered by it, why should Argus be?
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The small human trapped in his maw doesn't fight back when Argus begins to bite down over his unprotected stomach. He doesn't scream. He doesn't tell him to stop. He doesn't even whimper as razor sharp teeth easily cut through skin.
Warm, heady blood pools inside Argus mouth as he bites down. He hasn't tasted it in so, so long. Too long. The human- Ethan, Argus knows his name is Ethan- doesn't flinch as a tongue longer than his entire body pokes and prods at his mangled mess of a torso, just lightly pets it. Something screeches in his mind that this is wrong, that he shouldn't be doing this, but he ignores it to instead let Ethan fall forward out of his mouth.
When he presses his closed mouth against the bloodied torso the only response he gets is Ethan softly running his hands along Argus' face. Whispering that Argus is so good, and that he's so, so proud of him. It soothes the doubts in Argus' mind, if Ethan isn't bothered by it, why should he be?
Not in the mood to fake being human, Argus let's several more rows of sharpened teeth slide in behind his first set. He opens his mouth to let his tongue snake forward and out of his mouth, curling around Ethan. The blood lazily oozing out of the wounds on Ethan's chest has begun to slightly cool, but the taste, thankfully, hasn't been affected.
When Argus has Ethan's legs inside his mouth he bites down. Hard. Bones crunch and snap as more blood fills his mouth. Once again Ethan doesn't stop him, just continues whispering sweet nothings as he begins to press soft kisses into Argus' cheeks. Argus purrs around trapped legs.
With a tilt of his head Argus sends Ethan completely into his mouth, feeling his teeth rake across Ethan's back. A satisfied smile carves itself into Argus' face as he feels Ethan start to sag against his teeth. Gravity causing his bottom rows to start to cut into his prey's back.
Faintly, Argus hears Ethan's continuous mumblings, slightly strained from the pain he's undoubtedly feeling, but still continuing on even as Argus starts to snap his maw closed. More bones creak and start to crack as his mouth closes further and further. Argus snaps his mouth shut entirely.
Ethan goes completely limp.
When Argus let's the mangled body slide out onto his palm it's just a mess of blood and bones. There's no sign of his friend in the gore. Argus doesn't feel disgusted looking at, something tells him he's supposed to.
He pulls Ethan back into his mouth. Sucking on him for a moment before swallowing him down without further thought.
Ethan is dead.
Argus wakes with a strangled scream.
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Okay! So, that was dark. I might write a second part with Ethan comforting and reassuring Argus, but right now I just really wanna sleep.
Would anyone be willing to beta read something for me?
I wrote something for a creative writing class and whenever I ask people to help me revise it they only skim the writing. I KNOW there's errors in it and I'd be really appreciative if someone could help me find them.
Trigger warnings for what the story contains- violence, blood, frequent mentions of death, and swearing
I finished my short story for my creative writing class (it's going to be published in my school's anthology!!) And I am LIVING!! I've never really finished a story and felt satisfied with it, but I'm so proud of my little story. Is this what writing something good feels like??
I remember once I had these ocs (back when I was in like 4th or 5th grade). One of them was this girl's shoulder angel and she had the biggest crush on her person. Long story short, the shoulder angel's (I think her name was Chris or something) wing got really hurt and when her person (I think her name was Emily?) Found out and she panicked. Chris stopped leaving at the end of the day because Emily asked her not to and then they both fell in love the end. (I have art of them somewhere and I'm going to go find it)
Hey look, it's my slime child Wyatt. The outfit is sort of a work in progress because I'm not sure if I like the one they have right now. Whatever it ends up being will definitely have a hoodie tho because Wyatt likes to wear them for friends who don't want to be eaten. Also, yes, ik their left arm is fucked up. Anyways, here, have Wyatt's temporary ref sheet
