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Better: "Her eyes were the kind of blue that makes you forget storms exist."

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Bad: "Her eyes were as blue as the ocean."
Better: "Her eyes were the kind of blue that makes you forget storms exist."
Melizabeth.
There is a concept that I love to work with when I write fanfictions and/or play with the idea of cursed lovers in a similar situation Meliodas and Elizabeth have, and I feel like that detail might add just a little another layer to the story (and their trauma).
In the case of Elizabeth and Meliodas, it would take the form of a natural way to break the curse. When I say natural, I mean not by using offensive magic against the curses, like they did in the series. Usually, it takes the form of a task, something to bring to the god you've pissed off, a set of actions to earn forgiveness or something like this.
But I say, we make them suffer.
I like my stories and fanfictions salty.
And I don't care if I go against canon. I'm writing this. I'm captain here.
Elizabeth wasn't cursed to love Meliodas. It's a test her mother set out to break the curse. If she falls in love, the curse goes on. If she doesn't, it breaks.
Meliodas wasn't cursed to indefinitely love Elizabeth. It's a test his father set out to break the curse. If he stays in love, the curse goes on. If he falls out, the curse breaks.
The supreme deity probably thought that a different background would make her daughter "see sense," but Elizabeth keeps falling in love with Meliodas no matter what her life looked like before, because he's a lovable goof ball with too much love to give.
The Demon King probably thought that the pain her deaths brought him would eventually make him fall out of love because it would be the most effective way to make the pain stop. But Meliodas can't stop loving her. Even without his emotions, he loves her because the joy she brings to him is worth every bit of pain he feels because of the curse.
That would make their story so much more beautiful because not only would it strengthen their bond, but it would also make a perfect example of: "When you love someone, you're by their sides for the laughters, the 3 a.m panick attacks and the sobbing messes."
Bonus points if good/original representation of magic and/or minorities (queer, neurodivergent, dys, indigenous...).
Heya people (especially people who make OCs and want moots!)
I am looking for somebody who could be my moot and create OCs with me (or something like that)
Or in a more random way of explaining this, i'm looking for a person/people who could be my online friend or moot, and create OCs with me if you are interested!
There is really no limits for my side and i'd be happy too if the OCs would be fandom OCs (if that sounds interesting you can go to my profile and go look at my pinned post!)
We can always ofc just yap and stuff, im happy with that too! And you can be my moot eather way (if you want)
But i really feel like creating OCs with a friendAnd i'd love making OCs together that are shipped together too:D
Anyways idk what else to say so you can comment or dm me straight away and we can yap about it and make ideas:3
Hello! I'm trying to create an OC for a project I'm in. In your opinion, how do you develop a good character, backstory, personality, etc.?
How do you expand upon the OCs you already have made in the past?
Make 'em flawed. Make 'em unlikeable a little bit. Make 'em awkward and impatient and react poorly in some situations. Give 'em fears and selfish wants and desires.
Make 'em human.*
*In the behavioral sense, not necessarily species-wise. I don't know what your project is, or what species your oc will be.
Can't chat, chat, I'm cooking something reaaaaall good with @no-one-offical, been so long ever since I've made ocs for an original story it's kinda surreal. Watch out for toxic found family. Most fun I've had all year. This is actually so healing and stimulating chat the preteen inside me is healed and satisfied and so so happy 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 I've almost forgotten the joy of making original OCS and writing. All this effort... For some nullverse family lore... Dis boutta be good. Considering making an rp account specifically for this so I don't flood my main...idk AAAAAHHHHHHHH I CANNOT BE CHALANT ABOUT THIS IT'S SO COOL EHEHHEHEHEEHEEH
✨NEW WRITEBLR TAG GAME JUST DROPPED✨
If you're struggling with breathing life into your OC's, try this funny yet stupidly simple trick/writeblr tag game I just came up with. I call it the 'Roast Your OCS and Make It Into a Title' tag game. 🤣
So, we've all heard of fictional character archetypes and stereotypes that are often present in fiction, right? We all know it's not good to have shallow, surface level characters that have no complexity or nuance to their personalities, because real life humans contain multitudes, contradictions, and are in general very complicated beings.
Throw all that shit out for this exercise and toss it into the trash! 🗑️ In this tag game, we're gonna be reducing all our OC's to the most basic, mundane, stereotypical/archetypal renditions of themselves and making it Fit Into a Title!
Here's an example of my main character + his besties from my Science Fantasy WIP:
Cold and Stoic Pretty Boy Loaner With Social Anxiety and Unhealed Trauma Tries to Save His Sister
Disowned Goth Femme Fatale With Bitchy Yet Gentle Attitude Is Socially Neglected and Cries A Lot
Occasionally Serious Himbo City Boy Cop Tries and Fails to Fight Crime With Therapy and Rehabilitation
Snobby Know-It-All Imperial Man Who Somehow Has Both A Superiority and Inferiority Complex
Protective Amazonian Lesbian Sadist Who Will Absolutely Step On You and Ruin Your Life Forever
Gifted Slutty Bisexual Boy Genius Is Hiding a Dark Secret and Is Very Zesty (Rude) About It
For this tag game I'm gonna be tagging A LOT of people but mainly people who've interacted with me recently. Free to reblog if you see this on your dash, even if you're not tagged. I find this shit HILARIOUS and I would love to see what everyone manages to come up with! No pressure at all if you don't wanna participate, this is all just for fun. ❤️😊
@in-heavens-trenches @revenantlore @cupandquillcafe @fattybattysblog @eames-with-a-rose
@gailynovelry @kestalsblog @dru-reads-writeblr @druidx @indigowriting
@diabolical-blue @writercoracain @tildeathiwillwrite @craig-h-stuart @illarian-rambling
@coarsely @rjcopeseethemald @jackiezenauthor @squarebracket-trickster @kaylinalexanderbooks
@pen-of-roses @flock-from-the-void @sarandipitywrites @buffythevampirelover @imsaanvikhanna
@songsofsomnia @shadow-of-tea-and-tea @owlsandwich @faeriecinna @hauntedluminarybbq
@sarahlizziewrites @ayzrules @rickie-the-storyteller @janec23
If you want some extra help you can also look up character stereotypes/archetypes like I did. There's hundreds of blog posts about this topic but here's some helpful links so you can judge/roast your OC's to your heart's content:
Build familiar, yet unique characters through Archetypes
People are absolutely free to ask me whatever but I'm afraid I'm not one for oc ask games...
You'd think that I, the creator of the ocs, would know everything about my little guys, but no. They just kinda spawn in the corner of the room (my brain) and I need to get to know them, but not all of them are easy to approach.