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I don’t know what to call this au honestly. It’s more of a prediction of when stuff happens.

But uhhhh yeah vessel here isn’t me it’s a fictional player I wouldn’t do ts

“Oh noes Kris and Susie started fighting after I rage baited them golly gee” fucken’ loser

#digital art #deltarune #vessel deltarune #kris dreemurr #susie deltarune #deltarune fanart #original comic #the roaring knight #I liked working on this one #I think the character writing is strong #gimme feedback

Info dumping random shit abt the Spider-Man/Peter Parker I'm writing, deeper lore stuff is near the end 🩷✨️🌈👬

- He eats most stuff with his hands to feel closer to his food, but it also kinda backfires cause saucy or crumbly fingers is the closest thing to the 9th layer of hell for him so... win some lose some idk

-He wears de-magnifying glasses. His eyes work a little too well, so things up close are too magnified, so he has special glasses made so he doesn't have to constantly strain his eyes into focusing properly.

This also means that when he doesn't wear them for too long and forces his eyes to focus, he will get splitting migranes.

- Peter early in the friendship uses Wade's kitchen to cook and bake. It gives them both an excuse to see each other, and Wade buys more real food. It's kinda giving a symbiotic relationship. They enjoy eachothers company plenty but look for excuses to see eachother cause they're both too small brained or neurotic to just say "I really like being with you, let's hang."

- Peter probably has a hard time watching hero movies or movies where there's towns/cities under attack cause all he can think about is what would happen if it happened to New York. He physically cannot relax until he makes a plan for it

- Deffo has an "I'm special" complex but isn't an asshole about it (mooostly 🤧)

- He made a solem promise to himself never to use his powers outside of the Spidey suit, which lasted all of a week before he was ceiling crawling and using webs to get snacks from the cupboards

- Always calls Tony Stark "Mr. Stark" and "Sir" to his face but in like a pathetic little act of defiance kinda way

🌈 these ideas are less fleshed out and sometimes contradictory and mostly word vom but still fun to read 🌈

Peter is basically the KING of compartmentalization.

For a while he knew what spiderman was to him but more often finds himself having to fit the mold that people are projecting onto him. He's loosing his grip on spiderman. He also has a morality complex where his every action feels dictated by "WWS-MD?" even in his own privacy and life choices.

He's just having trouble keeping Peter and Spiderman in one body and feels like he's 3 people. He's Peter, He's Spiderman, and he's some miscellaneous grey middle man that doesn't fit into either life.

Maybe this third option is the manifestation of public opinion, or maybe it's the urge retreat from his life. Whatever it is, it haunts him.

The mental separation from Spider-Man and Peter Parker gets so intense that

Early into their dating, Peter is very adamant that they don't "do" anything together relationship wise when he's Spider-Man. Peter compartmentalizes to the point where Spidey is basically another person. Peter Parker is in a relationship with Wade Wilson/Deadpool. Spider-Man is not.

DP acts fine with this until he blows up on Peter because it's unfair that he only gets half of him. No matter how much mental gymnastics and logic Peter uses, he is still Spider-Man and it's unfair that Wade is only getting 50% of who and what he loves.

Wade: "I feel like a third wheel in a 2 person relationship..." <-- that's something I see him saying/feeling

I like the idea that Peter Parker essentially split himself into 3 people. Peter/Spidey/Unidentified Third Thing, and he tries way too hard to split his one life into these 3 categories. It stretches way beyond being multi faceted, have yall heard of the movie "The Substance"? It's sorta like that

I go back n forth on "does he know what spiderman is or doesn't he." But it could also just depend on where he is in the ""story""

Like, if it were season 1, he's locked into Spiderman and then season 3 he looses his grip or hell even vice versa

Anyway that's all for now, kisses <3

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RSC Session

AN: Longer one this time! Idk where I was going with this, but y'all should really read the fic in my head because it fits there lol. Feedback, comments, likes, and reblogs are much appreciated, as always! Angel xxx

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Her entire body ached. She could feel a twinge from her protesting muscles, every time she shifted in the chair. Lillian had managed to slip out of the bonds that kept her hands tied, and was now working on removing the ones wrapping her boots to the legs of the chair. Glancing around, she spotted some of her fellow cadets, riders that were in her Tail section, as well as members of other sections. Counting quickly, Lillian roughly estimated there were about 10 to 13 riders in total, all tied to chairs, and all with varying bruises and injuries on them.

Seimra? Are you there?

I’m here…

Did you know about this?

No. Believe me, your Wingleader will be providing you with answers or I’ll roast him. But you must escape first.

Fuck. Shit, ok, yeah. Escape… I can do that.

Lillian cut the bond off, glancing around the room again. “Has anyone else managed to escape their bonds?” She whispered, blinking quickly so that her eyes could adjust to the darkness. “If not, I’ll make my way through the room clock-wise. We need to get out of here.”

About five of the riders showed they had freed themselves from the bonds, but the rest were either half-way done, exhausted or unconscious.

Though Lillian was beginning to create a plan, it hinged on the fact that everyone was free and awake. Those that were unconscious were going to have to be woken up, lest they become an unnecessary burden during the escape.

“Everyone pair up. If you don’t have a partner, come to me.” Lillian ordered quietly, then began to slowly make her way to the unconscious riders. Shaking them awake one by one, she repeated her orders of escaping and pairing up. Soon, the riders were paired up, and ready to go. “Ok, good. Now to open this—“

Before she could finish, the door was suddenly slammed open and riders dressed in all black walked in. Commander Panchek entered behind them. Glancing around the room, he noted Lillian’s stance in front of all the other riders, as if she could protect them from whatever was about to happen next. “Good, you’ve all managed to escape your bonds. Section Leader Essan, I must say I’m impressed. You’ve managed to create a functioning group of riders, despite the circumstances. An exemplary show of leadership.” With a wave of his hand, the entire group of second-year cadets was dismissed. Filing out of the room, they slowly trudged towards the Healer’s Quadrant, with Lillian leading the way.

Once they entered, a swarm of healers came towards them, muttering and swearing as they took note of all the injuries. Lillian was led to a bed, where she was then examined within an inch of her life. Halfway through the exam, Bodhi had come to see her, concern visibly etched on his face.

“Are you alright?” He murmured, gently reaching out to tuck a strand of hair behind her ear. “Gods, I can’t believe they’re allowed to do this. I’m gonna fucking kill Xaden for not warning us about this.” He swore, when the healer began to read out the list of injuries Lillian had sustained. The blonde simply sat on the bed, nodding along, exhausted from the day’s events. All she wanted to do was sleep, and Bodhi’s shoulder was just so comfortable…

Bodhi glanced briefly to Lillian, noting how her eyes kept fluttering shut as she leaned on his shoulder. He nodded at the healer’s instructions of absolute bed rest, and placed the multitude of salves and creams Lillian would have to use, on the bed table. Mumbling a quick ‘thank you’ to the healer, he gently moved the girl’s head, laying her down on the bed and tucking her in.

And as usual, please check out my other fics with Bodhi and Lillian!

I told you so, I was bored, Measurement help and Oops?