The following is a short abstract of my unpublished novella: The Impundulu Watch: The Seduction.
By the time they reached the upper campus, the drizzle had thickened into proper rain again. They hurried along wet stone paths between historic buildings, past dripping palm trees and students huddled under hoods. The African Studies library was a quiet sanctuary of tall wooden shelves, dim reading lamps, and the comforting smell of old paper and damp stone. Rain pattered steadily against the high arched windows overlooking the mountain.
Zanele Mthembu was waiting at a corner table in the restricted folklore section, exactly as Jaco had arranged via a frantic early-morning text. Late twenties, sharp intelligent eyes, neat braids pulled back with a colourful headscarf, she wore a simple white blouse tucked into dark jeans — professional but grounded. A stack of old books and notebooks lay open in front of her. She looked up as they approached, her gaze locking immediately on Juan’s blood-streaked appearance and the wild tension in his green eyes.
“You must be Juan,” she said quietly, voice calm but edged with something heavier. “Jaco told me enough to know this isn’t a normal morning. Sit. Quickly. Before someone notices you look like you’ve been through a slaughterhouse.”
Juan slid into the chair opposite her, his toned legs brushing the table leg. The enclosed feeling of the narrow stacks pressed in — shelves looming on both sides like walls closing tighter. His breath hitched slightly. “Ek… I don’t know where to start. Last night. The storm. There was a girl in my flat. Dead. Throat torn open like… like something ripped her apart. And I woke up with her blood all over me. Blackout. I don’t remember doing it. But the watch… it was ticking.”
He pulled the silver pocket watch from his pocket and placed it on the table. The moment it touched the wood, the crimson feather visible through the scratched glass pulsed once, faintly, like a sluggish heartbeat. A faint ozone scent — lightning and copper — rose from it.
Zanele’s eyes widened. She didn’t touch it at first, just leaned closer, studying the feather. “Impundulu,” she whispered, the word heavy with recognition. “The Lightning Bird. My grandmother spoke of it when I was small. A witch’s familiar. Not just any spirit — one that drinks blood and rides the storms. It can look like a huge black-and-white bird with talons that slice through bone like paper. But it can also take the shape of a man… a beautiful man, they say. Smooth dark skin, eyes like storm clouds. It seduces. It makes you want to give it what it wants.”
Juan’s green eyes flicked up to meet hers. “Seduce? What the hell does that mean?”
Zanele glanced around the quiet library before continuing, voice low. “In the old stories, the Impundulu binds itself to a bloodline through a pact. Usually passed mother to daughter, but pacts can be twisted. It demands dues — blood, mostly. The more it feeds, the stronger the bond. And when it rides someone… blackouts, cravings, voices in your head. Sometimes pleasure mixed with the horror, because it knows how to make the host feel… wanted. Needed.”
She reached out carefully and opened the watch fully. The crimson feather inside fluttered as if stirred by an invisible wind. “This token. It’s the binding object. Whoever holds it or carries its blood is tied to the bird. Your grandfather… did he ever speak of a sangoma? Of making a deal for the farm’s survival?”
Juan shook his head, but a cold spike of memory stabbed behind his eyes — Oupa’s voice on the phone, thin and cruel: Jy het hom gehelp daai nag…
Before he could answer, the watch’s ticking grew louder in the silence of the stacks. Juan’s vision blurred. The tight space between the shelves suddenly felt suffocating — walls of books pressing in, air thick and warm. His heart hammered. He gripped the edge of the table, knuckles whitening, his slender toned arms rigid.
It wasn’t total darkness this time. Flashes. Warm blood flooding his mouth, the taste rich and metallic. Wings battering inside his chest, desperate to break free. A velvet voice whispering against his ear, hot breath carrying the crackle of static: You called me again last night, Juan. Your fear tastes sweet… but your hunger is sweeter.
He came to with Zanele’s hand on his wrist, steadying him. His brown hair was damp with fresh sweat, pushed back messily from his sharp, angular face. A thin trickle of blood — his own, from biting his tongue — ran from the corner of his mouth. Jaco was half-standing, ready to catch him.
“Easy, boet,” Jaco muttered. “Jy’s hier. Jy’s okay.”
Zanele’s expression had hardened into something between fear and resolve. “That was it, wasn’t it? The bird testing the bond. Juan… this isn’t madness. This is a living curse. Your family owes a debt, and the Impundulu has come to collect. The storms are when it’s strongest — when it can ride you easiest.”
Juan wiped the blood from his lip with the back of his hand, green eyes haunted. “Then how do I stop it? Before more people die?”
Zanele opened her mouth to answer — but her phone buzzed sharply on the table. She glanced at the screen, and her face drained of colour.
“Second body found drained near Observatory — lightning-shaped burns. Throat shredded. Police treating as possible ritual killing.”
She turned the screen toward Juan. The photo showed a jogger’s body on wet pavement, eviscerated wounds still glistening, lightning burns forming perfect wing patterns across the pale torso.
Zanele looked up, eyes locking on Juan’s arms where his sleeves had ridden up.
Fresh, faint lightning-shaped burns had appeared on his own wrists — thin, red, tingling lines that hadn’t been there ten minutes ago.
Her voice dropped to a whisper. “This mark… it’s the same as the one on your arms right now.”
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Here is a concise blurb for the story above.
The storm doesn’t just rage outside. It lives inside Juan Botha’s veins.
A family curse. A seductive entity from Xhosa folklore that feeds on blood and broken promises. A handsome young Afrikaner fighting to remember — and forget — the night he helped kill his own parents.
Impundulu’s Watch is the first pulse-pounding chapter in a dark South African horror series where possession feels like seduction, and breaking free may mean becoming the monster.