#re write

[doodlemothy]

My NATM 3 ending re-write

OK SO I AM ALWAYS A LITTLE PISSED ABOUT THE ENDING OF THE THIRD MOVIE BEING SO CLOSE TO STICKING THE LANDING AND THEN JUST SCREWING IT ALL OVER SO HERE

First off Ahk should have had his parents come back with him to the museum of natural history (I am a firm believer that this is the museum that should come to life, bc not only are they used to it but it’s also the most controlled one w/ Larry)

Also, Lancelot should’ve come back. It would’ve been a great ending for his story, especially since he was having an identity crisis over not being real, it would’ve really helped him grow

Nicky should have gotten a job at the museum (yes we are taking this idea from the fourth movie, but still pretending that it never happened) it’s clear that Larry should never have stayed at the museum. It’s not his calling, he still loves his museum family, but he thrived with his company. However it most definitely is Nicky’s (not to mention that he can still work on his music career while holding a job at the museum)

McPhee fully reinstates the night program with Nicky as the head and him watching it over to make sure things don’t go wrong (it’s a great attraction to bring people into the museum and a good thing for the museum exhibits to do win, win)

IF ANYONE SHOULDVE GOTTEN A KISS IT SHOULDVE BEEN JED AND OCT I REST MY CASE

Larry and Dexter shouldn’t have kissed they can still have like a cute moment like “hey I know we were hard on each other, but i genuinely care about you”

(also I know this is more so a fourth movie thing, but let’s not let McPhee forget about the exhibits coming to life; he honestly should’ve known in the first movie, and then had Larry’s job be more so making sure the exhibits don’t make a mess and get back to their positions)

[pokipuke]

im really proud of the redesings :3

[bluesandbarebones]

Fallow

In darkness I have planted myself in an untended garden. I have covered myself with the rich black soil of contemplation and regret. Now I wait for the warmth of acceptance, for the rain of forgiveness. It is not enough that I have absorbed the underground waters of sorrow. It is not enough that I have swelled and softened with recompense. I have broken down my walls of protection. I have anchored myself in truth and sent down roots through fallow ground— unseen, unheard hours of penitence. Will you come and tend the place where I have fallen? Will you cast aside these thorny vines lying above me? Alone, I choke in the gloom that threatens to overshadow. I have planted myself in an untended garden, too dark, too deep.  

[dawningrobes]

idk if too many people care about Respawn (Damian’s kind of brother that Ra’s made to do evil science experiments on) but I kind of want to like. Re-write his character. Like he’s kind of cool in concept.

First off I feel like Ra’s doesn’t have to be ridiculously evil for his existence to be justified. I like the Al Ghul’s being more morally gray than downright evil, so I’d adjust Respawn’s origin.

Ra’s is already interested in immortality. Let’s say he took Slade’s DNA to re-grow organs because Slade Wilson is KNOWN to have regenerative abilities. And then maybe he can add some al Ghul genes in the mix for the simple reason of matching blood types. Except the regeneration worked overtime and now oops! New baby.

So Ra’s is like well I guess we can have another assassin in the League, whatever. But ppl start looking at Respawn funny cause well, dude is starting to look a little too much like Damian if he bleached his hair Snow White.

Maybe Talia even finds out this time and is understandably a little disturbed by him (she did not agree to having an experiment son with Slade Wilson, eugh). So while Respawn has a significantly better childhood here there’s still a level of isolation that makes him leave the League in search of his genetic father.

He can still be bitter about Damian (I imagine Ra’s, Talia, and other acolytes under them talk about Damian much better than they talk about him). And I think at the point Damian generally meets Respawn he’s develops his morality enough to feel somewhat responsible for sorting out a relationship with a brother/mistake of his grandfather’s.

[moonyartandwriting]

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Congratulations! You Are Now the Main Character! - A Sans X Reader and Papyrus X Reader. Isekai, soulmate AU. Skeleton AUs are Undertale, Underswap, Underfell, Horrortale, and Fellswap Gold. Contains lots of swearing, existential dread, (mild) body horror, and discussions of extreme violence

My Little Sun - Grillby X (Fem and Vampire) Reader. Strangers(?) to Lovers. Contains swearing, depictions of violence, and alcohol consumption

House Dogs - Papyrus X (Shapeshifter) Reader. Strangers to friends to lovers, found family. Skeleton AUs are Undertale, Underswap, Underfell, Horrortale, Swapfell Red, Fellswap Gold, Swapfell Purple, Outertale, and Underlust. Contains swearing, body horror, discussions of medical trauma/abuse, and mild violence

My Sally Face Drabbles - Place where I put my Sally Face (mostly Salvis) drabbles. No warnings currently :)

My Undertale One-offs - Series of both my Undertale one-shots and drabbles. Has both Reader inserts and OC main characters. Warnings vary

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10 Skeletons, 1 Universe - Sans X Arden Finch (OC) and Papyrus X Arden Finch (OC). Strangers to friends to lovers. Skeleton AUs are Undertale, Underswap, Underfell, Swapfell Purple, and Swapfell Red. Contains instances of transphobia and swearing

Across the Street - (Fae) Sans X Reader and (Fae) Papyrus X Reader. Strangers to friends to lovers, fae AU. Skeleton AUs are Undertale, Underswap, and Underfell. No warnings currently :)

Sweethearts - Papyrus X Reader. Strangers to Lovers, Underswap AU. No warnings currently :)

Skeleton Squatters and the Sorcerer - Sans X Sylva (OC) and Papyrus X Sylva (OC). OCs are inspired by Howl's Moving Castle, Strangers to friends (?) to lovers. Contains swearing, depictions of smoking and alcohol consumption

Monsters, Mages, and Myths! Oh My! - Sans X (Mage) Reader and Papyrus X (Mage) Reader. Fantasy AU, really specific lore/magic. Skeleton AUs are Undertale, Underswap, Underfell, Swapfell Purple, Swapfell Red, Fellswap Gold, and Horrortale. Contains fantasy violence, body horror, and mild emotional manipulation

Office Cats - Sans X (Shapeshifter) Reader. Strangers to friends to lovers, found family. Parallel to "House Dogs" but with a different MC.

Pools - Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug and Chat Noir AU/Re-write, with mechanics taken from Ranma 1/2 (started off as a joke but now I'm invested). Marinette X Adrien . Rivals/enemies to lovers. Contains elements of cosmic horror, existential horror, body horror, emotional manipulation, depictions of mental health struggles, and depictions of violence

A Few More Skeletons in the Closet - Sans X Evie (OC), Papyrus X Evie (OC), and W.D. Gaster X Evie (OC). Mafiafell AU, strangers to lovers, dark romance. Contains graphic depictions of violence, mob/gang violence, discussions of drug use, cannibalism, toxic relationships, emotional manipulation, body horror

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[infernothechaosgod]

Cancelled oswald show rewrite

Recently I posted my art of rewritten fanny from that ver so i thought id write a little something furthering my thoughts and ideas about it, not just her but the story and other characters aswell

First of all THE NEW CHARACTERS

As we can see there were 7 new characters planned to appear in the series, we don't know much about the elephant man or the cop dogs but we do know alot about Cliff and gloria!

"Gloria The diva" was suppoust to be a fameous actress and is visibly inspired by flapper culture or some parts of it at least, in my rewrite I imagine her to become friends with fanny! Oswald most likely meet her by ruining something on her set and id imagine fanny pulling up to try and fix it then meeting gloria, shes one of few people fanny accualy got to properly meet in the city and seeing a new young clearly lost girl around she decided to try and lean in a hand for her, little did she know how much that friendship will bring her 👀

"Cliff the cabby" was meant to be friends with oswald, as the original creators said their dynamic was inspired by tortoise and the hare, Cliff was meant to have a very low self image opposite to oswald who even in that ver appeared very hyper and confident (maybe oblivious tbh) In my rewrite Cliff is still friends with oswald but their dynamic is a little different, oswald doesn't "unlock his inner confidence" but rather makes him gain a new perspective at things, he's always lived in the city overwhelmed by it, but then suddenly someone from complete outside appeared and opened his eyes to things he learned to ignore, it makes him rethink everything and while yes he does kinda copy oswald in trying to appear more confident, it's not as much as oswald unlocking that in him but more so the time he spend with him that did that- if it makes any sense

Truth be told I don't have that much of an idea for the elephant man

But I think the police dogs could be antagonists to oswald, trying to catch him as he brings in mayhem everywhere and bend in the rules a bit if it means he'll be more likely to be caught, they might appear goofy all around at first but do become more of a problem the further we go

Speaking of antagonists!

Howard hawk! As described by Matt danner was a visionary behind the city of coneyopolis and while that parts not confirmed i belive he could also be the mayor by that logic? Anyway I belive him to be the big bad of the show, a corrupt guy in charge trying to benefit himself with lies and empty promises, prehaps he wants to use oswald for some of his plans make him an "example" but for what hmmm? 🤨 Im sure it's nothing he has to worry about no no no-

Sneek the cheat and his boss are a pretty basic ball for me tbh, sneek is a con artist trying to rip people off and steal a thing there and there meanwhile his boss as small as he is is the one in charge telling him what to do, not really evil geniuses but after oswald crosses their path a few times too many they try to pounce him every now and then

I mainly have ideas for Fanny & gloria and Oswald & Cliff but thats pretty explainatory why as there the two closest characters to the main cast and yes both oswald AND FANNY are the main cast they have sm more potential that way istg TOT

They both arrived to the city at the same time from an old small village they just call "the burrow" Oswald is very excited to arrive there, ready to meet all kinds of people and of course become a great hit! How doesn't really matter, he's very confident- a little too confident you could say, he's not used to losing in any way, people back home spoiled him a bit so now he just really doesn't know what concequence of action or accountability means, every trouble he's caused back home could easily be fixed or he'd just brush it off, every person yelling at him to get off their lawn could easily turn around and pet him on the head next time he'd see them, however the city will not work this way and even if he doesnt realize it going in he sure as hell will know what concequences and maturity means on his way out, the city will kindly feed his hunter for adventure as well as give him a rude awakening to how he can't just run around like a child and not expect anything to happen

Fanny on the other hand- oh don't get me started! She's very scared and shy, one might think she doesn't want to be there at all, she spends most of her time at their hotel room/apartment, trying to act like she did back home, you know uh...cleaning the dishes, cleaning the place, trying to cook, washing their stuff, taking care of the paperwork, very very "home" orientated, don't let that fool you like it has fooled her however, Fanny adores the city and it's culture, she's so allured to the dance floors and the music and the people it's almost suffocating to keep herself away from them!...but alas, their home town wasn't as kind to fanny as it was to him, even away she's trying to be "modest" "un-corrupt" never show as much as inch of her legs arms or god forbig torso! She's not used to having any form of autonomy so now that it's just infront of her and she still has her villages "values" grilled into her- yeah it's alot for her, the city will not change her as much as it will let her be herself for the first time in her life