TeeBeeGoof

Student at Millersville University / WRIT318

[jekkarox]

OG Content (WK15)

What are you most proud of with your writing process?

In my writing process I am most proud of my progress in revision. When I say revision I don't necessarily mean spelling and punctuation. What I mean is, writing a piece and then when I re-read it, finding the best most concise way to say it. I have, over this term, reworked my sentence structure, eliminated words and phrases completely and increased my vocabulary so that I might convey my thoughts more efficiently. It has also been fun to match my writing style to the assignment and challenge myself to adhere to the requirements of the audience.

[teebeegoof]

Your focus on making your writing more concise and efficient is inspiring! It’s impressive that you’ve been able to rework sentence structure and vocabulary to better show off your ideas while also adapting your style to fit different audiences and assignments. It shows a really good understanding of revision beyond just surface-level edits!

[teebeegoof]

What I Like About My Reflection

What I like most about my Content Learning Reflection is how it shows my growth in understanding audience engagement. Seeing how my strategies evolved throughout the course makes me appreciate the process even more.

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[teebeegoof]

Writing Process Pride

I’m most proud of how my writing process has become more intentional. From brainstorming to final edits, I’ve developed a better sense of purpose, which has made my work more focused and impactful.

#writ318mu #week15

[awrayofsunshine]

Writing process

What are you most proud of with your writing process?

During this course, I improved my writing process in a few ways. Incorporating the elements of the web writing rhetorical analysis has helped me thinking about the audience of my writing, the context, design, and style in of all of my writing. These concepts have become great concepts to use during my revision process -- checking to see if my writing uses these concepts, and uses them correctly.

[teebeegoof]

It’s awesome that you’ve been able to incorporate the web writing concepts into your writing process! Thinking about the audience, context, design, and style during revision definitely strengthens your work and makes it more effective.

[eliseariel1417]

What are you most proud of with your writing process?

In my writing process, I’m most proud of my revision process. Even in the times when I have read back my work after submitting or uploading it and seeing errors in my writing, I am still proud of the times when I went back and read through some of  my larger assignments, like my data analysis project in my final draft where I spent a lot of time reading and rereading the different sections and actively thinking about what I could add or take away or more somewhere else in order to improve the flow of my information

[teebeegoof]

I can definitely relate to being proud of the revision process! It’s such a crucial step, especially for larger projects like a data analysis. The way you actively think about adding, cutting, or rearranging to improve flow shows how much effort you put into making your work clear and cohesive!

[teebeegoof]

Adjusting My Reflection

I plan to adjust my Content Learning Reflection by expanding on how I adapted my tone for different audiences. Adding examples from my Design Project can strengthen my point and show how I used these strategies effectively.

#writ318mu #week15

[teebeegoof]

Thursday Check-in Post

Web writing has been an interesting journey, but I still have questions about staying adaptable as platforms evolve. How do I balance trending styles with keeping a unique voice?

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[teebeegoof]

Angry Fandom Lessons from The Last Jedi

The Last Jedi taught me a lot about fan reactions. While I loved the risk-taking, others felt it deviated too far from Star Wars traditions. It’s a perfect case of how fan expectations shape the discourse and why creators can’t please everyone. This insight has helped me approach my Design Project by considering how fan investments affect their responses to cancellations.

#writ318mu #week14

[dpsauve567]

share an example of your experience as a fan of a show that was cancelled. help us feel the feels

This will be my second Star Wars post of the week. The show, The Acolyte, was released over the summer and there were not really mixed reactions to it. I saw a couple of accounts on X/Twitter enjoying it and having a good time, but most people hated with everything that they were. I was kind of in the middle of these two. I liked some aspects of it, but certainly not all of it. This show was canceled after 1 season, and it left me with some unanswered questions, and me looking forward to the next season. Apparently there was low viewership for the show, but I believe that the main reason for the cancelation was due to the high amount of racism that would happen in comment sections of posts about the show, or racist YouTube videos or reviews about the show.

[teebeegoof]

It’s so frustrating when a show gets canceled not because of its quality but because of external factors like hate and racism in fandoms. The Acolyte had so much potential, and it’s disappointing that the story was cut short due to these issues. I felt the same way about shows that leave unanswered questions—it’s like being stuck in a story without closure.

#writ318mu #week14

[eliseariel1417]

Share an example of your experience as a fan of a show that was cancelled. help us feel the feels.

One of my favorite comfort shows, Anne with an “E”, was canceled back in 2019 after the 3rd season was released, it was a show that was coproduced between Netflix and the CBC (Canadian Broadcast Channel) and it was just so well produced for it being a book adaptation. When it was canceled, I would say that the fans were less angry and more heartbroken, I was definitely one of those heartbroken people. After the cancelation, I saw many more fan edits for the characters to show their appreciation of the show, from the more artistically talented of the fanbase, they create art inspired by the show. In one instance, someone made a change.org petition intended for Netflix to have them continue the show. But with all this said, there was still a group of people within the community who did show how upset they were through anger. 

[teebeegoof]

I completely understand the heartbreak—Anne with an “E” had such a unique charm, and its cancellation felt like an unfinished story. The community's creative responses, like fan edits and artwork, are such a beautiful way to show love for the show. It’s bittersweet how cancellations often create even more appreciation from fans.

#writ318mu #week14

[jackbell]

Orignial Content Post #3

Here’s a section from my hockey Instagram project:

"Nasher uses funny hockey memes and trends to connect with casual fans, while Bardown focuses more on deep hockey knowledge, which hardcore fans love. The NHL keeps things super professional with high-quality pictures and videos, but sometimes it feels a bit distant compared to the other accounts."

This part explains the differences in how these accounts engage with fans. I want to make sure it’s clear and easy to follow, but I also think it could use more examples or details. How can I improve it? Feedback is welcome!

[teebeegoof]

This is a solid start! You’ve done a great job summarizing each account’s approach. Maybe consider adding a specific example for each—like a meme or trend Nasher used, a type of “deep hockey knowledge” post Bardown shared, or a standout NHL post that felt distant. Those details could make your analysis even stronger and more engaging!

#writ318mu #week14

[teebeegoof]

Canceled Show Feels

I’ll never forget when New Girl was canceled. The quirky storytelling, comedy, and heartfelt characters were everything. Its abrupt end left so many unanswered questions, and it felt like losing a little pocket of joy. It made me realize how deeply invested we get in stories that connect with us—and why fans get so vocal when shows end prematurely.

#writ318mu #week14

[teebeegoof]

Design Project Draft

In my Design Project, I created a cancellation announcement for Favorite Show. It balances transparency with empathy, acknowledging fans’ disappointment while explaining the decision. I’m struggling to ensure the tone feels genuine without being overly formal or dismissive. Feedback on phrasing would help a lot!

#writ318mu #week14

[teebeegoof]

Thursday Check-In

As we near the end of the semester, I'm reflecting on how to transfer the skills we've learned in #writ318mu into real-world situations. How can we best adapt concepts like audience analysis, content strategy, and user experience to different industries or creative fields? Any tips for applying these to personal projects or career goals?

@npfannen

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[keithparker318]

Original Content Writing 3/3

explain the appeal of long youtube videos (10+ minutes), why do viewers watch? How do the creators make choices to engage the audience? #writ318mu #week13

The appeal of long videos is that the creator is able to portray more information to the viewer than short-form content. Creators make choices to engage the audience through understanding what the audience has been receiving the best and following a scheme similar to what they have done to gain success.

[teebeegoof]

Long YouTube videos allow creators to share more in-depth information, giving viewers a richer and more comprehensive experience than short-form content. To keep audiences engaged, creators often analyze what their audience responds to best and replicate successful strategies. This could mean sticking to familiar formats, maintaining a consistent tone, or building on topics that resonate most with their followers.

#writ318mu #week13

[teebeegoof]

Explain the Appeal of Long YouTube Videos

Longer YouTube videos appeal to viewers seeking in-depth content, whether tutorials, storytelling, or commentary. Creators engage audiences with dynamic pacing, transitions, and a strong structure—hooking them early and keeping them invested with valuable insights or entertaining moments throughout. Personalized interactions, like addressing viewer comments, also enhance the experience.

#writ318mu #week13

[teebeegoof]

Thursday Check-in Post

Web writing in the real world often requires responding quickly and effectively to dynamic situations, especially on social media. A question I’ve been thinking about is: how do professionals make sure their tone stays consistent with their brand when addressing unexpected scenarios? For instance, in situations that demand urgency or sensitivity, how do they strike a balance between maintaining professionalism and relatability? Also, are there strategies or tools that help manage these kinds of rapid-response tasks more effectively?

#webwriting #writ318mu #week13 @npfannen