The Whumperfly Effect

Whump-centric side blog. I’m Runela, resident whump shitposter! I may post my writing if I can wrestle my anxiety into submission. ~~~~~~~ She/her, Neurodivergent, over 18 ~~~~~~~ Please talk to me, I have no friends! Headcannons and theories are welcome, but leave The Discourse at home.

[perverted-asexual]

"You're putting your sick fantasies onto fictional characters!!"

Oh!! Oh no! I was putting FANTASIES... onto FICTIONAL characters!?! Why did no one tell me!?

[valtsv]

2010s internet: if people really don't like you they might send you gore 😰

2020s internet: if people really really like you they might send you gore 🥰

[sorrowful-hyacinth]

I need some classic begging whump. I’m itching for it. Even a simple “please don’t hurt me.” Maybe added on with “I’ll be good. I’ll behave.” “Fuck, please. I didn’t mean to. I didn’t know what I was doing. I’ll never do it again. Let’s go back to the way things were.” Kind of begging. Whumper can deny them the comfort and relief they seek.

But I also love when Whumper actually gives in and decides to treat whumpee by giving them some reprieve for their begging. As if they’re conditioning them to believe that begging and constantly needing to please Whumper is how they’ll survive, how they won’t get hurt.

Whumpee who’s been conditioned or at least knows very well that if they did something to cross the line with whumpers demands then they’d get punished in a way they could only see in their nightmares. They do it, by accident or on purpose in the spur of the moment. When whumper catches them, they immediately turn into a ball of fear and anxiety. Trying to run, claw, squirm away from whumper. Anyway to escape the worst punishment they can receive. All while turning into a blubbering mess of pleas and apologies. Promises to be better. To be good. “You don’t have to do this! It won’t happen again, I won’t do it again, please please I’m begging you.”

Whumper doesn’t have to feel remorse to give in. They know what they’re doing. They have some sort of a caring side, especially if it’s like in a pet whump setting and they just want Whumpee to be an adoring pet. Or even just for an originally defiant and aggressive whumpee that fought tooth and nail to escape. Too broken down now to even barely handle one whip lash to the back without breaking down into tears. “I’ve learned my mistake. Please, I just want to be good now.”

But alas, sometimes whumpers need to let off some steam. And no amount of begging from Whumpee is going to stop them.

— 🪻

[chaumas-deactivated20240115]

“I’ll never talk” ok that’s cool. didn’t really expect you to. I’m not gonna torture you for information—I have an elaborate espionage network for that. everyone knows torture is an unreliable means of extracting information and anything obtained from it is not to be trusted. I’m not an idiot. I’ve read all the torture science. if there’s one thing I can’t stand it’s the foolish notion that torture serves a practical purpose. no, my torture dungeon exists for good, clean fun. it’s all about the love of the game. strap ’em to the rack, boys!

[chaumas-deactivated20240115]

you: I torture for interrogation purposes

me, an intellectual: I torture because I’m a pervert

[phantomrose96]

I wonder if “we have to torture this special character. in the lab facility. with secret science.” is an interest all 12-year-old children share or were we just the generation exposed to Maximum Ride

[phantomrose96]

You’re right. How could I forget to credit anime for its role in putting the special character in the secret torture facility (for science).

[sympathischeufos]

Genuine question: Isn't this just Bond villainy and/or medieval torture dungeon? Or what kind of facility are we talking about?

[phantomrose96]

The Facility is a critically important part here. See it’s a Science Facility. It’s run by a very shady clandestine organization, which is incredibly powerful. They’re maybe part of the government, or if not the government then something Illuminati-like.

As such The Facility is very high tech, and likely buried underground or hidden somewhere no normal person can access. The Torture being done is for Science, which the Facility is for. It’s all scientists in lab coats doing the torture. There is so much lab equipment and probably a lot of devices hooked up to the special character which will beep and go off the charts when the special character has a violent mind explosion. This part is important.

[phantomrose96]

A lot of really good mentions in the notes here

Mewtwo

Secrets of Nimh

Wolverine

Akira

Elfen Lied

Shadow the Hedgehog

And a special mention to the couple of people identifying that a 12-year-old stuck in school all day is, perhaps, in a way, a special character being tortured in the science facility.

[whump-me]

"You should pray that you die in terror and despair, begging in vain for your life. Why? Because the alternative is that I do things to you that will make you grateful for the end when it finally comes."

[wizardarchetypes]

i think women i date should be allowed to disembowel me but just for fun and i’d be okay and we could just put everything back where it goes when it’s time to go meet our friends for dinner or whatever

[wizardarchetypes]

[assaultmystic]

i do think id look good as fuck after receiving an obviously lethal blow. like i feel id do a great job looking down at my body to see a gaping hole in it, making eye contact with you, saying “oh” very quietly before i keel over… stuff like that

[kokoko-sir]

commission for @lingerie-and-kitten-play

[homoeroticjunoincident]

what if we explored each other’s bodies [not sex] [i open your ribcage up and start messing around in that thang]

[whumperfultime]

Psst. My fellow whump writers, especially lab/medical whump enjoyers. I have learned a new thing that I want to share.

Generic drug/medication names include a suffix that indicates their basic function. Here's an example list! If you're having a hard time coming up with a realistic-sounding name for a fictional drug you're writing about, this could be a helpful start :D

[victimeyez]

“Do you need a reminder of your place?”

Source

[whump-in-the-closet]

guards! chain the thief by his wrists to the wall! not for my enjoyment but uh. as. A Public Warning!

[vivisectedboy]

"God. Fuck. Please don't d- Please stop-"

"Hm?"

The Doctor makes an incision. Precise. Sharp. The skin feels so impossibly thin. So easy to reach under. It's like drawing on paper.

"Jesus christ- Jesus fucking christ- Oh god-"

The Doctor reaches in. Rubber gloves against raw flesh, forearms covered in fresh blood. What a horrible texture.

The Patient is heaving in shock. On the inclined bed, he has no other choice but to look right at the wound gaping across his stomach. It moves with each gasp for air. Like a mouth. An orifice that was always meant to be there, moving in rhythm with the rest of the body.

"I forgot to get the retractors. But I reckon you could do the job, no?"

"What?"

"I'm going to loosen the restraints on your hands, so you can reach it."

"What-"

The Patient asks again, barely hearing the words over his own hitched breathing. The Doctor grabs his two wrists - completely unbothered by the blood smearing on them - and positions his hands over the wound.

"Hold that open for me, will you?"

His fingers are guided in place, forced to dig deep, while his arms are pulled apart slowly. Bright red viscera beneath the freshly opened layers. Like it has always wanted to be seen, glistening under the light.

"No, no, no- no, please don't- please I'm-"

"Sshh. Just hold it there. Keep it open."

"No- no- I can't-"

Not feeling the pain might even be more terrifying. Only the view remains. And the sounds. The stomach-turning smell of his own blood. His fingers, clamped in place by complete shock. And the growing cold, slowly seeping into his whole trembling body.

[mj-iza-writer]

That was wonderful

[whumpsday]

https://www.tumblr.com/whumpsday/770720940474712064/i-wanna-drill-screws-into-kane-all-over-his-body?source=share

After the other anon screwed Kane to the board, I happen to come across him. This sparks an idea.

I tell him to beg me not to put him in the sun. Regardless of how well he begs, I'm not gonna put him in the sun, that's mean. Instead, I help him get off the board and then hose him down before leaving him in the cell.

-💜 

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Kane begs his heart out, pleading you with everything he has not to put him into the sun, going so far as to beg you to continue the drilling instead. If he had the freedom of movement, he would collapse with relief when you reveal it's 'worked'.

He slumps onto the floor in a bleeding, exhausted, pain-ridden heap when you remove him from the board, not moving as you hose him down. Later, after he's rested, he pulls all the screws from his body and the bleeding starts all over again.

It strikes him as vaguely reminiscent of how he made his defenseless human bleed from the same wounds night after night. Another thing Kane deserves.

[whumpsday]

oh got a couple ideas for kane, this one's been in my mind for a while, i coat the silver bars on the cell with blood, its human blood and its fresh the only catch is, well. if he wants it he has to lick it off the silver bars

Kane does it without even thinking. His tongue is a horribly-burnt gory mess by the time he's done, the bars licked clean.

[whumpsday]

hheeeeyyyyyy!!!

I have a couple of quick questions for you if you don't mind. If you dont feel comfortable answering, don't feel pressure to! I was just thinking of some senarios where Kane got his hands on a second bloodbag, and what would happen in the following situations;

What would Kane's introductory speech be like for the new bloodbag? What would the rules be? I imagine he'd be a lot harsher!

If, a couple weeks in, whumpee offered themself up for punishment for something kane doesn't consider bad, like breaking a dish on accident, what would he do? How would he react if they insist if he says no?

Assuming he lets them into the living room like he did with jim, how would he respond to them refusing to use the furniture?

A couple months in, how would he react to them asking for a hug, like in your nice thought chapter? Im really intrested in this one!

What if he woke up to the whumpee sleeping at the end of his bed, on the floor? Would he be mad? And how would he act if they told him it was because they had a nightmare?

i have like a dozen more questions of the same variety but im sure I've bothered you enough. I love your writing, please never stop! Lots of love!

this is a scenario that i LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! kane swiping someone who's already conditioned from having previously been a whumpee, especially if he ends up unwittingly kidnapping them from another whumper, is SO good. however, i'd never thought about what that would be like if they were his second human after jim escapes.

he would be very strict and harsh in the beginning, and would not hesitate to jump to violence for even small things right from the get-go. however, given the described whumpee's personality, i don't imagine they would end up victim to much of kane's wrath anyway.

If, a couple weeks in, whumpee offered themself up for punishment for something kane doesn't consider bad, like breaking a dish on accident, what would he do?

kane would definitely be surprised! if this happens near the beginning, he'd probably slap them and snap at them to be more careful. whumpee wouldn't need to insist or even offer in the first place. (he'd be more reluctant to use violence later on)

Assuming he lets them into the living room like he did with jim, how would he respond to them refusing to use the furniture?

he'd think it's weird but wouldn't argue

A couple months in, how would he react to them asking for a hug, like in your nice thought chapter? Im really intrested in this one!

so here's the thing. this whumpee is basically ~kane's perfect human~. i imagine this human is well-behaved, obedient, and given this request, affectionate. kane would quickly become less harsh with them. a couple months is probably too soon for kane to grant this request, and he would say no. however, maybe at the half-year mark he'd agree and hug them.

What if he woke up to the whumpee sleeping at the end of his bed, on the floor? Would he be mad? And how would he act if they told him it was because they had a nightmare?

well whumpee should be locked in the human quarters nowhere near his bedroom, so he'd COMPLETELY FLIP OUT ON THEM. how did they escape?? i'm going to assume this takes place maybe a year in, and at that point, kane is attached enough to this whumpee that he won't be violent, but he is still going to yell at them quite a lot. he's honestly less mad and more panicked/freaked out--if whumpee had made different choices, he could have lost a second human. however, it still appears like he's super super angry with them. he doesn't give a shit about their nightmare in this moment.

after he's sent them back to their room and triple checked the lock, and had some time to calm down, it occurs to him that whumpee didn't run away. they intentionally came to him and didn't even attempt to escape. the next evening, when he's had time to process everything, he lets whumpee know that he's not mad at them, that they did a good job by not running away, and asks them about the nightmare. he's actually much more friendly to them from this point forward and allows them more (relative) freedom, trusting them more.

thank you so much for your support! please feel free to send more questions! <3