Luke Skywalker Jedi Series Outline Pitch
This is a series outline pitch about Luke's story in this series that would take place after the events of the Original Trilogy and before the events of the Sequel Trilogy. Some of it inspired by elements of Legends and others not. For that, I thank God for, if He will, these ideas:
Luke has been training Leia as a jedi, she's made her lightsaber and has become quite proficient, though her anger can lead her to aggressive tactics in the training. He's also been building out his jedi academy, bringing in padawans and surviving jedi to assist in their training.
Luke and Leia discover who their biological grandparents are and meet them for the first time, along with their aunts and uncles and cousins. Luke is exuberant and happy to meet them, as he's someone who never had much family but now he has so much. In this, her family has old holo-recordings of Padme, that she made for them when she was pregnant, a journal, where she discusses her hopes for her children, fearing that the war they're in won't end, how she doesn't want her children to live their life in war, fearing they may become soldiers, saying her children won't become soldiers.
Afterwards, Luke is approached by a representative of the new republic, who basically offers him and his new Jedi order a seat at the table basically, for this new Jedi to serve the new republic as the old Jedi served theirs. Luke contemplates this, uncertain about the consequences as well as the benefits, what Luke discerns were choices the old Jedi were faced with as well, that the new republic would allow his new Jedi open access to all borders and funding that would be closed off otherwise and thus allow this new Jedi to do the most in assisting people and have the most resources in doing so, the downsides being that this places his new Jedi under the purview and say so of the new republic, at best being expected, if not outright dictated, to act in accordance with the structures and orders of said new republic, and thus this could place on him a potential restraint from taking any action that wouldn't assist the new republic or that could work against it.
Meanwhile, Mara Jade, a second generation elite imperial inquisitor, has sought hunting Luke as a final mission from Palpatine, her having been brainwashed to act on his orders, but in case she were to resist an implant that would basically paralyze her nervous system and kill her, which she doesn't know about yet.
Her and Luke end up in conflict and battle aboard a ship Luke is taking on an investigation given to him by Leia (who has sought out a different lead on the same mission with Han and Lando), the ship is damaged in their fight and crashes, leading them both to be stranded on the planet Wayland together, Luke pulling her out of the wreckage, her realizing they need to work together to survive.
There they come across seemingly hurt old man calling himself a jedi who survived the jedi purge and had been tortured in the labs of Mount Tantiss before escaping, who carries extreme views of what the Jedi should be.
In the midst of this, other imperial remnant forces are seeking out Luke, working with Mara. These forces are led by a bitter and vengeful young man who hates Luke Skywalker specifically. It is revealed that he is the son of an imperial officer who worked on the first death star and he blames Luke for his dad's death, him being a radicalized soldier under the imperial remnants now in pursuit of this revenge.
Luke bonds with Mara, connects to her as she finds herself struggling with her orders to kill him.
Meanwhile, the old man, who calls himself Snoke, offers Luke further training in his power, in pursuit of showing him how the Jedi failed, in that they allowed themselves to be tools of the Senate, instead of taking control of it. Snoke tells Luke that the jedi should've been the ones who ruled and brought order to the galaxy. Luke resists this, pushing back, and outright opposing Snoke when he discovers that Snoke has taken control of a settlement on the planet and controls its people using his powers.
Snoke makes a plan with Mara, who is still operating on the idea that she will follow through with her orders. Snoke gains Mara's trust in assisting her in discovering the chip she has in her, which has led her to perceive the empire has having in some way betrayed her, but it does show her that if she doesn't act out her orders she could die.
The imperial seeking revenge though throws a wrench into everything, as Luke defends the settlement from the imperials and quickly battles and defeats the imperial, leaving him injured. Luke spares him though. The imperial dismisses this, stating that he hates Luke. Luke senses his pain and apologizes for it, not for stopping the death star or rescuing the people it would've destroyed, but that it caused a boy suffering and the loss of his parent, saying that if he'd had his way he'd prefer no one be hurt, giving the imperial medical assistance, telling him to give up his hatred and let it go as it won't serve him, stating that he will stop him if he has to but he'd rather not. Mara is touched and moved by Luke's compassion, and chooses in that moment that she won't kill him, rejecting her orders fully for the first time. The implant activates to kill her though. Leia, having at this point found Luke's location, arrives and she uses a medical kit and her powers to sense where the chip is and extract it.
After that, Mara slips off on her own to contemplate her life and what she wants to do with it, for now.
Snoke is revealed to not be a jedi, but a genetically created creature, imprinted with the memories of various other force sensitives, in some cases specifically those who'd worked Emperor Palpatine, Count Dooku, Maul and even Vader among them. He escapes.
And Luke returns to his Jedi academy, and when asked by the representative to provide his response to the new republic's offer for the jedi to return to being the republic's peacekeepers, Luke says no. The representative is offended and basically tells him that without the republic his new jedi order won't have what it needs to act. Luke states that while that may be, it won't be tainted by the whims of politicians or their interests, they won't become their tools and they won't be coerced into serving them as their army. Luke states that his children won't become soldiers.
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