A small 1135 word erotic hypnosis piece that I wrote a few years back. It only involves minor hypnotic language/dialogue and features someone being put into a trance and fucked, with a transition into aftercare at the end. This was inspired by my Sir, who I practice erotic hypnosis with, and an old drawing I came across years ago illustrating one of the actions that happens in this story. I hope you enjoy reading it!
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He stood behind her, she could feel his warm breath on her neck as his hands roamed up her sides. She wanted to melt into his touch, but he had told her not to move, and she was very good at listening, especially to him. One of his hands roamed up to her breast, grabbing and squeezing gently. His other hand disappeared from its roaming and she held back a soft whimper, his hands on her body were heavenly. She wasn’t sure if it was the fact that she was touch starved or the fact that it was him who was finally touching her, or both. She mentally decided on both being the correct answer right as her mind immediately switched, he had breathed in, about to say something.
Then the hand that disappeared from her body now appeared in front of her face, something shimmering in his now closed fist. Her eyes fixed on his hand before he even told her to do so. The pocket watch dropping from his grip and starting to swing, back and forth…
Back and forth...
Her mind stuck watching, getting lost, drifting deeper and deeper down…
Her thoughts emptying, body relaxing, as his words in her ear and the pocket watch in front of her eyes melting her into a deep trance.
She was sinking deeper and deeper, not noticing his other hand had drifted up to her back and her neck, untying her dress. The soft fabric then pushed down over her hips, puddling to the ground around her feet.
Her eyes move back and forth, the sudden nakedness unknown to her, a blank and empty expression with flickers of pleasure and obedience crossing her face.
His hands on her body again, gently caressing the doll he has trapped for his pleasure. With only a few words spoken, a moan escapes between her lips, his hand drifting across her body causing a ripple of pleasure to pulse through her. Her mind sinking ever so deeper with the pleasure, the heat of his touch, the sound of his voice in her ear. She blinks slowly as she tries to keep her gaze upon the pocket watch still ticking back and forth in front of her gaze.
Another word from him and she heads ever so deeper, her body relaxing, warmth radiating down her spin, between her legs. Her mind, so lost, body controlled, lost in the obedience of the trance. The warmth of his body pressed up behind her, deepening her mind and her body. So empty and blank, a toy, there was no noticing as he slipped his cock between her thighs, running it against the warm wetness radiating from her. His hands swap, the other now keeping the pocket watch a float in her gaze, and his now free hand grabbing her hip to press her into him. He moved himself back and forth slowly between her legs, a soft exhale and a gentle “That’s right” whispered in her ear as she let out an involuntary moan at the friction between her legs. Her increased wetness letting his cock slide easily between her thighs.
His breath increased slightly as his hand on her hip gripped tighter, pulling her into him more.
Back and forth she watches the pocket watch, bringing her deeper with each pass and with each thrust and tease his cock made across her opening, melting her even more.
Her eyelids growing heavy with the effort of staying conscious while entranced and used. His breath heavy on her neck, a soft kiss, opposite to the rough moving of his hips behind her, and a gentle whisper in her ear “Sleep”
And as he dropped the pocket watch, she went limp in his arms. He then slowly lowered her onto the bed in front of them. Her legs hung off of the bed, the wetness between them glistening. Slowly dragging the tip of his cock over her lips, which opened so eagerly for him, holding on to her hips, he pushed himself deep inside her. A small sound and an escaped breath made its way out of her relaxed body, as he pushes deeper, feeling her warmth around him, her wetness, her body’s eagerness to take him in. His grip on her hips tightened, as he pulled out and then back in again, deeper and deeper, going in and out, his pace speeding up as her wetness increased and her relaxed body melted around his cock. He thrust deeply in and out, using her body like the brainwashed doll she is, his hard thrusts forcing her soft breathing from before, to instinctively speed up with each thrusting movement.
A snap of his fingers and a sudden gasp releases from her, followed by a loud moan cut short by another thrust into her. His cock inside her spiraling her into pleasurable depths, her now conscious mind struggling to stay up and awake. Pushing her hips back into him, she buries her face into the sheets in front of her muffling her moans, his thrusting growing faster. His hand suddenly in her hair, pulling her back into him as he leans forward over her, his cock driving ever so deeper into her. A sharp gasp at the pull, her hands grasping at the sheets in front of her. Breathing fast, her mind lost in the pleasure surrounding her, the pleasure between her legs, the pleasure in her mind lingering from the obedience of being entranced. His breathing speeding up with hers, his pace speeding up, getting closer and closer. The warmth of his chest on her back, his lips on her neck, his cock deep within her, his hand in her hair, uncontrollable moans released from between her lips.
“Come for me” he growls in her ear, sending her over the edge, her body arching, her breath hitching. Her eyes close as a pulsing pleasure rushes through her, his cock thrusting in and out harder and faster as she squeezes around him. His hand grips tighter in her hair, face burrowed into her neck as he thrusts deep into her one last time, she then feels his cock pulsing within her almost matching the pulsing of her own body.
His grip on her hair loosens, a kiss to her neck a moaned “Good girl” in her ear, sending a shiver of pleasure rippling down her spine. His body relaxing on top of her, both breathing fast, bodies settling after bursts of pleasure. After a moment of warmth and regaining movement of their spent limbs, he pushes up off of her slightly, pulling himself out of her, causing a moan from both. Nudging her up onto the bed, he lays down next to her, pulling her in tight, their warmth combining again to a relaxing tangle of limbs.
-Blabbing on: Newbie hypnotists, it’s true- At some point, hypnotic language becomes as effortless as breathing in and out. I can keep a nice flow of induction-y words and phrases going for hours if I needed to. I could blab on hypnotically while thinking about what sandwich I wanted to order or my favorite scene from Sherlock. I can’t speak to the quality of said hypnotic work, but my mouth would be saying things and they could be categorized as “trancey”.
-Generally being soothing: I started doing hypnosis primarily for relaxation so I’m pretty skilled at calm, peaceful voice, words, and imagery.
-Rhythm: I like playing around with rhythm and sometimes find myself falling into nice patterns that sound poetic and rhythmic and lovely.
-Waking suggestions: I’m pretty comfortable working around with waking suggestions or modifying/playing with suggestions when the person isn’t technically “in trance”. In all honesty, this feels more like skill on my subjects’ part than mine, but since this is my list I’ll take credit for these working. :)
What I’d like to improve:
-Ericksonian language patterns: Reader- I have a stack of zeebu cards right here by my bed. I occasionally pick them up and riffle through them. Do I ever take the time to actually really learn language patterns? No. I’ve always told myself this was because I didn’t believe in the effectiveness of language patterns, but I’m beginning to realize this is an excuse for laziness. If nothing else, throwing some language patterns in gives you authority (at least to other in-the-know hypnosis people) and lets you joke with your hypnotist friends.*
-NLP- See above re: possibly bullshit but I should probably learn it anyway. I’d like to be better at mirroring and analogue marking specifically and generally in understanding and incorporating a subject’s worldview.**
-Working without long inductions: Despite enjoying waking suggestion, I still get nervous when I do hypnosis that involves quick inductions or no real induction. I think my schema for hypnosis is still too much “magic spell” (which is really flawed worldview on several levels). See also- starting hypnosis from anywhere besides a relaxation induction
-No-fail suggestions: I’m an analytical subject generally, I should utilize the suggestions of my people and work them in more creatively. (See above re:Erickson).***
-Bravery: I need to experiment more in general- I get into ruts too easily.
What I’m curious about:
- I picked up this weird language pattern where I blend one sentence into the next one starts before the last one ends quite precisely where I want it to. I’m not quite sure where I picked it up or even when I started using it. I’m not really sure how effective it is. I consulted an expert friend who said she uses these as rapid-fire pattern interrupts/confusion elements with fractionation. Anyone else do this? Where did you pick it up?
-Everything honestly. I’m not isolating independent language variables here- It’s hard to know what actually works and what is filler– especially because a lot of what is actually working is expectancy regardless of language***
What I’d like to excise:
-Stuttering, but I’ve pretty much decided I’ll just have to continue to work around that
-I’ve been doing this thing forever where I ask a subject to listen to my voice and not the words I’m saying. It is occasionally very effective for creating some nice dissociation, but this suggestion has become a weird default and kind of a hurdle for subjects who need to be more attentive in trance (i.e. most subjects, especially new ones).
What are your language skills and what would you like to work on?
@rightthewaydown @tennfan2 @sex-obsessed-lesbian @soundshypnotic @mr-prism @mrs-prism @mistermindwiper @zanythoughts @banana-pie-gaige @thehypnobunny @the-inquisition-scmh @anyone else who wants to answer!
*Hypnotist humor: 40% language pattern, 30% nlp-references, 30% puns (give or take 5% for Hamilton references)
**Right now I do this primarily through instinct and lots of asking- but I’d like to be able to pick up more on my own
***If you don’t know about no-fail suggestions, this induction from @sex-obsessed-lesbian contains good examples.
***An example of me experimenting with trying to find the active ingredients
In response to your question - I picked up this weird language pattern where I blend one sentence into the next one starts before the last one ends quite precisely where I want it to. I’m not quite sure where I picked it up or even when I started using it. I’m not really sure how effective it is. I consulted an expert friend who said she uses these as rapid-fire pattern interrupts/confusion elements with fractionation. Anyone else do this? Where did you pick it up?
Milton model Ambiguity: Punctuation: sentences that share the same overlapping words are unexpected and do not ‘follow the rules’,
There are 3 types of punctuation ambiguity:
a) Run on sentences: ‘I want you to notice your watch my hand carefully’, ‘look at your hand me that book’.“I like your watch my hand closely” “I want you to notice your hand me the glass.”
These may be sentences that run on with a linking word such as: “I can see the time on your watch my eyes now.”
b) Improper pauses: occur when you don’t quite finish…. the sentence. This causes a forced mind reading and becomes highly trance inducing.
“Can you please pass out (pause) the flyers?”
c) Incomplete sentences: In this form you begin a sentence but never quite…. you then go on to another sentence with a completely different… and the person goes into trance because of the….
all of which ultimately force the listener to ‘mind read’. The sentence is left unfinished (forced mind-reads) “Would you rather go into a nice, deep…”
Example words that overlap: Watch, Tie, Feel,Through, Change, Break, Coast, Move, Believe, Crave, Decide, Experience, Drape, Frame, Places, Realise, Respect, Feedback, Think, Bank, Cast, Hand, Point, Drift, Round
“That is a good POINT to the place that is causing you pain”
“I just bought a new WATCH what I am doing”
“Notice what your HAND me the glass”
“I love going to the SEA what pictures you get, when I say relax” (phonological is also used here)
Hypnotized to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth. And then being ordered to tell all the embarrassing fantasies stuck in that pretty little head, desperate to become a reality.
The idea of someone getting off to me while playing with me turns me on. Just having them hypnotize me as they get off to me being helplessly brainwashed and controlled by them. I just stand there all mindless and limp so dazed and sleepy as they get off to how powerless I am. Oh gosh yes please 💕
the struggle: all the bimbo/bimbofication shit is obviously for my own pleasure, right? but all of the material is so “this is your place in life” and while it can be fun, it sometimes fucks my head up. because I am so fucking smart. I’m intelligent and driven and determined and relentless. Those are not things I would give up for the world. So when something that, in theory, gives me pleasure tells me that I should give up the things that make me myself, even if it’s just fantasy material, it messes with me. and not in a fun way.
I just got back from a whole hypnosis con. You damn well better believe that bimbification play was a thing there. You know what else was a thing there? Treating it as a fun form of play among people who respect each other. (Also guys who were into being himbified, which is pretty invisible on Tumblr.)
I get that some people want the whole fantasy package. But I think it chases people out of the kink because they can’t find anyone they trust to play with, or because admitting that desire seems to mean that they have to take all or nothing.
There’s nothing wrong with wanting to set limits, or about being proud of who you are outside of scene. I just finished a bimbification story, it was hot and fun and sexy, and I encourage people to play with it. But enjoying bimbo play doesn’t mean you’re lesser.
Yeah. I guess it’s a common technique to put people under hypnosis. I know when my neighbor hypnotized me one of her most effective Inductions is good push on. My forehead.
My wife @khatsha might have literally started hypnomemes. Maybe. But it has been a glorious flowering since that day, Dec 22, 2017, and in the time we have left I want to make a little lifeboat for these glorious flowers, and I don’t want them to die. Or get wet I guess.This metaphor is amazing, don’t question it. Crossposting on my more sober, less usually trashy blogger blog.
I didn’t save individual credits for all these, but the set of artists/geniuses who made them are @khatsha, @ragezdasta, @thehypnobunny, @digitalswitchgamine, @h-sleepingirl, @hypnobat98, @zanydanger, @hypno-ace, and @deeperforme (if I’ve forgotten anyone please let me know. Even more so if I’ve forgotten any meme!)
Starting with the crowning achievement of this first great era, by @khatsha, and what might be the first and second ever, by @khatsha and @ragezdasta, then in random order:
