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Reindeer Readathon Announcement!
Happy Monday, my fierce valkyries! I want to open this post by stressing this is not one of Bookish Valhallaās readathons, nor is it one weāre participating in officially this season. Weāre merely the messengers spreading holiday cheer by shouting all about this merry and cheerful reading event. So pour yourself a piping cuppa cocoa and wrap yourself up in the warmest, chunkiest blanket youāveā¦
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Writer In Motion |CP Round Two
Week Four: Feedback & Reflection
Itās week four of #WriterInMotion and, as usual, Iām fluttering about like a hummingbird with no head trying to do everything at once. Over the weekend, we moved into our very first house, and Iāve been editing Five Glass Flowersin the bathtub, crouched on the worn, wooden floors, and in between scrubbing out the cupboards in the kitchen. So itās taken me quiteā¦
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This week has been PACKED with edits for Five Glass Flowers and navigating round one of the Feedback Phase of #WriterInMotion.Ā First off, I wasĀ BLESSED to be paired with Jeff and Sara as Critique Partners for this round. Theyāre both writing Science Fiction as well and are familiar with some of the genre-specific elements I brought to my story.Ā So a massive THANK YOU to both of them for their invaluable insight, suggestions, and, of course, for trusting me with their work as well.
Market & Genre: Science Fiction, Literary lean, Dystopian
Word Count:Ā 1,210
Loose Comparisons & Inspirations:Ā AnnihilationĀ by Jeff VanderMeer,Ā Orange by Ichigo Takano, and Inception.
Trigger Warning:Ā Five Glass FlowersĀ is set in a world with assisted suicide and touches on mental health. This isnāt fleshed out entirely at the moment, but itās pretty obvious in this draft. The completed version will also allude to a light rail bombing (so, warn future you maybe) but this isnāt touched on yet.
I read the feedback side-by-side and made lists based on areas of concern: 1) what did both CPs like? 2) What was unclear to them? 3) Did the haunted, dystopian vibes come through? 4) Was everything balanced?
Most of the suggestions were minorāa need for clarity here, an awkward sentence thereābut the real joy was seeing how they interacted with and processed the content. Itās been a LONG TIME since Iāve written any sort of science fiction, so I was concerned it didnāt fit enough within the genre or that the story, given its literary lean, might be confusing in some way. However, Jeff and Sara both swept those worries out the door! I love how Jeff came across the title of this chapter (The Janus Project) and did his own little research about it. Iād deliberately picked JANUS because itās the name of the Roman God of doorways, time, transitions, and endings. I enjoy embedding meaning everywhere, and was tickled when Jeff picked up on this right away.
I also appreciated his attention to detail, such as pointing out the awkwardness of Asraās position in the opening line or prodding me to elaborate onĀ how the tally on the hologlass was discreet. His style of critiquing is similar to mine: stream of consciousness, reader reaction, and the occasional quill stab for needed edits (only I think heās nicer at that than me LOL).Ā Both Jeff and Sara has similar suggestions, which indicated certain things SANG and a few things SUNK, but I liked the consistency in feedback. For example, thereās a line where the narrator points out that priets ādonāt usually help someone dieā and both CPs countered that, technically, one could argue they DID. So I adjusted the sentence to flat out say suicide so that a line is drawn between guiding one to their natural death versus allowing something a priest wouldnāt normally condone.
Saraās style was a little more sparse and less reader reaction, but her insight was so helpful to catching potential world-holes and unclear exposition. For example, Iād never explained the whole reason behind Asra having THREE Caseworkers during her year of mandatory therapy. At the time, I wondered if that kind of info was even needed and left it out because I didnāt want to drag the story down with too much setting/backstory. However, Saraās feedback revealed how unclear that section of the scene was and the kinds of questions it raised. I really appreciated her attention to details like this, especially since I have a tendency to be either painfully vague or vomit details everywhere. Her feedback gave me an idea of where to balance hints and reveals. She was also great at catching some of those little typos that like to sneak in!
My biggest concern was the atmosphere. I was shooting forĀ haunting,Ā mysterious, and poignant. I didnāt want the disturbing aspects of the world to overshadow the inescapable strangeness colliding with Asra Aeilstromās life. I worked to deepen her own backstory (settling on a traumatic subway bombing) about where her affliction came from. The first two versions were too vague in doing this, I think. The atmosphere was there, but the characterizationā¦wasnāt. So I guess that was, more or less, my second big concern. Sara and Jeff expressed wanting to know more aboutĀ Oblivion and why Asra is seeking it, so I think, to an extent, Iāve achieved building her character, but will need to also add her backstory in throughout the next few revisions. Hereās the overall feedback received:
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The Janus Project
The causes of death on the state-issued certificates gently floated along the tinted hologlass walls. Asra stared up at them with permanent conviction, dark sunglasses lessening the glare of light:
Xu Heng, 32, Inconsolable sorrow after absorbing displaced emotions.
Torin Thallos, 17, An uncontrollable desire to be full.
Lucho GĆ”lvez, 23, The belief that nothingāincluding oneselfāexists.
Ella Walsh, 47, A longing for things that cannot be named.
Lorne Thale, 50, Fell Hopelessly In Love With Annihilation.
Ian Ito, 38, Hysterical fear of drowning in air.
Every forty seconds, the certificates flickered out of existence, new ones appeared, and this cycle repeated. A discreet tally sat in the bottom right corner of the glass, where the dayās successful journeys to Oblivion tick, tick, ticked like a 24-hour clock: 66, 000. 70,200. 82,350. 93,800. The clock never seemed to stop, even after it reset to zero.
āItās a painless, peaceful process.ā
The office door hissed open and the Caseworker shuffled in. He gave Asra a reassuring smile, gray eyes shining with plastic empathy through crooked frames.
āAre they allā¦have they chosen toā¦ā Die.
Asra tore her gaze away from the hologlass, and settled it on the pamphlet in front of her. Sheād read it countless times in her year of therapy after she made her decision. Ā It was a requirement to know all the available options, even if one couldnāt afford them. Or, in her case, want them. If she closed her eyes, she could recite the entire pamphlet word-for-word, and yet, she couldnāt even recallā
āThey chose Oblivion.ā
As if rehearsed to a habit, the Caseworker reached out to console her with a light squeeze of a gloved hand. This, too, Asra was familiar with; sheād had three Caseworkers before thisācompletely normal for those of her particular situationābut they all behaved the same: a pitying smile here, a kind hand there, voice never above what was considered appropriate for a funeral. Asra slipped her hands off the table and into her lap, trying not to look at the slash of scars across her fingers. The Caseworker said nothing as he pulled up her chart and settled into his seat. A clinical silence hung between them.
Somewhere down the hall, whimpering began. A tea kettle whistled. A cheerful voice called for the head psychiatrist over the speakers. Caseworkers walked down the halls as if they had all the time in the world. Maybe they did. The smell of something sterile clung to air. Fingers tapped against a tablet. The hologlass tick, tick, ticked with new certificates. Shifting in her chairāone of those hard, plastic ones bolted to the floorāAsra tried not to interact with her surrounds, to listen too closely, but restlessness prevailed.
Once again, her eyes scoured the room one last time: the glass box of an office (or counseling room, depending on who you asked), walls of frosted hologlass and floors of snowy quartz. Everything was bleached with the brightness of the UV lights overhead. Absently, she pushed the darkened shades she wore up the bridge of her nose and pulled the hood of her jacket over her forehead. The offices were always kept at a constant 59 degrees. Sheād never thought to ask why.
At last, her gaze settled on the man across the desk. Like all Oblivion Caseworkers, or OCs as everyone generally called them, he wore the standard lapis lazuli tunic that covered him from neck to ankles. An inverted triangular insignia sat snug against his Adamās apple, shifting every time he swallowed, which wasnāt often. The name tag on his chest said Julian, and she wondered, doubted, whether that was even his real name. The OCs all looked freakishly similar, almost like priests.
Ā Except priests didnāt usually help people commit suicide.
Asra cleared her throat. It was a harsh sound in the manufactured silence of the office. Those silver scars on her hands seemed to gleam in the lighting. āHow long will it take?ā
āLess than the time youāve been suffering.ā Julianās smile grew softer, more pitiful. āThe Janus Project prides itself on providing only the most compassionate state-issued Oblivion in the country. It will only take as long as you need it to. Youāll be transported to the doorway at āā he checked the location on his tablet āāthe Howlan House. Itās as close to the site of the accident we can get you. Everything you need is already there, including the funeral materials, and alternative pathways, should you want them.ā
Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā āI donāt.ā
āItās there if you do.ā
āThereās no point to it.ā
The words broke the air as a hoarse whisper. She pulled the cuffs of her sweater over her hands, blinking furiously as spots clouded her vision. Alternative pathways, she wanted to scoff. As if she were a candidate for Transplant or Reboot. Asra waited for anxiety to wash over her, as the pamphlets had warned, but none came. She searched herself for pangs of regret or second thoughts, but as always, she felt nothing. Even as she touched the tablet the Caseworker slid across the table, she could sense neither the warmth of where his hands had been nor the coldness of the glass. Not even the weight of it registered. She caught an unfocused glimpse of her cheerless pale face and muted green eyes on the screen, though she couldnāt be sure it was her face anymore; it was diluted with their imagesāa jagged collage of features that belonged to other versions of herself living in alternate worlds. Other versions she had, unfortunately, collided with that harrowing day.
Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā And since then, she felt nothing of herself.
Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Sensed nothing of this world.
Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Ā Remembered nothing of her life.
Nothing except November the 20th, but she didnāt want the memory.
āGiven yourā¦. situationā¦. we want you to be as comfortable as possible. When youāre ready for Oblivion, it will embrace you. You will find peace, Asra.ā He sounded so sure, she had no choice, but to believe him. The Caseworker indicated to the tinted walls and nodded at the tablet. āShall we announce it?ā
She pulled the tablet closer and froze, a hollowness burrowing deep into her chest. Her thumb brushed the photo of a house in a twilight-kissed field, the black shadows of mountains hovering in the distance. She wondered if she would have once found it beautiful, the fireflies drifting up like falling stars caught in reverse, or what the breeze caressing the patches of weeds would have felt like. She couldnāt see the suspended railway of the old Muika train line over the water, but she knew it was there.
āItās as close as we could get you to the Fragmentation Zone.ā
A memory skipped across Asraās mindāa kaleidoscope of twisted metal, the snap of bones against water, putrid smokeābefore it faded back into the shoebox sheād buried it in. Ā She blinked, waiting for a voice of reason to echo, to say live, live, live. But nothing came. Nothing but a wetness sliding over her chilled cheeks, dropping in time with the relentless tick, tick, ticks of the walls, and onto the glass tomb housing her death certificate:
Asra Aeilstrom, 26, Fractured, Irreparable feeling of being out of place & time.
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Writer In Motion | Round One of CP Revisions This week has been PACKED with edits for Five Glass Flowers and navigating round one of the Feedback Phase of #WriterInMotion.Ā
Writer In Motion | Messy Self-Edited Draft
Hello, Valkyries. And yes, this post is very late. Very, very late indeed! I wish I could say it was me procrastinating, but really, it was a mix of going off the deep end into world-building mode and then wrestingly my inner perfectionistic tyrant who likes to pick at everything.Ā Iāve been writing for years now and I know the self-edit phase is probably my worst. Itās not that I suck at editingā¦
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Writer In Motion | The Hellishly Messy Draft
Ā Hello, Valkyries, and welcome to my ink-stained hot mess of a first draft of my Writer In Motion story. This week of getting words on paper was nine levels of HELL, mostly because I am a dedicated plotter, but I didnāt have much time to flesh this outĀ priorto writing it, so it was a real adventure to sort out the details. The urge to draw out the character ARC for Asra Aeilstrom or map theā¦
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Writer In Motion 2020 | The Prompt Has Dropped
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Blog Tour: Excerpt of The Lost City by Amanda Hocking
Excerpts! Excerpts! Read all about this YA Fantasy by @Amanda_Hocking. This hidden gem ticks all the boxes for us, and then some! #newrelease #YA #bookbuzz #bookboost
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Lord of the Readathon: So It Begins
Did light prevail or have I fallen into darkness? Is this Hobbit doomed to become a Gollum? It's all revealed in this #Lordofthereadathon post š
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Ā Ever since I took a class two quarters ago called Tolkien: A Mythology For England, Iāve been slowly dipping my toes back into his works andā¦
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Attack On TBR: Witches, Fae, And Breaking Up With Blake
The latest Attack On TBR: Witches, Fae, And Breaking Up With Blake #currentlyreading #bookishthoughts
Hello, darling readers. ITāS FRIDAY!!! ThereāsĀ nothing more exciting to me than a weekend full of book hauls, tea, fun treats, and mail surprises. Itās been over a month since we last took a peek at the reads I revived from the TBR grave, and thereās so much to discuss! From witches and wicked faeries toĀ sassy serial killers and unrelenting darkness, April was packed so manyamazing stories.ā¦
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Excerpt: A Touch of Ruin by Scarlett St. Clair
Ā A Touch of Ruin Scarlett St. Clair (Hades & Persephone #2) Publication date: April 23rd 2020 Genres: Adult, Paranormal, Romance
Persephoneās relationship with Hades has gone public and the resulting media storm disrupts her normal life and threatens to expose her as the Goddess of Spring.
Hades, God of the Dead, is burdened by a hellish past that everyoneās eager to expose in an effort to warnā¦
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Blog Blitz: Excerpt of The Crystal War by Tracy Auerbach
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The line between human and monster is not as clear cut as they once thought.
In the weeks since her escape from the hell of the Eastern Fortress, things have grown more complicated for Kai. She cast her lot with her brotherās self-absorbed boyfriend, whoā¦
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Attack On TBR: A Feast of Vampires, Samurai, and Space Ships
Hey all! Want to know what I'm up to, bookwise? Check out my new ATTACK ON TBR post: A Feast of Vampires, Samurai, and Spaceships!
Iāve got problems, and all of them are related to my Babylon Tower of books I own, but haveĀ never read.Ā Since transferring to theĀ University ofĀ Washington, creating Bookish Valhalla, and diving into literary internships, I devoted most of my free time to either reading for authors or studying for exams; I donāt regret a single day of it!
However, I domiss digging around in my TBR pile and readingā¦
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DNF: House of Earth & Blood by Sarah J. Maas
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Disclaimer: I received an ARC of this story from Netgalley in exchange for my honest review.
I tried, tried, tried, but for the life of me, I couldnāt finish this book. My experience with Maas is not unlike a rickety roller coaster: Iām certain the whole thing will crumble; I brace myself for the thrill of the fall, but when the ride is finally over, Iām actually moredisappā¦
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Book Review: Swallowtail by Brenna Twohy
Welp, I finally got around to reviewing Swallowtail by Brenna Twohy. And here, my lovlies, are my thoughts.
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Blog Tour: Interview With B.R. Myers, Author of ROGUE PRINCESS
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Rogue Princess B.R. Myers Published by: Swoon Reads Publication date: January 21st 2020 Genres: Retelling, Science Fiction, Young Adult
A princess fleeing an arranged marriage teams up with a snarky commoner to foil a rebel plot in B. R. MyersāāÆRogue Princess, a gender-swapped sci-fi YA retelling ofāÆCinderella.
Princess Delia knows her duty: She must choose a prince to marry in order to secure anā¦
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Blog Tour Blitz: What Lies In Paradise by Leah Cupps
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Blog Blitz Tour: Sneak Peek Of Starlight by P.S Malcolm
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A treaty upholds the peaceful lands of Ersarenceā who have suffered from the spilt blood of their humble goddess, Titania, which stains the hands of the ruthless Urenphians.
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