(I NOT YELL, MY HEAD WORK DIFFERENT)
LOVE YOUR REWRITE BLITZØ BUT I WANT ASK YOU ABOUT
YOU SAY YOU ARE TRY TO BE BETTER WRITER BY REWRITE, DO THAT MEAN YOU HAS REWRITE STORY OR JUST CHARACTERS? LIKE WRITE EPISODES?
AND WHAT YOU ARE CHANGE CHARACTERS? LIKE AGE? LOONA & OCTAVIA ACT YOUNG WHAT THEY SURE BE, WORK BETTER IF THEY WERE YOUNG, VIA AS 12-14 (BUT IN YEARS,SHE VERY OLDER) AND LOONA AS 17-19, OR KEEP THEIR SAME AGE BUT REWRITE OR MAKE SENSE WHY THEY ACT LIKE THAT
AND RELATIONSHIP, M&M IS SWEET BUT SEEING MILLIE GIVE "YOU CAN DO IT" OR "THERE THERE" AND MOXXIE ISN'T GIVE SAME, I KNOW SHE SEEING DON'T NEED BUT WHEN SHE GET POPULAR AND HE WAS IGNORED (LIKE HAS SOMETIME MILLIE IS IGNORED MOST EP) HE WAS MAD, AND BLITZØ & STOLAS IS BIG MESS, I BE FINE IF STOLAS IS EVIL OR ISN'T THERE BUT IS, HOW YOU WORK IT?
AND "VILLAIN" FEMALE CHARACTERS ARE STELLA (WHO WAS RIGHT BE ANGRY TO STOLAS, SHE DID GO TOO FAR WHEN SHE PUT HIT ON HIM BUT SHOW MADE SEE STOLAS ISN'T BAD GUY BUT SHE IS) GLITZ AND GLAM (WHO WANT REPLACE FIZZ BUT DID NOTHING MEAN TO HIM, FIZZ SEEING HE WOULD CLOSE TO RETIRING JESTER BUT SHOW ACT THEY WAS MEAN GIRL WHO BULLY HIM) AND SINNERS WOMEN (WHO WAS ANGRY HER HUSBAND SLEEP WITH OTHER PEOPLE, YES SHE HATE QUEER BUT SEEING IS HURT HER WHAT HE DID TO HER BUT SHOW BLITZØ DID NOTHING WRONG AND HE "DIDN'T" BRONK UP)
Thank you for coming back and asking me questions it’s highly appreciated.
I haven’t actually rewritten any episodes I’ll probably do that when I figure it out all the characters and changes to the world building. I have vague ideas but nothing near concrete I have only really focus on rewriting characters and their designs.
The main reason why I do this is because it’s fun and it’s a good way of expressing my creative muscles I look at media. I have problem with and I try to analyse what I would do which helped me be a better critical thinker but I don’t have actually any real like vitriolic hatred towards the shows. I have some problems and really need to be addressed like how they treat sexual assault victims and Brandon being racist but no actual hate I just do it for the fun of it.
Also Luna in my version is actually a teenager she’s 14 because I do agree a lot of her character makes so much more sense being younger but I’ll get into that when I post her as for Octavia I haven’t sorted her out yet.
Also, Millie and Moxie are not in relationship here I’ll get into more detail about it with their post but I’ve changed Millie‘s character a lot and Moxie has a big fat crush on her that never gets reciprocated cause she’s a lesbian. 
I’m trying not to spoil my own stuff so just be patient hopefully it’s worth it 💖