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16th chapter of my Vessel Noelle four-way slashfic finally done!
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An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
16th chapter of my Vessel Noelle four-way slashfic finally done!
i'm sorry
what's wrong with her genuinely
sopping wet cats
xmas baby
Finally, a machine to thrash your own ass!
to those not here with us today
galsei and broelle
someone mail me 1000000 suselles RIGHT. NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dess not being saved in the end of Deltarune would be wildly out of character for Susie
Been mulling this one over for a while, so long rant/theory/analysis incoming.
I just don't see it not happening. It's completely out of character for her. It goes against the themes of the game. I've seen interpretations of potential endings where the game focuses on the aesop of moving on from the past. But to be honest? Let me tell you something. And FYI, this is only directed at anyone who thinks she won't be. For everyone else, this is just semi-serious exaggerated funny rhetoric.
So.
Look at me. Now look at Susie.
Susie.
Are you seriously going to tell me.
That Susie "Hope Crossed on her Heart" Motherfucking Deltarune
The girl who told you your choices don't matter, negated your LITERAL GOD POWERS OF CUTSCENE PAUSING (repeatedly), who declared that she would NEVER let the tragedy happen, and whose optimism is so infectiously powerful that it causes LITERALLY everyone around her to gain character development.
Would ever be caught dead or alive in a million years watching Noelle --- THE PERSON SHE LOVES MOST --- CRY, because she just learned her sister is DEAD and GONE FOREVER, and saying "Yeah this is fine"?
Seriously?
No. That would be WILDLY fucking out of character for her. That would be character assassination. She would not fucking say that. She would not fucking do that. Susie would say, "I don't accept this. I WILL save her whether anyone likes it or not. NOBODY makes my friends cry. I will kill GOD if I have to."
And one might say, "Oh, but what if she can't?" Okay, first off? Yes she can. How many fucking rules and impossible fights has she broken by now? With the player's help, this girl is damn near unstoppable. All she needs is one monumentally stupid idea and it will follow her 100% successful track record of dumb ideas that work. You will click Susie's Idea and then she will kick god's ass. That's how Susie works.
But fine. Let's assume she can't. Here's why that's FUCKING STUPID and also CONFLICTS WITH THE THEMES. It is deceptively simple: Deltarune is a legend about HOPES and DREAMS. This categorically excludes a tragic, sad ending where you just have to accept a monumentally bad outcome for something.
But, we already got the dreams covered, right? Shadow crystals. The pure crystal. What's the opposite of a broken dream? A fulfilled one. There's your dreams. Now what do we have to cover the hope part?
JUST SAID IT. IT'S FUCKING SUSIE.
Not only do we have undertale telling us that we can even save someone who is already dead, even if they are still kinda cursed (dragon blazers 2, btw, the cursed sister), but we ALSO know that Toby Fox is not the type of author who just tells you to go fuck yourself when you make an effort to do everything right, AND after BAITING YOU WITH HINTS AND MESSAGES that tell you of this mysterious character who everyone wants to find, and telling you to do it!
The ARG tells you to find her. Every character who mentions her misses her. The entire catalyst of the game is her vanishing. Nobody can fucking move on from it unless they either get closure or get her back. She's not even explicitly dead like Mari was!
You can't just tease an audience with the prospect of finding a lost person and bringing them back only to hit them with the UMM ACKSHUALLY THEY'RE DEAD GET OVER IT LOL hammer. This isn't Omori (where it worked) and that's not toby, and he's the one who made this damn legend up in the first place. I don't care how closely he worked with Omocat, no way in hell is that happening. That would be out of character for HIM.
So if that's the case, Susie's hope HAS to succeed. It just doesn't make sense for it not to. It would leave the story on an EXTREMELY unsatisfying note with a cliche'd played-straight aesop from an author who is known for subverting your expectations in creative ways that are impossible to predict because you can't penetrate his mind.
So it's out of character for Susie. It's out of character for Toby. It conflicts with the main themes of the game. It leaves the player unsatisfied after years of teasing. It leaves the characters unsatisfied. It provides NO additional substance to the story that has not already been explored by many other pieces of media. It does not pay off the buildup to her. And it is not. Just. It is not deserved, for ANYONE.
These are all of the reasons why it is HIGHLY unlikely (and inappropriate) that Dess is not going to be saved at the end of the game. I just can't see it happening, there is no fucking way that would be a good enough ending to justify this two-decade-long crusade to make a dream reality. It just doesn't make any sense. And if her being saved isn't in any ending, I will consider it a dealbreaker unless there is something absolutely insane included that makes it magically okay.
End of rant. Try not to take this post/theory/analysis too seriously, I'm just venting 3AM thoughts that aren't directed at anything in particular.
Made a Desselle fankid illustration for my fic. I'll put it on there next time I post a chapter. Next up is the Kralsei fankid.
Shoutout to playdoe and Magik Woman for inspiring this.
Ch 7 Side B aborted
smells like holiday baking
A “what if” / kinda prediction for @j-h-cubedman ‘s Snowblind au :3
Just as they finally corner the Thorned Heir, the SOUL vacates it’s vessel, entering The Witch instead. they’re taken prisoner, kept alive for questioning in the hopes they may know how to defeat and rescue Noelle. Kris, now freed from their control, has a bit to say on their own feelings… unfortunately, not many people are willing to hear it.
I already liked Noelle's character a lot in chapters 1-4, but I love how chapter 5 expands on her - particularly in the ways she's secretly much more similar to her mother than previously shown.
previous chapters show very well the ways in which she takes after her father. she's kind, she's funny, she tries to be easy-going, she's able to get along with difficult people. she's drawn to assertive women. while Rudy seems rougher than her on the surface, it's clear he's actually the level-headed one between himself and Carol, and in most circumstances, Noelle tries to be the voice of reason with her friends in a similar way.
in chapter 5, it turns out she also has that hidden iron core that Carol has. I think it's likely she normally hides it on purpose because she's trying so hard to be agreeable and just get through the day, but it's clearly been in there all along. it's somewhat more subtle in the normal route, where she gradually becomes more confident, but in the weird route, her recent traumatic experiences cause her to snap and suddenly change drastically. like her mother, she works hard, she's diligent, and she sticks to her assigned social role, even though none of it seems to be making her happy. she's going through the motions, waiting for something to change. they both miss Dess to the point of stagnation. once Noelle has become distant enough from other people (through leveling up/"becoming strong"), she begins showing the same calculating streak and fierce determination that Carol seems to have. she becomes aggressive, controlling, and overly goal-oriented to the point of scaring her loved ones. when they show distress, she pressures them into following her orders, prioritizing her goals first and foremost, no matter how badly it scars those she cares about. she cracks that same cold, lopsided smile that her mother does (pulling up further on their left sides) when something finally seems to be going her way.
idk, I just love that for her. extremely interesting twist on the "goody two-shoes girl next door" archetype. a sudden and shocking twist that actually isn't so shocking when you remember who her mother is. I wonder if that's why we were introduced to Carol in chapter 4 specifically - first we see how drastically different she seems to be from her otherwise warm and kindhearted family, then we find out that her youngest daughter takes after her in some surprising ways after all ...
I'm sure there's a good amount of people here that need to fill it out lol