Raymond Carver, from Late Fragment
wallacepolsom

izzy's playlists!
tumblr dot com
d e v o n

PR's Tumblrdome
sheepfilms
dirt enthusiast
Show & Tell
Today's Document
h
Lint Roller? I Barely Know Her
todays bird

ellievsbear

★

No title available
Not today Justin
Sade Olutola

No title available
Xuebing Du

@theartofmadeline

seen from Mexico
seen from Greece
seen from Argentina
seen from Argentina

seen from T1

seen from United States

seen from Saudi Arabia

seen from Indonesia

seen from Japan
seen from Malaysia
seen from Türkiye

seen from France

seen from Malaysia
seen from Vietnam

seen from United Kingdom
seen from Philippines
seen from United States
seen from United States

seen from Indonesia
seen from Greece
@portraiits
Raymond Carver, from Late Fragment
All The Things You Are - Helen Forrest
…and for a moment Kaz was a boy again, sure that there was magic in this world.
The famous Crows Don’t Have Any Manners scene, a commission for @brambleberrycottage! Had to freshen it up a bit cuz my Kaz default changed a Lot in a year
howl’s secret garden ✨🌷
reading advice (for writers)
you know those posts that are like, “remember when we used to read books and now we all have no attention span because of the internet.” then there’s the very contrived advice that’s like, “if you want to be a writer you have to read”??
well i think they’re completely true but they also really suck, and we of the youngish adult writers of 2018 have it pretty hard, especially those of us in fandom who enjoy reading fanfic more than original fic because it’s mostly tagged properly and possesses the emotional catharsis we’re looking for, pretty much guaranteed.
that said, i think it’s really important – whether you write fanfic, ofic, or both – to read traditionally published work, in part because it can help better inform your fanfic, but also because it will help develop your writing overall. and if you’re interested in ofic, it’s pretty much a necessity to read.
so, i just graduated from an MFA program in creative writing, and contrary to popular opinion, the MFA does not actually teach you how to write. it gives you space to write, and mostly, it teaches you how to read as a writer.
so here is everything i’ve learned about reading as a writer over the past two years:
you do not have to read anything you don’t want to read
part of the problem with “read everything you can!” advice is that there is a lot of stuff out there, and a ton of it doesn’t jive with your interests. moreover, there’s a kind of pressure to read the Classics just to say you’ve read them when in fact a lot of them are boring, irrelevant, and dare i say overrated. so here is me giving you permission: you don’t have to pick up Hemingway or Faulkner or whoever else to be a good writer. life is too short to force yourself to read dead white dudes.
if a book doesn’t grab you by the first 10%, put it down
this is what has helped me more than anything else as a reader, because i found i would commit myself to a boring book and then never want to read it, so i would stop reading for months at a time. so, when you pick out a book, go to the last page and check the number. promise yourself you’ll read 10% of the book. 400 pages? read to page 40 and ask yourself, “do i really want to turn the page? if i put this book down, would i want to pick it back up again later?” if the answer is no, return it to the library or wherever you got it. try the next book in your pile. your TBR list is long; be merciless.
but if you want to make it look like you read the book…
commit to 25%. then go to the wikipedia article, read the plot summary, and fast forward to the last 10-15 pages. bam. you’ve more or less read the book. bonus points if you watch the movie, too. so if you’re really committed to reading Ulysses or whatever but you don’t want to slog through it, you can digest enough to be able to hold a conversation about it in a few hours and move on with your life. you can even pretend you enjoyed it and found it a formative reading experience that helped shape your understanding of the work of fiction, really, absolutely groundbreaking, etc etc. this is especially helpful if you find yourself anywhere in the literary sphere because other writers will expect you to be familiar with the canon.
read selfishly and take tools from everything you read
when you read anything, even the stuff you don’t like, ask yourself, “what tools can i take for my own writing?” let’s say you really love the plot structure – write it down somewhere so you remember to try it out for your own story. if you love the lyricism of the sentences, find a few sentences you really like and jot them down by hand, inspect what about them makes you love them so much. steal aspects of characters you admire, pacing, conflict, stakes. steal as much as you can without stealing the words themselves. you can even use this for things you don’t like by rephrasing the question: “what is it about this story i would like to avoid in my own work?” pivot every single thing you read to be about you and your writing. take notes. mark up and highlight your book if you have to. reading as a writer is not a passive activity but an active one. you’re not being entertained, you’re learning. so let published works teach you.
carve time out of your day to read
at 7pm every day, i put my phone down and pick up an actual physical book. this is my personal preference – i have no beef at all with ebooks, but honestly, i get so tired of staring at lit screens all day, and paper books without the distraction of my phone is such a nostalgic feeling for me, back when i was 14 and the library was my second home and if someone wanted my attention they had to call me on a landline. if you had the same upbringing, dedicating some time to read a physical book will do you wonders. if ebooks are your thing, it’s still important to schedule reading time for yourself, not as an obligation to uphold, but as something to do that’s good for you and that you enjoy.
write letters to your favorite authors!!
seriously. if you love a book, let the author know. they will not be annoyed or upset. they will be thrilled. it’s a good way to network with other writers, and it’s a great practice of literary citizenship.
when someone recommends a book to you, ask why
this is something i’ve only recently learned to do, as someone who gets book recommendations pretty much constantly. if the person knows you decently, i don’t think it’s out of line to ask, “what would i specifically like about this?” because then that will tell if you if the person is only recommending it because they like it, not because they think you’ll like it. if the person knows your writing, it’s fair to ask, “how is this book in conversation with my work?” so you have a head start in the kinds of tools you’ll want to take from it.
follow your aesthetic instincts
as a writer, honing your aesthetic will always be one of your highest aims, which means constantly seeking out writers whose aesthetics you admire and analyzing what it is you admire about it. “aesthetic” is kind of a vague term, but it refers to your overall vibe – the things you write about and why you write about them. my aesthetic is more or less “midwestern class warfare meets sexual identity crises with a lot of dark humor,” so i tend to look for other writers who share facets of that aesthetic and i inspect what’s working for them, where they publish, what their influences are, etc. i try to read both within my aesthetic but also far outside of it too. for example, i love historical fiction but i know i’ll never, ever write it. but i appreciate the aesthetic, and i can take tools from it like dedication to detail, internal conflicts, etc.
read short fiction (please)
this is my personal plea. short stories are a great way to find authors whose work is in conversation with yours, so that you can then go check out their novels with a good idea already of what you like about them. short stories are all over the internet via literary and genre mags. they’re a much smaller commitment than novels and tend to have just as much emotional impact (if done well) as novels. more importantly you’ll always have recs for your friends, and it’s a lot easier getting someone to read a 6k story you enjoyed than a 60k novel.
resources
don’t have time to read but like to listen? try the new yorker fiction and writers’ voice podcasts
like marking up books but don’t want to buy them new? check out thriftbooks (my favorite site on the internet – the link here will get you 15% off!)
finished a book you like but don’t know what to read next? try what should i read next
want to stay apprised of the goings on in the modern literary community? subscribe to the lithub newsletter and arts & letters daily, two newsletters i’ve been subscribed to for years
as always i’m glad to answer any questions! happy reading!
writing advice tag
Megan Fox as Jennifer Check JENNIFER’S BODY (2009), dir. Karyn Kusama.
how do u write dialogues? those that "capture dramatic moments and develop experiences, events, and characters" in a narrative,,, could you please share some tips or just things that u think about or do when writing fics? thank you in advance & hope u have a nice day or night!
i think a huge part of it comes down to your character’s personality. that will greatly shape what your dialogue looks like and how they act. through the dialogue, you can showcase certain aspects of their personality or their backstory. for me, when i’m writing my dialogue, i really focus on how the scene is playing out in my mind and let the characters develop their own dialogue and i just type what they say to each other.
if you want dramatic moments just think of things you’ve heard or read in the past that made your heart pound. was it because of what they said or the way the line was presented? is your character super bold and upfront or are they more subtle and they drop hints instead of being direct?
the key to good dialogue is a solid, concrete idea of the people your characters are. after you know what they would do and how they would act, it’s pretty easy to figure out what they would say because it’ll align with their personality.
Country Home Collection, 1992
A lot of writers don’t know what happens next in the piece. Others won’t start up a story unless they know exactly where everything goes.
A lot of writers have a million and one ideas and would trade anything for the focus to have just one. Others only have one and would kill for the chance to come up with something new.
A lot of writers feel they’re not doing enough. Others did so much they wrote themselves to burnout.
There are a lot of ways to write. A lot of different paths you can take. Each have their flaws and their strengths, much like the writers themselves. Don’t spend the energy comparing yourself, alright? Do what you have to for things to work for you.
this is kind of a strange question, but how do you make plot ??? i always get stuck because i can either see the story going in 167873 different directions or even none at all ! do you have any advice on how to overcome this ??
not a strange question! every writer struggles with this at some point because some stories are so expansive before you even start. i think the best thing to do when developing your plot is figuring out how you want it to start and how you want it to end. it’s totally normal to be able to see the story going down multiple different paths. that’s how you can even write considering writing is ultimately a critical thinking activity where you’re weighing out different alternatives and choosing to expand upon the “best outcome” for what you have in mind.
once you have your beginning and ending, it narrows down the paths of the story quite a bit. the next thing is to just take it one scene at a time. you finished the opening so what do you want to happen next? you’ll find that the more your story progresses and the more your characters develop, there really is only a few ways for you to tell the story the way you want to tell it. in my case, it usually ends up being narrowed down to one path about a quarter of the way through. other options just become unrealistic with the way the plot has moved and others are unreasonable because the characters just wouldn’t do that anymore. i’ve deleted plenty of scenes because i will revisit the idea and think “well that won’t work because this happened earlier and my character wouldn’t actually react that way”. this is normal, this is okay, this is good. it means you’re in touch with your characters and your story enough that you know something just won't fit and the door is now open to find something that does.
if a story has endless ideas when you first start it, good. it means you’re going to have a well thought out story that has a ton of detail and enough content to make a decent length book or story. if there’s nothing going on up there but you really like the concept, maybe consider putting that particular idea on the back burner for a bit. every time you think of that story and have an idea for it, add it to the list for you to eventually come back to develop the plot (this is the reason i have a ton of wips that haven’t even made it to google docs yet).
on writing unlikeable characters
so you want to write an asshole. great. they’re my favorites almost every single time. the problem is that writing a character who has negative traits front and center is a difficult feat. if this character is the main character or love interest, it’s even harder. while they can be a lot of fun to write and even more fun to read, unlikeable characters take the most care and dedication when writing.
the biggest and most difficult part of developing this type of character is giving them a reason to being the way they are. it has to be reasonable, relatable, forgivable, and understandable. the reader has to know why the character acts the way they do and say “yeah, that makes sense. i totally get it and am able to see past all their flaws because i understand the root of the issue.” they have to see them as a person and be able to put themselves in the character’s shoes.
something that ends up happening quite often is that in the determination to write a dickish character, the character is rude literally constantly. i as a reader will always dislike a character if they are literally never nice. not once. you have to humanize them. they have to have a slip in the facade, a soft spot, a person that they just can’t be mean to. no one is mean every second of their life and you have to keep that in mind. everyone has their moments that make you think, “meh, they’re not that bad.” once your reader thinks that the character isn’t that bad, you’re golden. you can turn their standoffish nature into a charm and it makes the tender moments that much sweeter.
you could also have the flip side where the unlikable character isnt really all that unlikeable, they were just mean one time and that was the extent of it but the story keeps playing on the fact that this person is the worst! now your characters all look weak and like they complain way too much. you have to commit and sell it while also still maintaining that balance of rude but still human. if you want them to be seen as the rude character, make that the number one trait in their personality. once again just make sure that is not the entirety of their personality.
lastly, if this is someone the readers are supposed to root for, give them a reason to want to support them. this is where tragic backstories and trauma come into play. you can also have the classic unable to communicate despite wanting to and the i dont know how to accept kindness because i’ve always kept my distance. this is where your explanation of the character’s disposition really comes into play. no one is going to care about the character unless they have a reason to want to. no one is going to want the pair to get together if there has never been a glimpse of interest or kindness. if there is no chemistry, only borderline harassment, you don’t have a love story, you have a story of abuse and unhealthy relationships.
how do you go about plotting/mapping your stories beforehand? i'm finding i need to write more off a plan now, whereas before i just sort of rolled with it and never put much effort into planning or even editing ( a whole other topic blegh). is there a specific method you use for it?
I think first things first, write down everything you want to happen. don’t worry about organizing it just yet just put down everything that comes to mind. once you do all of that, focus on the organization. put it in order then look for areas that could have more scenes or details or build up and brainstorm how to go about that. I think the biggest thing is just getting what you have in your brain onto a page before you actually wrote that scene. make the outline flexible because things will most likely change when you start writing and you’ll come up with something, want to take away another. always be updating it
I also never really put much effort into planning and that’s a skill I’ve had to learn with my recent story as well as my book. I’ve been putting mine in the form of a checklist. sometimes it’s the bullets aren’t even plot points, they’re conversations I’ve thought of and I put it around the scene I think it’ll fit best with. know that you options are limitless when it comes to an outline and I’m sure once you start to do them more, you’ll find what works best for you!!!!
very thankful piccrew is a thing because it’s allowed me to create harrison and aster the way I picture them in the book!!!
thank you so much for helping me with my dialogue heavy problem! the last thing i’d love to ask you is, whenever you write from the third point of view, do you tend to describe feelings of both characters or shift between the reader and the main character, or maybe only focus on one of them? hope my question makes sense <3
i typically focus on one at a time and then note if there is a pov shift. i like having it be told from one character just because to me its easier to explore that one character in great depth. some people like having it told from everyone's because it gives a more complete picture of the story. it 100% is up to what you prefer and what you feel like is the best way to tell your story. both are totally valid, i just see myself straying more towards third person limited!
hi there ! whenever i write fictions, i tend to make it dialogue heavy and it’s also the reason why i keep deleting and rewriting my works all over again. i wish i could describe things like other writers do with ease. any tips? :( will be forever grateful to you
as someone who is also extremely dialogue heavy, i relate to this. i think the first thing is being comfortable with your writing style. there’s nothing wrong with having a lot of dialogue. you learn a lot about a character and how they feel and their traits through conversations with others. it’s such a crucial part of writing and a lot of people really struggle with it. pat yourself on the back for liking it. you deserve credit for that.
the thing that can be difficult is finding balance between the dialogue and literally... everything else.
if you feel the most comfortable with the dialogue, write all of that out first. just go ahead and get it out of your system. then reread the whole scene. make notes of how a certain line is said when you picture it happening. how is the character standing or sitting? what are their facial expressions looking like? also, if you’re telling from a specific character’s point of view, how are they feeling while this conversation is happening? what’s the thought process while the conversation is taking place? all of the things can be talked about while the conversation is occurring.
the biggest way i incorporate details into my writing is focusing on the characters' emotions and how they are viewing situations and their environment. if you prefer writing dialogue, i wouldn’t be surprised if you enjoyed writing character centered stories. i see those going hand in hand often. take advantage of that and focus on your character! explore their motivations and their inner dialogue and what makes them tick.
you can also make note of the way others describe and figure out how to incorporate that. what writer just makes you feel so connected to the story because of the way they write and the descriptions they use? how would a similar approach work in your writing style? never be afraid to learn from others! i do it all the time it’s a great way to develop and broaden your style.
dialogue heavy is never a bad thing, it’s just a difference in style. it’s normal to have that as a style considering most of our lives are spent talking and communicating with others. do not sell yourself short for recreating life in the way you write.
hey there! so i wanted to ask you for any tips/advice you might have for writing a verbal self portrait . i would also like to know how you would write one about yourself. thank you❤️
it’ll definitely depend on if it’s for a school essay (like admissions) or just for yourself
if it’s for yourself, i personally (this is important because how i approach something might not always be the answer) would take a more abstract route? find a location or environment or setting that you’ve always felt at peace in. then slowly add details that reflect parts of you. for example, mine would be a coffee shop where the baristas all have very different tastes in music so the mood and atmosphere changes with each new shift. the interior is modern and minimalistic, but the walls are covered with new pieces of art every month. only a few people go regularly creating an environment that feels like home despite never truly knowing anyone. now that i have all that, i can structure it into a story like delivery that will best display my skills while also giving an insight to my voice and personality.
if you want to take a more literal approach, don’t be afraid to make it flowy and flowery. romanticize yourself because you deserve to be seen in that light. discuss your best traits as if you’re the only one to have them. make everything seem magical and new and exciting because in a way, it is. you could use this to present to someone who doesn’t know you. think about how you can present yourself in a realistic way while also having the other person be like “wow, i have got to know this person.” don’t be afraid to be bold and own up to everything that you thinks makes you special because at the end of the day, even if you might feel ordinary, there’s only one of you and that alone has so much value!
if you have any more questions or want to get more... direct(?) advice, feel free to come back with a bit more detail or def dm me!!!!!!!
how to know if your friends are the real ones?
thats a hard question just because i think that we all wonder that same thing even when we’re surrounded by people that truly seem to love us.
i know i personally did not have a group of close friends that i truly felt like i could confide in until i was in college. i think i knew the difference almost automatically when i became close with my absolute best friend. there was something very comfortable that just came with being around her. i felt like i could be myself. i knew that i could express an opinion and even if she disagreed, i knew it wouldn't be this huge sore spot or potential conflict. i also always knew that i could come to her with anything and everything and while never being judged, be told the reality of the situation and have it be unclouded by biases or any preconceived notions. she was there for me while also always telling me what i needed to hear not what i wanted.
i think the true basis for real friendship comes with comfort and intimacy. if you do not feel comfortable sharing with them and have reservations, that might be a red flag. if you feel as if you cannot fully express yourself, that is also probably an issue. if there’s just this underlying feeling that something is off despite not being able to put your finger on it, it might not be the most optimum friendship.
that’s not to say these things can not be fixed and therefore these aren’t true friends and you need to cut them off. however, if you do notice this, you probably need to bring it up if you value those people in your life so that they can even become true friends. friendship is a two-way street and you constantly have to be meeting each other's needs in order for the relationship to succeed. everything is a process of growth and you have to be willing to grow as well and do internal reflection on how you can also be a better friend