So in the Afterword Kurihara heavily implies that the body found in chapter 1 is actually Keita's body and that he's been dead since July
So ofc I had to go back through and make a timeline of events and sure enough the disappearance of Ayano's husband lines up with the time that the neighbor said they all moved out of the Toyko house
but while events prior to the beginning of the Authors story (i.e. events prior to September 2019) are fairly believable I actually struggled to piece together a timeline for the events the Author is present for
let me explain
so the story begins in September and the body is found outside the Tokyo house on September 8th
and making the assumption that this takes place the morning after Yanaoka asks the Author to inspect the Tokyo house floor plan
that would mean that the Author's place in the story starts September 7th.
After reading the article about the Tokyo the Author says "Even a week later, I couldn't forget the house."
Putting the date at around Sept. 15 when his editor suggests writing the article
assuming 2-3 to write the article it's published Sept 17-18?
then the first email from Yuzuki is received stating "I saw the the article you published the other day."
the phrase "the other day" can mean anything from 2 days to 2 weeks but Yuzuki says that she basically knew immediately after she read the article that it was abt the Tokyo house so I doubt she's gonna wait two weeks so I guessed that it was only 2-3days after the article published
so this email is probably sent somewhere between Sept. 19-21
and that's where things get real clunky
He meets with Yuzuki "the next Saturday" which would either be the 21 or 28th of September depending on which day he actually got the email between the 19th and 21st
this is when the Saitama House floor plan is introduced
after the meeting he goes home and calls Kurihara again, sends him the new blueprints, etc.
"I was awaken the next morning by the telephone ringing. it was Kurihara."
ok now it's the 22nd or 29th, (aka a Sunday keep that in mind)
but
now it's OCTOBER?!?!?
but even considering the article/email time line I created is wrong and he met with Yuzuki on October 5 or October 12
which would then put his meeting with Kurihara about the Saitama House on the 6th or 13th (and still on a Sunday)
he gets home, writes an email to Yuzuki and decides he's going to visit the Tokyo house in the morning
Monday the 7th or 14th
and then his day goes something like this
11a.m. - Meets with Kurihara at his flat
- Kurihara reveals Yuzuki isn't married to Kyoichi Miyae's wife
2:45p.m. -arrives at coffee shop for 2nd face to face with Yuzuki
- Yuzuki admits she's part of the Katabuchi family
- the Author calls Kurihara and they agree to meet up
- the 3 of the discuss the Katabuchi house at a rental office
6 p.m. - meeting adjorned they all return home
8p.m. -Yuzuki calls and asks for escort to Yoshie's flat the next night (a fucking Tuesday btw)
but
how can tomorrow be Monday if today is fricking Monday???!
assuming for Translation error
it's Tuesday October 8th or perhaps 15th or even the 22nd if my timeline is that far off
5p.m. - meet up with Yuzuki
5:30p.m. - pair arrives in Saitama
5:35-5:40p.m. (assuming a 5-10 min walk) - pair arrives Yoshie's flat
Yoshie shows them the Keita letter. Shows them the Left Hand ritual documents but then, but then
this shit
it's NOT the 25th you know why?!?!?
because October 25th is a fucking FRIDAY
and we allllll know it's flipping TUESDAY
there is NO WAY ITS NOT A TUESDAY SO WHAT THE HELL IS EVEN HAPPENING RIGHT NOW
....
anyway other then those discrepancies I thought the book was pretty intriguing, I like be invited to analyze the clues 😄
BokuAka Nation: Dare I ask? Is „In Another Life“ actually worth the emotional pain?
I don‘t want the meme answer about how you should not read it because it will ruin you emotionally, I want the real answer.
In my head it’s a really good story and I kinda have the urge to read it, but I‘m usually not an Angst enjoyer, especially not if there is no happy ending, so I‘m cautious…
So again: Is „In Another Life“ one of the best fics you’ve ever read?
"nothing is real atoms never touch each other youve never touched anything in your life" ok. well when i pet my dog he is soft and when he licks my hand it is wet and that is far more real to me than whatevers going on at an atomic level
nuclei don't touch, but the nucleus is not the core of reality. reality is made of electrons dancing. reality is made of bonds.
you pet your dog and the atoms that are you brush up against the atoms that are him, and the electrons that are you press into the electrons that are him, and both of them change their movement.
electrons of course are not really particles and do not really move.
you pet your dog and the electron-orbitals of your skin overlap with the electron-orbitals of his fur, and both are changed by the contact. you are not made of little motes floating alone in a void. you are a single unfathomable chord formed of a trillion vibrations, and so is he. and the note you play is changing at every moment by what you touch and how you breathe, and so is his. and atoms do not really have edges, and to touch is to interact, and when you put your hand on your dog the universe does not know that you are separate. the song expands to hold you both.
Actually if Michelle Benoit had survived she’d probably have been the one to pilot the podship to get Cress from the satellite, not Thorne.
She would have killed Sybil Mira right then and there. She couldn’t be manipulated. Jacin would be like, “I don’t suppose you killed her?” And Michelle would be like, “Bet.”
If Michelle Benoit had survived Paris and joined the Rampion crew… she would have ended Thorne’s literally nonexistent career. Would have called him Cadet… brooked no argument… his soul would shrivel every time she looked at him
It’s not a sound. The ???? is a break in the sound of the internal narrator reading it. It’s a look. It’s a facial expression. It’s slightly squinted eyes and a confused head shake. ???? represents, to me, not knowing what to say because you are so confused.
…..not even six hours later i got an offer of a well paying full time long-term job with free room and board in queens in nyc, allowing me independence and a way to escape an abusive situation and an unhealthy environment
likes charge reblogs cast, folks, this is the good luck post
the last time I reblogged this post right before I got a great job, in a permanent work-from-home position, with benefits, retirement, and a salary literally 3x what I was making before, doing something I really like.
ok I don’t know what it is about this post but I just found a job advert that perfectly matches my expertise and it’s paid very decently. aaand it’s 1h drive from where I live now! (rn my office is 2h by flight and I pay taxes in another country so if I want free medical help I have to take plane)