I don’t know if this could be considered a request but if it is then please ignore it!! But do you have any tips on writing Sunday?
Of course — and don’t worry, I don’t treat this as a request so much as a chance to help you explore Sunday more deeply. Writing him can be both rewarding and tricky, because he’s a character of layered contradictions: idealist and skeptic, leader and exile, serene yet conflicted. Here's some tips that could be useful, reminder I'm not great at these so I apologise in advance 🙏
Sunday speaks with gentleness, never needing to raise his voice to command attention. His words carry weight not through volume, but through measured intent. He often drifts toward poetic language—abstract metaphors, riddles, or dreamlike turns of phrase. Even when speaking plainly, his word choice can carry a sense of distance or layered meaning. Pauses, unfinished sentences, and silences can be just as expressive as words. In rare moments of sincerity or vulnerability, he may drop the lofty phrasing for something startlingly simple and human—those moments stand out all the more.
He approaches others like a philosopher, framing conversations around questions rather than answers. He observes, nudges, and reflects, letting people reveal themselves. His compassion is always present, but filtered through caution—his guilt makes him wary of overstepping. Even as he tries to move on, his mind returns again and again to the “what ifs”: what if he was right about Sweetdream Paradise, what if suffering really could be erased? That lingering idealism haunts him.
At his core, he’s torn. He doesn’t truly believe happiness in reality can last, yet he secretly wants someone to prove him wrong. He struggles between the urge to control and the desire to care; once he thought saving people for them was mercy, now he’s learning that true care requires letting go. His halo and wings tie him to his heritage, but also to his trauma, making him question whether they’re blessings or curses he can never shed.
When writing him, lean into the theme of redemption as an ongoing process, not a final victory. Show him stumbling, hesitating, doubting—his journey forward is slow and imperfect. His presence embodies the conflict between escapist bliss and painful authenticity, which can be highlighted in any interaction. His growth is most tangible in companionship: with Robin, with fellow travelers, with those who challenge or trust him.
Dreamlike imagery suits his thoughts—mist, echoes, twilight, starlight. Contrast works well too: light and dark, silence and sound, stillness and motion. Subtle physical cues can reveal what he won’t say outright: a flutter of his ear-wings, the stillness of his scarf, the tilt of his halo.
In short, he is someone who once tried to be a savior, failed, and is now relearning how to simply be human. His dignity is real, but so is his fragility. He isn’t cold—he’s careful. Not hopeless—just waiting for hope to prove itself true.
Some tips I gave to my friend a long time ago, might be useful 🧍♀️
1. Embrace the Duality in His Nature
Internal Struggles: Focus on the tension between Sunday’s idealism and the harsh realities he’s faced. His past actions—like his endorsement of the Sweetdream Paradise—are born from empathy, yet they are deeply flawed. Show his struggle to reconcile these contrasting sides. When writing his inner thoughts, let his self-doubt and guilt seep through. Let his inner dialogue be fragmented, at times veering between regret and hope, idealism and pragmatism.
The Interrogator vs. The Answerer: Play with these two voices in his head. Use them to guide his decision-making, where the Interrogator is stern and demands he take responsibility, while the Answerer is weary, haunted, and nostalgic for a simpler, more hopeful time. These inner debates can be illustrated through prose that ebbs and flows, sometimes moving into more abstract or allegorical language.
2. Highlight His Empathy, But Show the Cost
Compassionate, Yet Detached: Sunday’s empathy is vast, but it often conflicts with his more detached, philosophical mindset. Let his kindness shine through in small gestures, like protecting the vulnerable or offering counsel, but don’t shy away from showing how this takes a toll on him. His detachment sometimes comes off as cold or distant, but it’s a defense mechanism—he doesn’t want to get too close and risk more trauma.
Relationships as Vulnerability: When writing interactions with others, especially romantic ones, allow him to struggle with his feelings. He might be emotionally distant or hesitant at first, but this could evolve into moments where his guard slips. Let him self-sabotage at times or retreat because he’s afraid of being hurt or causing harm to those he loves.
3. Play with the Concept of Dreams and Reality
The Sweetdream Paradise and the Nature of Suffering: Sunday’s philosophy about dreams is a central aspect of his character. He believes that dreams can be both a sanctuary and a trap, offering peace but also robbing individuals of growth and individuality. Use dream imagery or illusions in his reflections or in the way he sees the world. Perhaps he sees beauty in moments of joy, but is always aware of the darkness lurking behind them.
Idealism vs. Reality: His ideals are a powerful force in his actions, but they are often tested by reality. Allow moments of dissonance where he tries to maintain his utopian vision but faces overwhelming evidence that it might not be sustainable. Let these cracks in his belief system show, both in his words and his actions.
4. Subtle Body Language & Tone
Wings and Halo as Emotional Indicators: Use Sunday’s physical traits to subtly express his emotional state. His wings might flutter nervously when he’s anxious or unsure, or they might droop slightly when he’s feeling overwhelmed. His halo could glow brighter or dim in moments of self-reflection or inner
Gentle, Detached Tone: Sunday speaks in a calm, almost otherworldly way, with a tone that suggests wisdom but also distance. His words may sound philosophical or cryptic, but there’s always an underlying layer of emotion. You can depict his guarded nature by having him speak in a soft, measured way, often veiling his true emotions under a mask of calm composure.
5. Let His Past Guide His Present
Haunted by Trauma: Sunday’s past experiences are key to his current struggles. His history with the Oak Family, the Dreamscape, and the Order all weigh on him. Let the echoes of these experiences influence his present actions and thoughts. He may not always be fully conscious of the impact, but moments of stress or isolation will bring these memories rushing back.
Search for Redemption: Writing Sunday’s journey is about the pursuit of redemption, so include moments where he confronts his past mistakes. This could take the form of dialogue where he reflects on his previous decisions, or situations where he is forced to make amends. His path to healing won’t be linear, so allow setbacks and moments of doubt to punctuate his growth.
6. Focus on His Perception of Others
Psychological Insight: Sunday has a tendency to psychoanalyze those around him, looking deeper into their emotions, motives, and struggles. When writing his interactions with others, make use of this trait. He may often see the best in people, but he also knows the vulnerabilities they hide. Let him offer insightful, sometimes painfully accurate, observations, even when he struggles to apply the same understanding to himself.
Personal Connections: His relationships with others, whether they are allies or adversaries, should be deeply intertwined with his personal growth. Explore how he reacts to people who challenge his ideals, especially those who push him to think differently or confront his own insecurities.
7. Use Allegory and Symbolism
Reflecting His Inner World: Given Sunday’s philosophical nature, you can use allegory and symbolism to reflect his emotional and mental states. Dreams, illusions, light, and shadow can all represent his internal conflict between hope and despair, idealism and reality. Use metaphors to illustrate his struggles—perhaps a dreamscape he returns to or an image that haunts him, like the dove, that symbolizes both peace and the weight of his past.
Recurrent Imagery: The symbols from his past, such as the Charmony dove or his celestial heritage, can be used to underline key moments of realization or change. They can help illuminate his emotional state in a way that feels subtle yet impactful.
Focus on his internal struggles, his philosophical outlook on life, and the relationships that force him to question his beliefs.
That's all I have for now, I'm too tired to add more... Sorry, if these aren't good 😞🙏
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