Two fun bard spells I created, like to know what you think!
Sasster Blaster 1st Level Bard Evocation
Casting Time: 1 Action Duration: Instant
Range: 90 feet Components: V
You unleash a torrent of insults and sass, each one attacking enemies on a personal and emotional level. All enemies within 60 feet of you that can hear you must make a Wisdom saving throw. Upon a failure they take 2d6 physic damage, half as much upon a success.
At Higher Levels: When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 2nd level or higher, increase the damage by 1d6 per spell slot above 1st
Sharp Remark 2nd Level Bard Evocation
Casting Time: 1 Action Duration: Concentration, up to 1 Minute
Range: 90 feet Components: V
You have gossiped and been around people long enough that you know what makes them tick as well as what affects them. Any enemy character within 90 feet who fails a roll to attempt an action or save is swiftly cut down by your sharpened tongue. Thy must make a Wisdom saving throw, upon a failure you attack them emotionally causing them to take 2d8 physic damage as you undermine their confidence and self-esteem. Leaving them to feel dejected inside.
At Higher Levels: When you cast this spell using a spell slot of 3rd level or higher, increase the damage by 1d8 per spell slot above 2nd
Firstly, THANK YOU for submitting this so I can queue it.
Secondly, they look great - but perhaps a little strong. For “Sasster Blaster” I would alter it so when enemies pass they take no damage instead of half. Also the range might be a little high for a level 1 spell, so bumping it down to a 20 foot range might help even things out.
I’m not fully sure I understand the wording of “Sharp Remark”, but it seems to be pretty on par with other spells of that level - maybe a little weak if all it does is 2d8. For a single target spell, you could increase the range to 120 ft.
