#dhar

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Just posting my Indivisible OC here because he'll be important next chapter of my fanfic!

Just that for now, hope you're all good and byeee! (⁠｡⁠･⁠ω⁠･⁠｡⁠)⁠ﾉ⁠♡

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Shiva, the Reincarnation of Ajna and Kala

“A reincarnation between Ajna(the world's savior) and Kala(the Goddess of Life and Rebirth). Shiva works as the new chief in Ashwat Village to protect herself and her home away from big threats. Threats like the Neo-Ravannavar army. She also has been keeping an eye on Dhar for a long while.”

Age: Unknown but states to be 21 years old

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止まらないんですよ

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Disproportionate Retribution Loser Poll Round 1 Side A:

OG William James Moriarty's (Moriarty the Patriot) Disproportionate Retribution:

"Kind of an asshole rich kid, son of nobility, physically abusive towards the staff in his house and generally anyone he sees as "low status" (particular affinity for stabbing people in the hand with forks). He also tried to get his adoptive orphan siblings kicked out of the house by framing them for stealing. He's like, maybe 13-16 years old at most?

After maybe half an episode of screen time, he's murdered by his own older brother (impaled with a wooden stake broken off from a chair) and then left to be burned alive in a fire. He is specifically left to die slowly and painfully in the fire so that traces of ash and smoke would be found in his lungs during any police investigation.

One of these two orphan boys then steals his name and identity (hence the very important "original" in the submission name), and no one ever misses him or knows he was gone. He's never buried or mourned, and no one even knows that he died in the first place. To me, the most tragic thing is that he never got a chance to grow. He died a mean, violent person because that's how he was raised— and he was killed as a child, before he could even deign to disobey or go against the grain of his parentage. He never got to learn or think or be his own authentic self, because the circumstances of his childhood led him to his brutal karmic death before he even had the opportunity to decide whether or not to try and better himself. He just makes me very sad, and yeah, I get it, a little bit of retribution could have been nice, but.... the level to which his entire memory and identity was erased after leaving him to die a slow and painful death was just too much for me."

Dhar's (Indivisible) Disproportionate Retribution:

"You have to bear with me on this because it's the context that makes it. He kills people as part of an evil army and dies unceremoniously without being mourned. Ok now context: Indivisible involves a lot of redemption and reincarnation. Dhar was kidnapped as a child and brainwashed and raised as a child soldier. He's 20 during the game but genuinely believes that he's doing the right thing. After he accepts that he wasn't, he tries to make up for it. Everyone hates him. He killed Ajna(mc)'s father and she never forgives him. This is understandable. When Ajna goes on a rampage, dealing death and destruction herself, Dhar sacrifices himself to bring her back to her senses. She kills him. She feels just a little bad about it. She's not sorry that he's dead. She gets to make amends and be forgiven by everyone for her actions, which is good! However it makes Dhar's death and him being forgotten afterward stand out that much more. Him not being liked or forgiven is very understandable, but he doesn't receive empathy even after cutting his own quest for redemption and life short for the sake of Ajna. The game ends with Ajna being reborn (she's a piece of the goddess of destruction and rebirth and they come back together and are reincarnated). So basically Dhar's death just feels disproportionate comparatively: if destroying the world or just many parts of it is something you can make amends for, and you can still be loved after, and you can be reborn to do better.. Surely Dhar could have done the same? If not, at least been acknowledged as having that potential."

Which Retribution is more Disproportionate?

OG William being murdered/having his identity stolen

Dhar receiving no empathy after his death due to his actions

Voting ended onDec 16, 2024