#dialogue comparison

[leliwardens]

IDW Jem Dialogue Comparison: Blaze Coming Out

Dark Jem #12 (Original): “But I have to be honest with you. And... and if you don't want me to sing with you after I tell you then I'll understand... You'll be wrong, but I'll understand. I'm a transgender woman.”

Dark Jem Trade (Edited): “But I want to be honest with you. And... and if you don't want me to sing with you after I tell you then... well, you'll be wrong. Yeah, I guess that's it, you'll just be wrong. So what I want to tell you is... I'm transgender.”

[lyonface]

Me: *trying out Purple Hawke* *post-sex scene with Fenris*

Fenris: It was better than anything I could have dreamed.

F!Hawke: Oh? I can come up with much crazier things in my dreams.

Me: Pfft Hawke is kinky. *sips coffee*

M!Hawke: *glances down* It can be...a lot to take in.

Me: *chokes*