Top 5 moments in what you've written so far? (totally not hoping for crumbs here)
Some of these won’t be moments I’ve written yet but they’re moments I’ve planned to write.
A scene with Peter during your first night back in Never Land. The wind is rustling the trees, the owls are hooting, and the moon is at its most beautiful. Do you know what’s also out? Fireflies.
Hunter takes you along during one of his hiking expeditions— as he wants to check something out— and here you’ll be able to learn a bit more about him. Just make sure you don’t push too much.
Hook and Smee playfully teasing one another that shows a much softer side to the Pirate Captain; one that won’t be truly directed at you unless you romance them.
Lyra and Tink getting into an argument that absolutely no one can understand. As you’d truly have to be there at the beginning to understand how it evolved, or devolved really, into what it is now.
The Water Lizard making his first appearance! A hungry boy that really wants a bit of the food you’re eating. Will you share? Or will you keep chomping away as he goes to find something else to eat?