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No, I never have
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Yes, ALL of my narrators are unreliable
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Saw your Twst x EAH posts so I wanted to share a hc I have about those kinds of AUs:
Both Maddie and later Kitty are shown to be able to hear the narrators, which makes sense since they’re from Wonderland. Awhile back I saw a theory brought up that it’s those two out of the Wonderland cast specifically because they’re both rebels, so in order to hear the narrators in a EAH context would be to 1) be from Wonderland and 2) be rebel aligned
So. In theory, as the rebel-iest wonderlandian in Twst, Ace would be able to hear the narrator(s)
As you’ve already brought up, Riddle would obviously be a royal, then Trey & Cater are Riddle’s right and left hands, so they’d be royals as well, and Deuce wanting to be an honor student would also align himself with the royals (which adds a bunch of flavor in his role in book 1 too! Because he hates the oppression from Riddle, but he’s really trying to put his rebellious days behind him, in more ways than one)
Leaving Ace, who wants next to nothing to do with that shit. I think he doesn’t mind following his destiny, but to that strict of a tee? That good(or even people who don’t want to have a horrible fate) people will suffer because they have to fulfill their destiny? Yeah, no, he obviously hates that
And so, imagine the potential of him hearing the narrators. My personal thought is Brooke being the main narrator, as a kind of, “We’re narrating this story (EAH) it’s time for you to narrate on your own” and her parents send her to narrate Twst on her own (with some supervision at times, just because of how story breaking it can be to have a character hear the narrator, with that narrator willing to break the story, and especially if the character that can hear them will follow through)
Also I can’t help but imagine in like, Spectral Soirée for example,
Ace: Wait, gimme a minute, let me ask the narrator
Floyd: The who?
Ace: Shush! Brooke, little help here?
Brooke: Ehh, sorry Ace, I don’t think I can tell you much without ruining things
Ace: Bullshit! There’s like, 3 groups out here! Surely one of them knowing the plot, at least a little, won’t ruin things!
Brooke: Not wrong… Uh, I guess I can tell you one thing
:It’s Malleus’s fault
Ace: THAT DAMN LIZARD!
Or something like that lol. Cue the others just being confused about what’s going on/who he’s talking to
(Wow, this is getting long-) And to add on! If the theme of this AU is everyone slowly turning to the Rebel’s side, just imagine all of the main Heartslabyul cast (or even side cast for higher comedic potential) starting to hear the narrators as well lol
I think that’s it for now. I just find this idea really funny/interesting
[ EAH x TWST posts: part 1 / part 2 / part 3 ]
Ooh, that's an interesting EAH theory (though I seem to remember a webisode where the Narrators argued which side Kitty was on?? So it’s not totally clear if she’s a Rebel or not) 🤔 Oddly very fitting for Ace, who is a character that consistently calls others out for their wrongdoings, regardless of their social status, wealth, or power. Even though Ace is often characterized as bratty and pretty mean-spirited for no particular reason, he's also shown to have a heart of gold behind all of that. He abandons the winter break he was willing to cheat on his final exams to avoid remedial lessons for, just to take a tedious transit route back to Sage's Island in response to a SOS text from Yuu. He's frequently standing up for others and hypocrisy that he sees (Ghost Marriage, Endless Halloween Night, etc.). Ace isn't exactly always in the right (he also avoids personal accountability and makes excuses to not get involved in book 7's big fight against Malleus) and doesn't always have the most noble of intentions (in book 2, he only wants to help out only to earn himself a spot in Heartslabyul's team), but this does speak to his rebellious streak.
Him somehow ending up as the only Rebel of his dorm (at least to start off in book 1) is also very par-for-the-course. Trey and Cater were pretty much obediently falling in line with and enforcing Riddle's orders, and even Deuce was hesitant to go against his dorm leader's words for a while. I guess by the end of book 1 though, Trey, Cater, and Deuce would classify as Rebels too since Deuce agreed Riddle was being unfair + joined the duel against him and they later on banded together to fight OB Riddle.
I love the idea of Brooke Page (the daughter of the two Narrators from Ever After High, for those who don't know) maturing a bit and being handed the responsibility of narrating her own story. It would add a lot of chaos to an already chaotic story, since Brooke tends to go on her own tangents and actively roots for her characters to win and to find their happy endings. Her parents would definitely have to keep a close eye on her to keep Brooke from giving everything away. Cue everyone else in the Twst cast thinking Ace just has a habit of talking to himself/j
I think it makes the most sense to keep “hearing the Narrators” limited to only a few characters in the cast. If everyone came to progressively learn to hear them, I feel like it would really kill any tension or suspense and the charm of the ability would be reduced. Maybe just keep it to Ace so there’s one person in the “main” friend group that’s able to hear the Narrators’ voices? Then he can sort of be an interpreter for the others.
It might be interesting to tie this in with his character development over the course of the main story as well. Like maybe Ace confides in Brooke after the end of book 5, wondering why is it that Deuce got his UM before he did?? And then he’s not able to properly protect Grim from being kidnapped in book 6… Is there anything Ace can do right? This could help lead into the big reveal of Joker Snatch in book 7.
Aaah, so many possibilities unlocked 😳
the narrator trio!! In more casual fits cause i wanted to try something new.. Swag
it's insane that shannon gave maddie an eah version of the phrase 'blorbo from my shows' before it was ever invented here on tumblr. instead of blorbo from my shows, maddie has 'narrators of our world that only i can hear'
if i had a nickel for every (more or less) disembodied narrator in a game about choices…
I always love a narrator in a musical. The way they slip in and out of crowd moments. Adding or aiding to the story when needed.
Jeff's narrator is a bit of a gremlin in Cinderella's Castle.
In 'Cursed Crazy' the way he's perched. Stalking her movements with his head. He's kinda like the stray cat in the lyrics. Not tame. Wanders where he pleases. Eyeing his target with interest
Also i find myself drawn to his dancing, especially in 'Neon'.
<<Not one, not two, but three narrators!!!>>
@kill-the-wanderer @fell-the-monster