•°♤°○ Hello! You can call me Spade! I just wanted to say I love your Sanji fics! However, I hope you don't find this offensive, but I have seen some grammar problems in your new fanfic. I just wanted to point some mistakes.
“Apologies everyone, I didn't see anything before we crashed.” Jimbein speaks from the helm. 8
“It's alright Jimbein, I'm sure no one else saw anything either” she replies.9. That's all of them.
The girl is sitting in front of Germa’s castle, she has blonde hair and blue eyes (like their cook), a swirly eyebrow (like their cook), she has a pack of cigarettes of the same brand like their cook. She has a wedding dress on,(she looks beautiful in it), off the shoulder puffy sleeves, the bottom of the dress is quite frilly, there's an opening in the front and you can see her legs, she has on cream coloured heels, the dress itself is beautiful, along with the girl, the only problem…?
“Apologies everyone, I didn't see anything before we crashed.” Jimbei speaks from the helm. 8
“It's alright Jimbei, I'm sure no one else saw anything either” she replies. 9. That's all of them.
The girl is sitting in front of Germa’s castle, she has blonde hair and blue eyes (like their cook), a swirly eyebrow (like their cook), she has a pack of cigarettes of the same brand like their cook. She has a wedding dress on, (she looks beautiful in it), off the shoulder puffy sleeves, the bottom of the dress is quite frilly, there's an opening in the front and you can see her legs, she has on cream coloured heels, the dress itself is beautiful, along with the girl, the only problem…?
So sorry I'm only replying now
Thank you for these lol!! I don't find it offensive at all dw, I actually encourage you guys to tell me if I make mistakes
