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Both Charles and Alex were curious about what race Jos was into but Max only explained it to Charles…🤣
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[𝟮𝟬𝟭𝟵 𝗔𝘂𝘀𝘁𝗿𝗶𝗮]
Both Charles and Alex were curious about what race Jos was into but Max only explained it to Charles…🤣
Just a heads up, for my moots!
I wanna make some self insert edits!
if I can, can you guys please tell me which character you want when I make them? :0
and if you don’t wanna be in an edit, let me know! Thank you!! <3
The current state of my WIP
Got rid of BB from the DickKory comic cover by Dan Mora :)
Edit: Removed BB's reflection from the water and added texture to it!! I'm sorry for the previous mistake- I missed it T-T
Self Edit Checklist
Structural:
Have I introduced my main character(s) early enough?
Have I introduced the world to my readers early and clearly enough?
Do readers understands my character motivation, protagonist and antagonist? What of their goals, traits (strength and weakness)?
Have my characters grow throughout the story? If not, is it intentional?
Will readers find my characters to be relatable, sympathetic, or interesting?
(I don't have to, but have I done my work to develop empathy for my villain both in myself in readers? Is it a cheap-out sad background story, or explored with more nuance?)
Are there plot holes, inconsistencies?
Are there scenes I overwrote?
Are there scenes I underwrote?
How have the conflicts of the story (external and internal) driven it forward? (Have they?)
What sentences, scenes, chapters don’t move the story along? Cut them.
Are each section/chapter told from its consistent point of view? (No headhopping)
Are there factual mistakes that require further research?
ok hello me and my husband
I don’t care if I can’t edit for balls I think it’s cute and sweet and I liked making the little frame for it fuck we’re so fucking cute maybe one day I’ll post the actual photos of me and him fuck ok meowww
Take my white T off, spin it like a helicopter
♥️🖤♥️☠️♥️🖤♥️