Ok so I'm not the biggest fan of Baruto. It's probably my least favorite thing on this planet. But it got me thinking, what if I re wrote a better version of "The Next Generation."
Here are my bullet points!
Naruto and Sasuke die at the end of Shippuden.
If we keep Naruto and Sasuke in the series we're just going to butcher their characters. We saw how well the nurfing the strongest ninja in all of the WORLD, went in Baruto.
Make it way longer in the future, 20-30 years in the future.
Let's separate ourselves from the original Kanoha 13. Make their children the teachers and some of them elders. We can keep Sakura as the head of the Medical nin. This way we can fully separate ourselves from the events of the original.
Shikamaru being older and literally THE smartest person ever would be a great choice. It would also be him both completing Naruto's dream and getting character development.
To our new main character, Naruto and Sasuke are ideals. They want to achieve their level of power.
It's still the next generation, so we can't completely ignore the events of the original. But having satues and folk tails about Naruto and Sasuke. Having them appear as heros and gods to the average people is much better than destroying their characters.
Ōtsutski clan. We can still bring them into the narrative but as a bigger threat.
No Naruto and Sasuke meaning they are an even bigger threat than they where in Baruto. We can use a similar plot line to Baruto but make changes according to the rest of the bullet points.
We can keep the ninja teams and add our protagonist to team 7. Without konohamaru because his team should be ino-shika-cho.
It's tradition, trust me on this.
We go more into the clan and village conflict.
The village massacred the uzamaki and the leaf village massacred the Uchiha. We can go more in depth to their fear of people in power over them.
Make our protagonist a low class member of the Hyoga clan.
The only surviving ocular clan in kanoha with a history of using a horrible class system? The perfect breeding place for an overpowered protagonist with trauma. We can also use this to provide more information about the Clans and why their afraid of them. As well as the awful conditions in the Hyoga clan that wasn't explored in Naruto.
The antagonist is from another village.
Our new Sasuke can be from a different village. Make a program where children from different villages create new teams. We can go into village espeianage and the misuse of the Shinobi system.
Our Antagonist can be willingly abandoned and being used as a spy for a different village.
This can bread external and internal conflict as they are made to fight against each other because of village conflict. This also breeds a similar aspect between main characters as one is willingly abandoned and the other is both neglected and used.
Our main characters have one half of Kurama.
The leaf village shanobi could have sealed Kurama away in the valley of the end. Due to their inability to find a new suitable host they could seal him inside one of the broken statues or brake his chakra in half on either shattered statue. Leaving both with a new link and power, creating a new soulmate link.
That's as far as I've thought, I might add more and if you have any new suggestions do share with the class.
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