I really need a peer review for my final project. I was absent due to various reasons so I never was able to get one. I would be more than glad to give someone a review if they need extra feedback.
This is my email if you are interested ( I can email the folder containing the pictures of my project ) :
For my final I wanted to make people aware of the repercussions of America’s legal system. I believe that our prisons lock up many Americans who deserve lesser punishments as well as better means for rehabilitation. Originally I was going to gather statistical data on things such as racial disparity, parental dilemma, and other socio-political consequences tied to felony crimes. The hard statistics alone is an eye opening argument against the way America’s prisons take effect on society.
I decided to take another route for this project, however, because I wanted to be more personal than presenting a PowerPoint with numerical data. Instead, I made a comic on paint by sketching and coloring multiple slides to present a story. This does not seem effective towards an older audience, but I mainly had our classmates in mind when focusing on audience. Unfortunately, convicted felons are deprived of the right to vote. Therefore, it is more effective to target our generation of younger people who have the opportunity to push for reform.
Although a comic is not the first thing that comes to mind, I thought it would be useful to express myself through it because of my interest in becoming a screenwriter for cartoons or television. The humor helps provide an interesting background for a situation that turns awry and involves the law. Despite being fiction, the story itself seems to be a possible situation in which I ask the audience to reflect on.
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