@sparklyhyperbole Ooh very interesting and thought-provoking story! It’s horrible to see a future where Zelda unlocks a little too much power and ends up feeling like something is wrong with her all the same 😭 And it’s awful that she felt the need to retreat so many times and only ever found comfort in a heroic statue of all things…
And that statue is…very interesting haha. What exactly is it? How did it get there? Is Link a boy turned to stone and later unthawed? What made him like that? What made the magic undone? I am so curious and would love to hear any author’s commentary on what happened behind the scenes, if you’re willing to share 😂❤️
“One single note rings in silver, in harp song, like morning light and
steel resolve as a sword swings with a ferocious cry.” - Such an epic and poetic way to describe a sword swing. Beautiful imagery 👌 Your writing and use of words is honestly lovely in general. Some truly great, poetic wiring throughout ✨
And I love the wholesome ending! Zelda realizing she had supporters amidst her accusers. The woman who thanks her for saving her husband once upon a time 🥹 It’s a wonderfully heartwarming note to end on. Lovely work :)
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