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Things I write are tagged #kivutarwrites
I hate ruminating on what could have been. Out here thinking "if only I locked in when I was 13" are we serious
Sorry thought this said "if only I was locked in when I was 13", as in like. Locked inside. Like you wanted to be some sort of cool experiment with powers who has to learn how to love life and the world after escaping the facility
A whump trope bingo :D inspired by @whumperofworlds thank you for the template!!
I got bingo!
Whump setting:
The way certain resigned characters with a blade to their throat tilt their head back and close their eyes gets me every time.
"I'm not gonna tell you anything."
"And that's exactly why I'm gonna gag you!"
Whumper who forces Whumpee to shower with them after an assault. Running their hands over Whumpee’s body (under the guise of washing them, or just because they can) so that the feeling of becoming “clean,” even that, starts to feel contaminated.
When The Whumper Becomes The Whumpee
Maybe I’m just a little slow or haven’t looked hard enough or in the right places, but I don’t really see much of this trope at all. So let’s write out some scenarios for it ^^!!
• Captured by a bigger threat: The whumper gets taken by someone far more dangerous. Suddenly they’re experiencing the same fear and lack of control they once caused.
• Role reversal through injury/illness: They become physically weak (injured, sick, etc.), forcing them to rely on others, possibly even the person they hurt.
• Betrayal arc: Their own team turns on them, treating them the way they used to treat others.
• Revenge but complicated: The former whumpee has the chance to get even… but realizes it’s not as satisfying as they thought.
• Slow breakdown: Instead of one big moment, it’s gradual, sleep deprivation, stress, guilt, until the “untouchable” one cracks.
There’s plenty more that I ca think of, but this is what I’ll throw in for now. And if I’m being totally honest, this is one of my favorite tropes to experiment with ^^!!
Whumpee is being walked out of the dark hole they’ve been held captive in for months, maybe years. They can’t remember. They had no clock to listen to the seconds tick away, or a window to watch the days slither by.
They’ve been in the dark all this time, curled up in a corner. Interrogated, chained, tortured for information, but they never gave it up. They put on the act and never once dropped the mask.
And now it was going to pay off, but they could hardly bring themselves to believe it. Were these people really trustworthy? They couldn’t even see their faces in the dark. They could only be led blindly through the damp tunnels, lit by one of the rescuers blinding flashlights. They’d found Whumpee in their cell, the only room in this abandoned hell-hole that was occupied. Whumpee had no idea what this place was used for in the past, but they never wanted to find out.
Their wrists were still shackled together, which was fine. Whumpee was used to it and couldn’t even remember the last time they could move their arms individually instead of as one unit. Their supposed saviors had claimed they hadn’t brought any tools that were safe enough to cut so close to Whumpee’s wrists. So they’d just snapped the chains off the cuffs with bolts, pulled Whumpee up under their arms, and now here they were, shuffling along down the corridor. Everyone’s feet were booted but Whumpee’s, bare and bloodied, so the one with the flashlight took care illuminating the ground for any dangerous objects not to be stepped on.
“I can’t believe we really found you in here,” the one to Whumpee’s right said. They sounded like they were about to cry. Their arm under Whumpee’s shoulder was trembling. Whumpee could barely lift their head to acknowledge the comment. “We looked everywhere these last couple years. Turned the whole town upside down. Even the sewers.”
Whumpee grimaced at the thought, but it went unnoticed in the darkness. Then they realized what the voice had said. Two Years.
Suddenly the party halted. There was the sound of metal turning, groaning, and then there was—
Light.
They had to squeeze their eyes shut. Whumpee couldn’t believe it. Had the world always been that bright? In their memories it didn’t feel that way. It never felt so blinding.
They moved forward, Whumpee’s head ducked. Their feet stepped from the cold pavement to something softer, warmer. They flinched, unable to open their eyes to see what they were stepping on until a distant memory came blooming to the surface.
Grass. Dirt. Land.
With terrible effort, they peeled open an eye. Green everywhere, as far as they could see. Forget light, they had forgotten what it was like to know color.
“Sweet freedom,” said that same voice on their right.
They lifted their head to gaze out toward the horizon. They were in an endless field atop a massive hill. Behind them was the giant empty building they had been kept in. It seemed so foreign from the outside. Nature had taken it over, vines climbed over every wall. They had no idea what it may have once been. There was no telling.
But in front of them, the sky was on fire. The sun was setting beyond the crest of a hill and it lit the world in orange, pink, gold. Clouds shimmered, iridescent. A breeze caught through the grass, trembling through leaves on the trees, blowing softly against their skin. They could hear birds singing, calling across the field to signify the days end.
And in the light they could see the faces of the people who had saved them. Their friends. Their friends who they’d been protecting all this time. Who they’d never betrayed, no matter how Whumper cut and sliced and beat them.
“Oh, God,” Whumpee croaked, their voice was foreign to them. Weak and painful. “Oh, my God.” If they weren’t being held by the two under their arms they would have collapsed with relief. Tears began to leave thick trails down their cheeks, burning their face.
It was really over. They were free.
The warm voice on their right spoke again. Caretaker. “It’s good to have you back, Whumpee.”
It was good to be back.
Comfort tropes because I suck at comfort and need practice
Post whump
Content: comfort, Post captivity, bruises, lashing out, PTSD
Whumpee wrapped up in a blanket with a cup of hot chocolate. "Aren't you going to drink that?" "No. I think I'll just... sit here with it."
Hugs. Whumpee numbly walking into caretaker's outstretched arms and squeezing their eyes shut as the arms gently embrace them.
Waking up with a nightmare and patting the comforter, slapping the bed, walking around touching every wall, every piece of furniture, reminding themselves of where they are. Not there, not anymore.
Dyeing their hair after being forced to leave it down, tangled, uncut, for months in captivity.
Watching bruises fade from red and purple to green and yellow. Green becomes whumpee's favorite color, because they never got to see it when whumpers was in control of them---bruises were always fresh. It's a symbol that the pain is there, but it's going. And it will heal, just like the bruises.
Maybe they lost their whole friend group because their friends couldn't handle what happened to them. And now they're making new friends in caretaker's friend group. People that understand and don't mind.
Whumpee lashing out at caretaker and then sobbing/throwing a fit in the bathroom over it. "I ruined it!" When they come out, shoulders hunched, ready for everything to blow up in their face, caretaker is just on the phone with their own friend, calmed down, alright. "I'm getting you a punching bag, whumpee. Try that next time, okay?"
When the story has a sequence where the characters each get personally tortured with their exact personalized greatest fears and traumas
Sometimes I really want a Whumper turned Caretaker.
Like they start off with a pretty standard kidnapping setup. Whumper trying to get something out of the Whumpee, Whumpee is refusing them and being cockily defiant. But through their interactions, Whumpee/Caretaker learns that, By God what the whumpee went through is so sosososososo much worse than what they'd allow themselves to do.
Like, they're not a good person. They're really not! But even they realize that Whumpee needed rescuing! And- fuck man, if they let Whumpee go, they'll end up right back with Whumper #1. It's unfortunately gotta be the Whumper/Caretakers job to help Whumpee out here, because there's no-one else who can help them right now and, fuck it, they're already here!
Gimme the mistrust and confusion from Whumpee as they don't understand the switch up. Gimme the Whumper/Caretaker slowly learning how to heal them, even though it's so far out of their league. Gimme Whumper #1 hunting them down, demanding Whumpee's return.
Check out this whump quiz!! It tells you what whump you should write more, and I think that's a super cool idea to maybe try and get people to write for tropes and things they dont usually write for!!
Because whump
*huffs* okay i guess, but only if it's a soft h/c moment between whumpee and whumper
NOOOOO GAHAHAH
</3 why would you say that to me
Oh.
Oh.
WHICH ONE???
Llol, also gotta push it...
looks like I gotta finish up a backstory piece!
don't mind if I do...
Interesting...
The Whumpee was locked somewhere by their own people, for their own good or for a good reason. Maybe they are in quarantine, or in isolation, or in the brig for a minor thing.
It was meant to be temporary, or for there to be people checking on them and taking care of them.
But then something happens. Whumpee's people are under attack, there is a natural disaster, some glitch put everyone in lockdown, or just anything bigger is happening and keeping everyone away from Whumpee. As a result, Whumpee is left alone, where they are locked up.
Maybe Whumpee was delirious or possessed or is amnesic, and now wakes up alone and confused, with no one answering. Maybe Whumpee knows that something is happening and fears the worst for their friends. Maybe they are unaware that the others have a good reason to be kept out, and so Whumpee thinks they have been abandoned or are being punished.
Maybe it lasts more than a few hours and Whumpee has to find water or starts feeling hungry. Or feels too hot or too cold if there is something up with the place they are locked in. Maybe it's pitch dark or way too bright. Too silent, or maybe there is an alarm ringing nonstop. Maybe the Whumpee was hurt and needs more medical attention, or their painkillers. Maybe Whumpee is starting to go stir crazy.
"what does hyperwhump even mean" term i made up that means a normal character would fucking die but i pick the best blorbos ever so i get to do whatever i want lalalalalala
i think there's a post in my drafts that's just "sometimes you have to sit down and solemnly ask yourself if a character could survive a beheading"
Denial
CW: rocky recovery, maybe?
Caretaker stopped in front of the paper towel shelf, contemplating which brand to choose with a very short thought window. They had to think fast. They had left Whumpee in the checkout line and knew how nervous their friend must be at that moment, abandoned to their own fate, like a child left waiting while their mother fetched a forgotten item.
Caretaker finally made their choice and hurried back, but was startled to see that Whumpee wasn't where they had left them, in the priority line. They searched for them through the checkout lines, mild despair tightening their heart, when they finally found their friend waiting their turn to pay for their groceries in a regular line.
“Whumpee! You scared me. Why didn't you stay in the priority line?" they asked, approaching.
"I'm not priority," Whumpee retorted, unable to hide the annoyance in their voice.
Caretaker didn't respond, immediately understanding the reason behind the resistance and already anticipating the argument that would ensue if they insisted. They were in public, and they didn't want to stress Whumpee out more than their friend already was. As the line moved, Caretaker noticed that Whumpee had hidden their necklace, tucking it inside their coat. The autism identification necklace, which after much insistence and negotiation they had convinced Whumpee to request one after their diagnosis. But Whumpee refused to wear it. "I look like a cow wearing a collar with a bell, I'm not wearing this”, they had said.
They finished paying for their groceries and left the market in silence. Caretaker didn't comment on the use of the necklace until they got home, where Whumpee tossed the object onto the coffee table with disdain and went to their room to isolate themselves.
Living weapon whumpee used to find an escaped prisoner. They're basically let off a leash like a dog to let them run into the woods and find the person. Handler gives them direct orders before they leave.
"When you find the prisoner, you keep them alive. If they by your hands, you won't remember what it feels like to eat."
Whumpee nods and runs into the forest. They find the prisoner, but they don't go down without a fight. Suddenly the prisoner falls down a ditch and hits their head on a rock, killing them instantly. Whumpee freezes.
What are they supposed to do? Drag the body back and try to explain themself, or lie and come back with nothing, saying they couldn't find them.
They leave the body behind and come back to handler empty handed. They take a beating for it, which they expected. But after a few days handler gets a call. The search team had found the prisoner's body.
Now whumpee is in deep shit.