`for me

lets go back?

[metoright]

▶Rules ༘♡

▶obey me materialist 1 ༘♡

▶obey me materialist 2 ༘♡

▶Tokyo revengers materialist༘♡

▶undatables materialist ༘♡

▶twisted wonderland materialist ༘♡

▶blue lock materialist ༘♡

▶demon slayer materialist ༘♡

▶requests are closed! ༘♡

[crabtrap19]

LADIES HELP A SISTER IN NEED🙏🙏

any good recommendations?

[metoright]

tokyo rev materialist

<3 Him?

[metoright]

❝him?!❞

synopsis : When your boyfriends dreams of your relationship being discovered happens with the very wrong dude!

Pairing: Tokyo rev characters; Mikey and chifuyu

a/n: this is my first time writing in a bit so if its a little messed up please ignore it! tried to make it a cute bit w comfort

𝄞༉‧₊˚.Mikey sano

He immediately pauses his casual stroll by the classes on his way to see your class. Did he hear that right he very much hoped he didn't but then the kid laughed out "that big guy draken dating y/n really damn?" he walked behind him with a immense glare an aura of imaginary fire basically surrounding him as his low tone asked the stupid highschooler about where he even heard such a thing he immediately stuttered out the stupid rumor that everybody thought you were dating draken because you were always together he cracked his knuckles with angered eyes the kids hadn't seen him because of his height peering next to you so they assumed draken was the boyfriend Mikey was enraged by the thought pointed at himself like a kid annoyed "Im the boyfriend Mikey sano, draken is not you hear me" he resisted beating the kid up because he didnt want to get kicked out and not be able too see you pitied him he walked to your classroom sitting down the teacher sighing not like Mikey would ever listen to him as he scooted closer to you wrapping his arms around you with a frown like a kid seriously what had gotten into him "I'm your boyfriend" he shouted a little too loudly making you flush with widened as eyes at his words some kids and the teacher laughed at his loud proclamation but he payed them no mind

𝄞༉‧₊˚.Chifuyu

Baji and chifuyu and you had just left one of tomans usual meetings heading to their convince store when he heard on of the lower ranks laugh around saying "oh so that hot chick was bajis girlfriend?" he laughed out you froze nose scrunched in disgust your best friend yuck chifuyu paused eyes widened not in fear but in rage baji was the opposite of chifuyu both fearful and disgusted frankly you were not his appeal chifuyu smiled sineristily at the two lower ranks who were talking about your relationship with "baji" he grabs onto the collar of one of them smiling tightly "since when were members of toman gossipers" he said ever so sweetly sending a chill down bajis spine as he shuddered weirdos one uppercut and the gossiping member of toman was knocked out his partner shuddered as he eyed his friend with a gaping mouth and eyes considering a run for it your mouth also dropped with widened eyes you grasped on the side of his shirt whispering comforting words with a worried glance to the poor kid who just got punched he sighed giving them a glare before walking away with you making sure to remember their faces baji gave chifuyu a disgusted look, it made you laugh out they were funny fools.

extra a/n?: DAMN ITS BEEN A WHILE

[popsicleofdeath]

I'm trying to prove a point to my brain: Reblog if you think fanfiction does not need sex to be good.

There is a trend I’ve noticed that smut fics tend to be much more popular than anything else and honestly I just want to have something to look at to remind myself and that writing doesn’t have to have sex to be worth putting out into the community.

[jackietaylorsghost]

[beardedmrbean]

[theman]

I GOT A FUCKING RAISE THE POTATO WORKED WTF

[tattooedzombigirl]

This potato works. Every. Fucking. Time.

[secondlina]

Reblogging because it’s a damn potato and I want to encourage people to assume potatoes are magical.

[sinksanksockie2]

w-what if potato is actually lucky

[wonderful-writers-au]

Praying.

[prxncezz]

🤞🤞🤞

[metoright]

prayers

[metoright]

finals are ending this wednesday and today i have to finish my english work or i might not pass- please wish me luck - TT

[arabwife]

I’ll get over it I just gotta be dramatic first

[slavery]

[macbethz]

Fuck I’m at a fencing tournament and literally a minute after I reblogged this my dad told me that he talked to the point people and I’m probably going to win a medal.

[seananmcguire]

BURN BAGEL BURN

[gothiccharmschool]

OH WHY NOT?

[harukami]

I need to follow up to say I reblogged this last night, and this morning I got some of the best news of my life, like, a life dream come true news thing.

Bagel what are your powers

[acabosetotal]

FUCK, I though it was just another lucky meme but LISTEN. Since a week ago I was waiting a phone call to confirm me if I got a job or not in my university. I reblogged this yesterday’s night “just for fun and because I don’t want any bagel to be mad with me”, and today’s afternoon, while I was losing my time as always, the professor I was supposed to work with called me and asked me for my personal information to start working with her.

THE BAGEL POWERS ARE WAY TOO MUCH FOR THIS WORLD

[token-white-friend]

I GOT A JOB THE DAY AFTER MY QUEUE POSTED THIS THE FIRST TIME AND I JUST REALIZED IT WHEN I SAW IT AGAIN HOLY GOD

[noodle-dragon]

The bagel hasn’t let me down yet!

[blackcatgodess]

I got a job offer after reblogging the bagel. Believe in the bagel!

[anayely420]

🙏🏼

[sonsfantasies]

Worth a try lol

[theblizzardsix]

i could use some good news or even a good girl 

[pantspooplover]

Go lil bagle! Show me your power!

[itaachiyama-moved]

Okii then!

[blastlight]

THIS IS THE FIRST THING ON MY BLOG

I GOT ASKED OUT FOR THE FIRST TIME AFTER I REBLOGGED IT

[cuappatea-deactivated20200216]

wait but whats happening with the bagel tho

[toca144]

Giv news

[maiskinny]

This bagel better do me and my skinnies some wonders.

[st0nedsk1nnygrl]

im passed my drivers test🙏🏽

[becoming-a-flame]

pls

[notjoyfulanymore]

Oh hope this works, i need some good news in my life lmao

[airm0ld]

plz bagel plssss 🙏

[fiftyshadesofthinspi]

BLESS US ALL OH HOLY FIRE BAGEL

[kissmycoldlips]

Bagel, pls

[cari-cry]

bagel please i need this thank you

[prick-o]

pls bagel

[karls-writing-space]

Bagel please

[t0rsly]

I beg of you sir bagel

[cocosstories]

Please, I need this so bad

[wandaromanova]

bagel gods, bring me some amazing news please <3

[adhd-chaos-queen]

I don’t believe in this kinda stuff, but i really hope to get some news about my fav show getting saved after it got cancelled, so i’m not taking any chances

[sips-tea-cutely]

bagel bagel

[chaeey-deactivated20231103]

Bagel

[space-ghost-with-the-most]

Bagel!

[blubird513]

Im supersttious! Let’s gooooo!

Edit: It worked for me!

I received wonderful news about my health not even a day after, and was able to see my friends again after not being able to hug or high-five them for a month.

We ate crepes and had a good time. :)

[blubird513]

OKAY!

I am in desperate need of luck, my insta got hacked and I am in “superstitious mode” rn while trying everything to get it back. SO!!

MAGIC BAGEL!!!

BLESS MEEEE!!!

Please ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

[roostertop]

please bagel i beg give me good news

[bred-bee]

praying to the bagel gods

[imamesssworld-deactivated202207]

BAAAGGGEEELLLLLLL 🥯

[metoright]

OH BAGEL DOGS PLEASE ALLOW ME TO BE IN POSSESION OF A CAT🧎

[slavery]

[macbethz]

Fuck I’m at a fencing tournament and literally a minute after I reblogged this my dad told me that he talked to the point people and I’m probably going to win a medal.

[seananmcguire]

BURN BAGEL BURN

[gothiccharmschool]

OH WHY NOT?

[harukami]

I need to follow up to say I reblogged this last night, and this morning I got some of the best news of my life, like, a life dream come true news thing.

Bagel what are your powers

[acabosetotal]

FUCK, I though it was just another lucky meme but LISTEN. Since a week ago I was waiting a phone call to confirm me if I got a job or not in my university. I reblogged this yesterday’s night “just for fun and because I don’t want any bagel to be mad with me”, and today’s afternoon, while I was losing my time as always, the professor I was supposed to work with called me and asked me for my personal information to start working with her.

THE BAGEL POWERS ARE WAY TOO MUCH FOR THIS WORLD

[token-white-friend]

I GOT A JOB THE DAY AFTER MY QUEUE POSTED THIS THE FIRST TIME AND I JUST REALIZED IT WHEN I SAW IT AGAIN HOLY GOD

[noodle-dragon]

The bagel hasn’t let me down yet!

[blackcatgodess]

I got a job offer after reblogging the bagel. Believe in the bagel!

[anayely420]

🙏🏼

[sonsfantasies]

Worth a try lol

[theblizzardsix]

i could use some good news or even a good girl 

[pantspooplover]

Go lil bagle! Show me your power!

[itaachiyama-moved]

Okii then!

[blastlight]

THIS IS THE FIRST THING ON MY BLOG

I GOT ASKED OUT FOR THE FIRST TIME AFTER I REBLOGGED IT

[cuappatea-deactivated20200216]

wait but whats happening with the bagel tho

[toca144]

Giv news

[maiskinny]

This bagel better do me and my skinnies some wonders.

[st0nedsk1nnygrl]

im passed my drivers test🙏🏽

[becoming-a-flame]

pls

[notjoyfulanymore]

Oh hope this works, i need some good news in my life lmao

[airm0ld]

plz bagel plssss 🙏

[fiftyshadesofthinspi]

BLESS US ALL OH HOLY FIRE BAGEL

[kissmycoldlips]

Bagel, pls

[cari-cry]

bagel please i need this thank you

[prick-o]

pls bagel

[karls-writing-space]

Bagel please

[t0rsly]

I beg of you sir bagel

[cocosstories]

Please, I need this so bad

[wandaromanova]

bagel gods, bring me some amazing news please <3

[adhd-chaos-queen]

I don’t believe in this kinda stuff, but i really hope to get some news about my fav show getting saved after it got cancelled, so i’m not taking any chances

[sips-tea-cutely]

bagel bagel

[chaeey-deactivated20231103]

Bagel

[space-ghost-with-the-most]

Bagel!

[blubird513]

Im supersttious! Let’s gooooo!

Edit: It worked for me!

I received wonderful news about my health not even a day after, and was able to see my friends again after not being able to hug or high-five them for a month.

We ate crepes and had a good time. :)

[blubird513]

OKAY!

I am in desperate need of luck, my insta got hacked and I am in “superstitious mode” rn while trying everything to get it back. SO!!

MAGIC BAGEL!!!

BLESS MEEEE!!!

Please ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

[roostertop]

please bagel i beg give me good news

[bred-bee]

praying to the bagel gods

[imamesssworld-deactivated202207]

BAAAGGGEEELLLLLLL 🥯

[metoright]

OH BAGEL DOGS PLEASE ALLOW ME TO BE IN POSSESION OF A CAT🧎

[metoright]

FIRST I ABSOLOUTELY BLAME MY COMMPUTER FOR BEING LATE ON HIS BIRTHDAY.

SECOND HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY BELOVED😭 💞

[ceevee5]

Happy International Women’s Day

[metoright]

yandre malleus fic part 1

warnings: yandreness, fancy speaking ig? no spelling check🥲

a/n: Whats writing without drama, also this was inspired by the lucien fic- so credits to my inspo for them🍄

prounouns : female/ g/n and male prounouns are next!

“ would you like to disappoint malleus ?” Lilia spoke in a sarcastic questioning tone yet the sarcasm wouldn’t be very easy to notice for a stranger as it could be quite easily misjudged as worry yet Yuu knew him better than most strangers or so Yuu thought she was quite positive anything Lillia said was not going to be beneficial to her as currently, the only thing she truly desired was to escape the wretched thorny castle that very seemingly destroyed her little dim chance of returning to her home her true home the one that she could feel free once again.

but yet the half nocturn fae in front of her was a major wall to that process of thought she internally shook herself up she did not waste 2 years of training to be a queen and escape to be defeated by a wall by all means if she had to she would break it down with her bare hands her (e/c) seemed to glimmer. did her eyes shine like a flame that had found a newfound hope. Or had it already been there and Lilia just hadn't noticed it? He narrowed his red eyes and the lavishly dressed girl in front of him seemed to have hope once more… though he was positive that the hardships that he had made Yuu go through were enough to diminish any piece of hope of escaping Malleus .

Well it seemed he had still a bit work to do the pink and blacked hair boy let a sigh that uncomfortably made Yuu’s ear trickle “now Lilia I truly thought you knew me better why would I want to disappoint malleus?” you looked (up/down) at Lilia putting your gloved hand on your chest and feigned confusion and sadness, there seemed to be a crackle in the air the passerby maids looked at this scene with wonder quickly passing to inform their friends of how Lillia had said that the queen had done something to disappoint malleus this had sparked some anger through the maids though they weren't aware of the consequences of the rumors would affect them...

Lilia looked at the girl in front of her and raised a smile while coldly smiling “ well I'm glad we've come to an agreement, i'd like you to attend the meeting with the counselors of the lower head court in the next two days”  her eyes had widened a bit but she quickly lowered them she tightened her hand on the dresses long sleeves and only smiled while nodding “Id hope you’d do well to remember that dressing appropriately is greatly advised I assume you would not have any problems with that will you?”

Ever since a few years ago when Yuu had gone to a ball with malleus she decided to wear a suit to the ball the nobles were outraged but kept quiet and had only raised their concerns till they met at the meeting of counselors many raised complaints of her being the queen and want fit for someone like malleus the incident had made her grind her teeth how dare they? How dare they talk behind her back while just inside the ballroom they had been laughing and drinking she quickly realized that there hadn't been anyone she could trust in this horrid castle so she swore to raise her power, escape build a kingdom, and overthrow the wretched kingdom she lived in and make it a beautiful place able to be shared by both fae and humans

She looked at him smiling and assured him with a soothing voice “ I can assure you that I am not as foolish as my younger self was Though I do wish you'd trust me a bit more”  she said while letting out a chuckle that made her insides churn and her hands gripped tighter in to the dress as he laughed as well, a visible cold laugh this time “ well of course but you can never be too careful am I correct my queen though I dreadfully have to end this conversation I must go assist malleus in Leona's affairs you know how they are''

She certainly did not but decided not to correct him and leave him to his own twisted fantasy she let out a internal sigh of relief but attempted at all costs to keep her facial expressions as neutral as they were before. “ alright I shall go to the chambers and finish chapter 37 of the studies of ethological past of faes now if you'll excuse me” she bowed but with her head raised high as even though he was one of the highest of society of fae’s she was still a queen even if she was the queen of a kingdom whom she despised, not that she had any plans of staying as his queen.

The nocturn fae nodded as if he had been satisfied with her response “ I must tell it is a wonderful story but in my opinion the 7th and 8th chapters contain the greatest information as they had made quite wonderful progress in the foundation of the kingdoms closeness with animals, and I hope you do have a wonderful evening I shall see you later my queen” he slightly bowed his head and started walking down the dimly lit halls his expensive clothing practically shining from the lights.

Yuu waited till she saw him walk by the closest hallway then turned her heels and speedwalked her hand practically ripping the sleeve that she held her heels making a loud click clack sound through every step she took she arrived at her quarters opened the brown large door with the golden key she held in her pocket reserved for her and her close companions opening the door with a clunk and walked in Yuu looked at the maid who was entrusted to take care of me though she was truly just a nuisance to Yuu as she had been aware that .

[two-gays-in-a-trenchcoat]

A Guide to Writing Inclusive Reader-Inserts

I’ve been really fired up about what @renniecirque has been posting about recently, and I want to do everything in my power to help promote inclusivity in the TWST fandom, as well as every other fandom that people write for. So below, I’ve compiled a comprehensive list of literary elements I use in my writing that make writing for characters of all backgrounds, sexualities, genders, races, and appearances much easier and much, much simpler.

1. Second Person Perspective

Alright guys, this is a big one, and the quickest way to make a big immediate change in your reader inserts. In my opinion, this should be the standard for all reader insert writing, and I’m surprised by how little I see it. I acknowledge that people may use first and/or third person for preferential or stylistic reasons, and that’s okay. But if that doesn’t matter as much to you, then I highly recommend switching to second person in all your works.

How to use:

Address the reader with you/yours pronouns when writing the narrative. It’s genderless, easy to stick to, and most importantly, it creates a genuine connection between the real-life reader and the person they’re acting out in the story! In my experience, all of the best reader inserts are written in second person.

Even if it’s an explicitly stated reader insert, hearing the word “I” used when referring to the reader can create this sense that you’re reading someone else’s experience. And that’s not the point! You want to enable your reader to immerse themselves fully into the story and without feeling awkward or like they’re intruding. I know it may be hard to get away from writing in first-person if that’s what you’re used to, but I can promise that even with a little bit of effort, it can be easily fixed. It’s also a helpful exercise for writing in different perspectives!

This also makes it unnecessary to use pronouns for the reader at all (except when they’re being referred to in dialogue—but you can easily work around it by avoiding pronouns altogether when referring to the reader, and when it’s necessary to make that distinction, call them by name). You’ll find this will be a lot easier to differentiate the reader’s actions versus the characters’ actions. And it also makes it unnecessary for you to use placeholders for names like (y/n), MC, Yuu, etc in every other paragraph, so the writing overall looks more cohesive and professional.

This is also done in mainstream visual novels such as Obey Me!, The Arcana, and Twisted Wonderland. The player hardly ever gets referred to by specific pronouns in favor of the characters calling them by name, and even with specific pronouns, the default is they/them. Personally, I always use gender neutral terms in my writing, as sparse as it may be. Because the great thing about it is that it can apply to anyone and everyone, since it’s neutral!

Overall, this is the quickest and easiest way to make your writing more inclusive!

2. Forgo Descriptions of the Reader

I am a huge advocate for a person’s appearance, gender, and inherent personality traits not having any impact on whether or not it’s possible for them to be loved, especially in a reader insert fic. But descriptions are everywhere—how can you get away from the age-old sea-blue eyes, the ivory skin, the voracious curves that have become the cornerstone of all your reader insert stories? Well, I can promise that it is indeed possible.

How to use:

I get it, you’re used to describing the immediate features of a character you’re introducing, which is expected, and what you should be doing! But it can be off-putting to a potential reader to read that the person they’re supposed to be has traits that they don’t have. However, the use of second person perspective as described previously does a good job of getting rid of that need for you! The reader already knows what they look like, how they act, you don’t need to tell them. By all means, keep descriptions of other characters—they’re necessary for development and visualization. But by using second person, you implicitly establish that everyone already knows what you look like, act like, etc; and even if they don’t, it’s not told from their perspective!

But say you still want your reader to have certain features—an attractive face, a timid demeanor, a charismatic presence—as it has an impact on the plot. There are ways to do that without stating those exact things specifically. Show, don’t tell! I know you’ve probably heard this from English teachers, journalists, and writing advice articles, but in practice, it can make or break your story. Don’t say that they’re pretty, show people in the halls pausing to take a second glance at them as they pass. Don’t say they’re shy, show their reluctance to speak up in class. Don’t say they’re charismatic, show the way their friends’ faces light up when they enter a room, the way their peers stare in rapt attention when they speak. This not only makes it easier for the reader to better imagine themselves in the scenario, but it strengthens your writing overall.

3. Labels and Tags!

While I may be a huge advocate for gender neutral defaults and ambiguous descriptions, I’m also a huge advocate for writing whatever the fuck you want. You wanna write for a reader with specific characteristics? Do it! A certain scenario that only applies to a niche group of people? Have at it, my dude! And if a person doesn’t like it, it’s not your problem; they can keep scrolling. But guys, I genuinely cannot express the importance of telling your readers what they’re getting into before they start. This is the internet, and anyone can post anything—trigger warnings and SFW/NSFW tags exist for this very reason. Once something is read, it cannot be unread. But labels and tags aren’t just important for explicit scenes or abusive relationships in a story; the little things matter, too.

How to use:

Include gender of the reader, even if it’s just implied, in the title or description. This kind of goes without saying—if it’s a male reader, tell people it’s a male reader. If it’s a female reader, tell people it’s a female reader. If the reader is gender neutral or gender is not mentioned, tell people it’s gender neutral! And yet, all too often I see people posting fics centered around an explicitly stated female reader without tagging it as such. It really is a simple thing to add, and I promise, it won’t effect the views and popularity of your posts; if a person doesn’t like it to begin with, they’re going to keep scrolling. More than anything, this saves the reader from having to start a fic only to be put off by the wrong pronouns, and (if used with the previous two devices) it saves the writer from having to add in gender-based terms. You could also skip specific labels and just include the pronouns used when referring to the reader.

Include if there are explicitly stated features. If you’re writing specifically for a certain group of people with specific traits, tag it as such! And if the specific trait doesn’t have an impact on what happens on the story, I promise you, it does not need to be included at all.

I’m sure there are plenty of other things that people can do to promote inclusivity, but I’ve found these three principles to be the most effective while also being the easiest to remember. And even if you’re not used to writing in second person perspective or without explicit descriptions of the reader, there’s no harm in trying it out! If you decide you don’t like it or it’s too difficult, you can simply stop. In the long run, it will only make you a better writer.

I would apologize for this being such a long post, but I’m really not sorry; I could talk rhetorical analysis and literary devices all day. And if you scrolled this far, I can only assume you do, too. I’m afraid that Roy Peter Clark (a renowned journalist and the author of Reading Critically and Writing Well, which I highly recommend) has entered my bloodstream directly, and I simply cannot shut up about this kind of stuff. I may not be a professional, but writing has been a passion of mine for years, and these things are just my take on ways to improve your writing.

I’d love for this post to be reblogged as many times as possible, especially if your platform is heavy on fanfiction writers. Inclusivity will never not be important.

Feel free to comment your own advice or ask questions!

[metoright]

omg thank u sm- like i didnt even remember apout apearences I rememberd how to include gender inclusive but I forgot abt that so thank you TT

[madrewrites]

me: time to write

brain: no

me: please?

brain: No.

—

me: *in a situation where i cannot possibly write*

brain: time to write

me: give me one good reason why i shouldn’t crack you like the egg you are

[metoright]

im so ssad

[married-to-google-translater]

I read that twst article about racism inside the twst fandom. I really want to do better and write content that everyone can enjoy.

I usually write for reader persoective and use only "you" word and not pronouns.

It would be nice if you could help me come up with different ways to express in my work that the reader is a man. Or is that one mention enough?