My-nitpickingself🤏

23y.o. Italian and loves to complain 🤓 (especially about c//a and Vivziepop' shows)

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📢Introduction post📢

Who I am:

-I'm a 23 y.o. italian woman;

-I'm a university student (studying comics and illustration) ;

-I'm straight and an LGBTQ+ ally;

-I'm a fan and shipper, but also a critical and an anti, depending on the media and the ship. I ship Entrapdak and Glimmadora but I hate c//a and Stoliz.

Things I do:

-I make criticism and analysis of shows that I've watched/I'm watching, like She-ra and the princesses of power, Helluva Boss and Hazbin Hotel, but sometimes also Disney movies;

-I give writing advices when I can, make fanarts and write fanfictions;

- I answer asks that are questions, opinions, fanarts, memes etcs.

Rules of my blog:

-This is a safe space for antis and criticals, where we can express our opinions and share thoughts without anyone instantly labelling us things we're not;

-Everyone is welcome here honestly, as long as we ALL behave;

-I don't condone any form of harassement towards anyone, criticals, fans or creators;

-Ableist, sexist and homophobic language is not tollerated regardless of who is using it against who.

(I'm currently in the shadowban realm, so if you want to send me an ask, just know that I can't click on links or directly answer to comments. Sorry)

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THEY ACTUALLY DID IT!

They put Angel Dust in the Pride merch with the Vees! You can't make this sh*t up!

Also. . .

Two things:

1. Good for Sera / gen. But don't let this distract you from the fact that Kendra wasn't included in the Pride merch with Barbie.

2. Why is Adam there? Beside being dead, how is he an ally? He called his soldiers after female genitalia, probably abused them and most importantly, he didn't say anything about Lute calling Vaggie and Charlie's relationship blasphemous (but she's fine with taking orders from a lesbian? Okay. . .) This makes no sense. Why not put Saint Peter there instead of Adam?

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du you hav3 any tips on writing guy in love whitout making them creepy

I do. I do!

Okay, these first tips are useful if you're writing a story with either magic, very advanced technology or people with superpowers. But with some re-work I think they can be used in any case.

- If this guy has super speed, the power of invisibility or he can stop time or switch bodies with other people DO NOT let him use these abilities to be a pervert towards the person he likes. I don't care how young and dumb he is. It's creepy af. Okay? Okay;

- If the person he likes happens to take a love potion or is under a love spell or some kind of mind control that makes them fall in love with your male character, he must not take advantage of this! Instead, use it as an opportunity to teach him that you can't force someone to fall in love with you. That shows he's mature and actually worthy of his crush's love;

- If your male character happens to go back in time and they meet the younger version of their crush, PLEASE make him behave like he would if this was any random kid. Less time he interacts with his crush, the better actually;

Okay, these next tips are good for all kinds of genres.

- Your male character can have a picture of their crush (even a few if he's in them too) to show that he really likes them. But don't go too far. He doesn't need an entire wall covered with pictures of his crush, like a teen with their favorite Kpop band. Not only that would be creepy, it would also give the idea that he idolizes his crush instead of seeing them as an actual person;

- Don't make your male character know everything about his crush's activities or hobbies. It's good that he knows their interests and their taste, especially if they're already close friends. But don't push it too far by making him know exactly what they're doing in every moment of the day like he's a stalker;

- It's okay to make him a little jealous of their crush. Jealousy is a human emotion, but how we react to it is what's important. Don't try to make him isolate his crush from every person who could be a potential rival. And he has to know that if they're not dating, he can't stop the person he likes from finding happiness with someone else;

- There's a line between admiration a fetish. Admiration = the crush has something that is unique to them or that other people have, but your male character finds it special exactly because it's them // fetish = the male character is attracted to a specific thing (race, bodytype, certain body features or style) and they pick their partner only based on that without caring about the person. Be careful not to cross that line.

That's all I have for now. Hope these writing tips are helpful 👍

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Im just suprorised Disney chose to stop a HISTORIC reather then a native American Fairytale since pohantas is just fancy

Not sure what you mean with "fancy". Pocahontas wasn't her actual name, but she was a real person whose story was changed probably to try hide the horrors of colonialism.

Anyway, while I do like when Disney takes a pre-existing fairytale or legend and adds their touches (which is how all their most beloved movies were made), I'm not sure of how they would handle a Native American legend or similar.

Everytime I hear about a movie or a character that takes inspiration from Native American folklore, something goes wrong. I guess it's because the people behind those works are not natives themselves? Or because everything gets Hollywood-fied.

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your opinions on felix from mlb?

Initially I was very curious to see what he was going to do. His introduction episode with him switching places with Adrien to mess with his friends and then playing Gabriel was pretty interesting. I thought Felix was going to become a new enemy for the heroes.

But I must admit that the way his character was developet didn't impress me 🫤 I found his crush on Kagami rushed and just a way to keep her out of the love square drama for good. Now I find his character a bit boring ngl.

I also think Felix was forgiven too quickly. Which is hilarious when you remember he's written by the same man who'd rather redeem abusive adults super villains than bully teenagers!

In my rewrite, Felix joins Lila and becomes the third Hawk Moth after Marinette gets arrested, and he stays a villain 'til the end out of hatred towards his cousin.

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If a character was introduced as a bigger and meaner bully than Jax, I bet he would immediately try to befriend them -even out of fear of being their next victim- and joined them in making everyone's elses life a living nightmare just because they'd both find it funny.

And if this new character was mean to Jax as well, it would be up to the others to stand up to the bigger bully and defend the rabbit.

Pomni: "Come on, guys! Jax might be a a-hole sometimes. But at least he's better than X"

Gangle: "Yeah. Back off, X! Only Jax can bully us!"

Zooble: "It's okay, Jax. Even if you initially sided with X and only stopped mistreating us when they gave you a taste of your own medicine, we forgive you, because you've experienced in a day what you put us through for years. That means you've learned your lesson"

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Young Maddie in her Zaun clothes

Maddie's first memory of Piltover begins with her waking up in a nice room for four in a pediatric hospital. She's laying on a soft bed, with bandages wrapped around her head; a side of her forehead iches for some reason. Despite that new enviroment, she feels strangely safe. She smells something nice and turns her head to the closest drawer to see the plate with a fresh-out-of-hoven croissant, a glass of juice and a bowl of diced fruid. Maddie quickly grabbs the plate, to not be noticed by the other young patiences and their relatives.

When she starts to devour the croissant, a doctor walks up to her, with an elderly lady alonside. He asks the girl how she's doing. Maddie looks worried for a moment, but the nice lady reassures the food is for her. While Maddie finishes eating, the doctor explains that he had to put stitches on her forehead to close a wound that most likely will leave a permanent scar. Apparently Maddie ran in the middle of the street without looking first, and the carriage where the lady was travelling on hit her, causing the girl to pass out. The doctor asks for the girl's name and where they can find her parents, to inform them of the accident. Maddie focuses, but she doesn't remember anything about herself.

She innocently asks if she can have more juice. The doctor replies that he'll tell the nurse to bring her more, then he leads the elderly lady that took Maddie to the hospital outside the room, so they can talk privately. They conclude that the accident gave Maddie amnesia, that's why she can't even remember her name. The man suspects that she might be from Zaun, for the conditions of her clothes and because she seems malnutritioned. The doctor suggests to check the bag Maddie had with her when the carriage hit her, but the lady states that her son is an Enforcer, therefore he can take care of the situation, find the girl's parents and reunite her with them.

The lady returns to Maddie, this time on her own, and she sits on a chair next to her bed. At that point the girl gives her a modest present: a flower origami made with the napkin that came with the plate. After thanking her for the present, the lady introduces herself as Amalia Nolan. Since they don't know where Maddie's family is, Amalia says she would be more than happy to welcome the girl in her home, for as long as it's going to take to find her relatives.

Turns out that Maddie never left the Nolans' home ever since the woman who "found" her let her to stay. Maddie officially joined their family, got her former name and Enforcer Nolan became her adoptive father.

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du you have any tips on writing poco woman? :)

I assume you mean POC women, and not the mini goat Pocoyo

Anyway, I think it would be more helpful (and respectful) to ask WOC for tips since it's about them.

Personally I've found a lot of helpful writing advices on Instagram and YouTube that I've used for my Ben 10 fankid Emilia and other OCs 😁

If you have Insta, check Prose without thornes (prosewithoutthornes) page by Denise Leora Madre as a start.

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Her!! 💜💜💜

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My ace princess 🖤🩶🤍💜🤍🩶🖤

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Happy pride month, everyone 🏳️‍🌈

To celebrate, I've made these screenshots redraw with Glimmadora wearing the princess prom outfits I made for them a while ago.

Cuties ❤️💖

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I almost forgot about this cuties 🥹

Here's the full outfits btw

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Another year, another pride month, still loving my girls 🩷❤️

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I know you not native American but I'm wondering how wound write Radcliffe?

I was thinking about answering with actual possible rewrite ideas for his character. But I realized even doing that would be disrespectful, as a way to try to fix a movie that isn't problematic only for how some characters were written, but because of the dark original story that Disney used as a base for the animated movie.

Therefore I'm going to leave Radcliffe the way he is, because I don't think it's right (or worth it) to try better his character, given he's used to make John Smith and his buddies look like the good guys in comparison.

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X: "Radcliffe is such a lame villain! He doesn't meet Pocahontas until the end of the movie, and they don't even talk to each other!"

Me: "Yeah"

X: "And he's used as a scapegoat for what the colonizers did to Native Americans and their land"

Me: "Yeah!"

X: "And his villain song SUCKS!"

Me:

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I'm going to tell my grandchildren this is TADC last episode.

I loved it when Jax said- AAAAAAAAAH

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Me everytime Jax appears on screen:

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Actually, the worst thing a character could do is take five minutes to chew one cereal or a single potato chip.

Watching a scene like that is the opposite of an ASMR video for me.

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🟡Arcane AU in the making🔵

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Gooseworx when it comes to adress the racist jokes of her crew, the VAs working with a suspected groomer and her poorly aged posts about women: "Look at this cigarette fandom! Keep yapping and I'm going to make the show's ending bad on purpose. You guys don't deserve good things!"

Gooseworx when she talks about being a cartoon creator: