SAINT.

saint. she/her. whump sideblog. whump obsessed, less stressed. prompts n shit.

[saintsofviolence]

saint. she/her. hurt/no comfort lover. whump sideblog. whump obsessed, less stressed. #1 military whump enjoyer frfr. prompts + my stuff. very up and down in terms of posting rip. lady whump<333. may post/reblog noncon so be warned. pretty blog for not so pretty things.

tropes : lady whump!!! MILITARY WHUMP!! used as a bait, pet whump, lab whump, magic whump, nsfwhump / noncon, betrayal trope, royal whump, kidnapping, any sort of captivity, medieval whump, rich people being whumped does that exist... parting words regret, nonhuman whumpee, living weapon whumpee & more, will edit.

triggers : i can stomach whatever gets thrown at me in terms of gore trauma and whump in general, so there aren't any specific triggers & squicks i have. my stuff is usually tagged with all the corresponding content warnings at the top.

fandoms / media : the last of us, death note, marvel, elden ring, cyberpunk 2077, the hunger games, attack on titan, berserk, tokyo ghoul, kakegurui, squid game, scream, arcane, shadow and bone, jujutsu kaisen, resident evil, call of duty, junji ito maniac, game of thrones & more.

asks / requests : open!

links to my stuff : a life worth living ( masterpost soonish ). chains of dominion. iron & blood (masterpost soonish).

[zizygy]

say it with me. you do not have to be working through something to like whump. you do not need to have trauma to enjoy hurting/seeing characters get hurt. your ocs do not have to be self-inserts or reveal deep and buried parts of your psyche

you can just like shit

[tenderwhumps]

whump is fun because you see a character and are like “i love you so much that i want to see you sobbing and covered in blood. i need you dying in a hospital bed. i need you cold, wet, and miserable. i love you and want you to suffer unimaginable horrors. then you can have a kiss on the head as a treat”

[fineiguessimintowhump]

thoughts about whumpee being told "Look at me when I'm speaking to you-" because classics are classics:

- Wrenching Them Up By The Hair™. The Classic. beloved.

- Pain so sudden it startles them into looking

- Do they have a collar of some kind? perhaps with a loop? Something to hook your finger into to pull? Or just a leash, I'm not picky.

- Tip of a blade under a chin. Or muzzle of a gun. any weapon. incredibly goofy with a morningstar.

- speaking of muzzle- have you considered: hooking a finger into whumpee's gag and/or muzzle and pulling? because i have. i have.

- Simply grabbing whumpee's chin. Bruisingly Tight.

- Beating whumpee up until they've learnt respect

[saintsofviolence]

HOW DO I REBLOG THINGS NORMALLY NOW DJJSKSKSMDJSKALLWWKWK NO I DONT WANT YOUR FAST REBLOG OR WHATEVER GIVE ME MY REBLOGS BACK

[viscera-lab]

I want more rescues where whumpee is transported in a cage. Maybe it's because they're not human and need to be restrained for everyone's safety or maybe it's because they can't be coaxed out or maybe the team doesn't have the time/tools to open the cage or maybe whumpee can't walk and there aren't enough hands to carry them or or or...

[mediocre-quill-ink]

Sometimes being into whump is so embarrassing cause I feel like this image

[saintsofviolence]

i had to get a surgery done recently and now i'm in pain but it's okay because i get to feel like a recovering whumpee

[fineiguessimintowhump]

list of some tropes that are very clichés and very lovely:

someone being told to use [name] instead of a title and the name just... becomes the title. Yes, Name. Thank you, Name. Sorry, Name. It doesn't mean anything to them.

Someone with good intentions, shocked at what they're seeing and whumper's delightfulness in humiliating whumpee for them. yes, do show them how obedient your pet is.

assumptions. especially ones that cause massive misunderstanding. whumpee spending weeks in fear bc they assumed something and caretaker another. surprise! you're not dying anytime soon.

"[order] or I'll make you" (and it'll be 1838392 times worse) (:

tests. "they'll never know" except they do because it was a test and you failed. suffer.

panic over minor incidents (i.e. the beloved broken glass.)

terrified whumpee still trying to protect their new friend.

whumper bemused as they listen to whumpee's reasons to not [blank] them right now. it's happening anyway but the babbling is always fun.

scrambling away as someone slowly walks behind. so cute.

whumpee being given options and begging. they'll choose but they still beg.

the exact same torture happening every day until whumpee slowly breaks. and then it continues anyway.

whumpee who shows a bit of defiance. maybe gets some hope about freedom. and is immediately reminded of the reality of it all.

[pvtashby]

Whumpees who associate being sedated/drugged with being violated. They need something done like a procedure or minor surgery, and insist on no sedation. Whumpee simply cannot tolerate not knowing what happens to them while they’re out. Sure, being awake for it will be horrible, but trusting someone else with their body is not an option.

“Most people find this extremely uncomfortable, are you sure you don’t want anything?”

“I’m sure.”

“We can give you something just to take the edge off—“

“No.”

“Alright. If you change your mind, just let us know.”

“Thanks, I won’t.”

[221berkeleysquare]

Whumper who uses Whumpee's chronic pain/illness against them.

[starpains]

on “the blond,” “the older man,” and other crimes against third-person limited

You know that thing where a story is written in tight third person limited — we’re meant to be inside someone’s head, seeing the world through their thoughts — and then suddenly the narration says “the blond frowned” or “the shorter woman sighed” about a person the POV character knows really well?

That’s called antonomasia — using a descriptive label instead of a name. And it’s fine when we’re talking about strangers: “the cashier handed her the receipt,” “the tall guy blocked the door.” The POV character doesn’t know their names, and we just need a quick way to tell people apart.

But the moment it’s used for someone the POV character already knows, it breaks immersion. Because that’s not how our minds work. We don’t think “the older man smiled at me.” We think “Mark smiled.” Or maybe “my boss” if that relationship matters in the moment.

Third person limited means the narration sits inside someone’s perception. Their inner monologue is the story’s voice. So when you switch from “Mark smiled” to “the blond smiled,” you’ve pulled the camera away from their mind and turned it into an outside shot.

If you want to create distance or irritation, you can do it on purpose —

“The idiot from accounting emailed again.”

That’s character voice. That’s judgment. That works.

But otherwise?

As soon as your POV character knows someone’s name, use it. While we do tend to worry about repetitions, names rarely register as such to the readers.

If you need variety for rhythm, use relational or emotional identifiers that make sense in their head: her friend, his partner, their teacher, the person they loved.

Because inside someone’s thoughts, there are no “blonds” or “brunettes.”

There are only people they know.

[wisteria-lodge]

Really good explanation of the fundamental problem with this type of writing.

(and why it's one of my huge pet peeves)

[whumpernickelsandwich]

healer whumper who carefully tends to whumpee's wounds post-torture. they take extra measures to make sure whumpee will recover properly, and by the time their treatment is over, it's as if whumpee was never injured. this gives whumper infinite possibilities on what they can do to whumpee, because they know that no matter how bad the injuries get, whumpee will never die under their watch, and can thus be tortured to their heart's content :)

[seth-whumps]

“Are you honestly so weak you need all this equipment to get one, one single cry, out of me? And then you try and tell me I’m the useless one. Wow.” + Whumper

"Oh, but don't worry. It doesn't matter how weak I am--it matters how weak I can make you."

"I don't recall giving you permission to speak."

"...Get the muzzle."

"Well, to be fair, it was a pretty pathetic cry."

"Nurse, record 'aggressive behavior' under the trial, please."

how to play

[whumpernickelsandwich]

water whump

water can be used in soo many different ways in whump scenarios. here are a few i thought of today, feel free to suggest more!

cw: vomit, torture, drowning

depriving whumpee of water (a classic)

or, alternatively, giving whumpee so much water at once that they throw it all up

waterboarding whumpee (also a classic)

forcing whumpee to shower in only scalding hot or freezing cold water

putting poison in whumpee's water, causing them to distrust every glass they are given

throwing a whumpee with drowning trauma into the deep end of a pool

or, leaving a whumpee who can't swim to drown

forcing whumpee's head in water, making them have to hold their breath for a long time. the rest of their body is completely dry, and yet the panic of drowning is overwhelming (think the saw 5 water cube trap or the barrel of water in would you rather)

repeatedly drowning and reviving whumpee, so that the brain damage caused by the oxygen deprivation multiplies and their throat burns from repeatedly coughing up water. plus, their ribs being constantly broken from cpr!!

trapping whumpee in a pool

making whumpee drink unclean water, and then refusing to treat the illness that comes afterward

forcing whumpee to swim until they are exhausted

chinese water torture

[ferv-snz]

Toxic Whumpee things

• Wanting violent intimacy with Caretaker because they're feeling self-loathing and feel like they need to get hurt like they did by Whumper. They know Caretaker would never but they angrily demand it of them because they can't forgive themselves for "being a disappointment"

• Aggressively pushing Caretaker away (either emotionally or physically or both) when they're thinking of doing something self-destructive. Pulling away is a big red flag to Caretaker because they normally want closeness

• Caretaker telling Whumpee that they'll give them space since they seem like they need it. Despite pushing away Whumpee emotionally replies, "All I want is attention. I make a fool of myself for attention. I degrade myself for attention. I'll do anything for attention. Just ask Whumper." Those words hit Caretaker hard because they know how desperate and hurt and lonely and scared Whumpee was with Whumper. Caretaker questions how much Whumpee trusts them with their heart and body after hearing that

• Whumpee falling into all manner of obsessive addiction hell because they feel like they have to be chained to something in order to live. They can't go through life feeling free of all things. They feel like they need to be owned even if it's by a bad habit and not a person

[saintsofviolence]

ok hear me out whumpee auctions....

an agency that specifies in 'rescuing' whumpees just to put them up for sale. or maybe they specialize in finding whumpees who escaped and auctioning them so their whumper can hopefully try and buy them again...

each whumpee is brough on stage, their 'qualities' shouted to an attendance of whumpers, and then the poor things proceed to see the price they're worth and what people are willing to pay for them, essentially. it's not just degrading, but also embarassing. they don't want to be bought for cheap because that would mean they're ugly/useless/etc right? and usually, the richer the whumper, the better their 'sistemation' for the forseeable future. it's a tricky game.