Talons of power redraw
I was disappointed by this graphic novel page in particular because it didn't at all feel like the novel scene to me (I really like that scene for some reason), and was just overall confusing to look at, so I redrew it with the lighting and vibe I imagined while reading it.
I decided to include my aquatic language headcanon just to add something to it. Basically that aquatic works like morse code: you can spell out any word with any glowscale, but which ones used (or what area of the bidy they're on) add context so that seawings can mostly speak in shorthand. I might make a post about that but I'm still working out some details.
Here's the original page:









