I am currently reading the Eat God playtest (0.6.2), and something I wanted to compliment you on is how directly comprehensible it is. An immense amount of my frustration with D&D is that, starting from the beginning of a PHB and reading forward, large sections frequently prove irrelevant or incomprehensible without later information -- no relevant pages given, of course! This is not confined to D&D, either, I have run across many board games that seem to have picked at random the order in which rules are explained, leading to a great deal of frustration on my part.
I'm always of two minds about comments like this. On the one hand, I appreciate the the vote of confidence that I'm succeeding in making the text approachable. On the other hand, I know that I'm an average technical writer at best, so it feels kind of like I'm benefiting from other people's misfortune on account of the fact that many major tabletop RPG publishers have seemingly never even heard of technical writing!
(Incidentally, Eat God's playtest draft is up to version 0.7.2 at the moment, so if you're a full major version behind, you may wish to pick up the latest – a lot of stuff has been further clarified in the interim.)
Thank you for the update!
I also think that the lack of technical writing skill in the D&D PHBs I have read has helped contribute to the culture of "GM does everything". An experience I have had several times goes roughly as follows:
"Please read the relevant PHB sections."
"Okay, that's great that you read that, and I know it was in the relevant PHB section, but that's not relevant to your character right now, or to this setting we're doing."
"Here are (some of) the differences from the PHB. More will be revealed over time."
Those differences are anything from "microwave ovens exist" to "your character cannot align to a LG/CG deity".
I do not blame the GMs here, they were quite good, but I found that the PHB throwing everything at the reader meant that I eventually came to the conclusion of, "Okay, when necessary, the GM will tell me which parts of this sprawling mess I actually need to acknowledge, let alone care about."

















