Nightwing, Red Hood, Red Robin, Spoiler, Batgirl, all hug their teams after missions, check in, make sure they’re fine, because its what Bruce would do, what Batman did, after a rough patrol, or a difficult mission, he’d crush them close, ensure their safety, check in afterwards because maybe the mission was a little harsher and more trying so Bruce was a little more bitchy and he just wants to check in, make sure they’re good, make sure his kids are okay, that they’re safe, and the League sees this happen and is like “where did crime lord Red Hood learn this?” to just hug his teammates after battle? Weird. And then they all are like- “wait batman doesn't hug yall after battle?” And the League is like “wtf no????” and yeah…
I just want the kids to be the tadest bit oblivious to the fact that their Batman is also their Dad and is not the League’s Batman.
HOW TO SHOW CONFUSION IN WRITING!
“She was confused.” — Boring.
“She didn’t understand.” — Still boring.
Confusion isn’t a thought. It’s a reaction. It leaks out of the body before the character even says “what?”
Here’s how to write it so it feels lived-in. Reblog if you want more of these!
THE BODY LANGUAGE OF CONFUSION
Voice:
• Words slow down or come out uneven
• Sentences trail off or restart mid-thought
• Tone lifts at the end unintentionally
• Pauses appear in strange places
• Quiet
• Hesitating to speak
“I—wait. No, that doesn’t—”
“Okay, hang on. Say that again?”
“You mean… now?”
Eyes:
• Brows knit
• Eyes narrow
• Gaze flicks between objects or people
• Blinking increases
• Focus keeps slipping
• Staring a moment too long
• Looking away to think, then back again
Mouth & Jaw:
• Lips part slightly, then press together
• Jaw tightens
• Excessive swallowing
• Mouth twists as if unsure to speak
• Lower lip pulls in, gets bitten
• Half-formed expressions that don’t land
• Mouth opens to speak—closes again
His mouth opened, closed. Nothing came out.
She pressed her lips together, then released them, like the thought slipped loose.
His jaw shifted as if he were testing words silently.
His fingers hovered mid-gesture, then dropped uselessly to his side.
She rubbed her thumb against her palm.
He fidgeted with his sleeve, eyes still locked on her face.
Shoulders & Posture:
• Weight shifts repeatedly
• Shoulders creep up without meaning to
• Body leans back slightly
• Head tilts, then tilts again
• Unconfident body language
THE INTERNAL STUFF (cause that's important too)
• Thoughts loop
• Simple logic feels... not so simple
• They latch onto one detail too hard
• Or latch onto someone whose comfortable
• Time stretches
• Pressure behind eyes, around throat, in stomach
• Their focus tunnels, or they're painfully aware of their surroundings
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My favorite whump trope is utter confusion. It’s just so innocent and also a big “oh shit, this is bad” indication. Nothing shows helplessness more than confusion or even amnesia as the result of illness, injury, or deprivation.
When a whumpee wakes up ill or rouses from passing out and they have no clue what’s going on, what happened, where they are, or even who they are. They might not recognize familiar people. Maybe they feel affection, safety, relief, or fear towards the person/people above them, but can’t recall names.
Alternatively, a whumpee gets more and more confused as their condition progresses. This can be from blood loss, intense pain, shock, concussion, hypothermia, heat stroke, dehydration, starvation, and exhaustion as well as fever.
Always remember to give your whumpee slurred, spacey dialogue. Here are some examples:
“….ngh….w-wh’re m’I…..?”(a classic. It’s especially good when the whumpee is in their own bed)
“…wha’s…goin on….?” (when they don’t want to open their eyes and/or people are freaking out over them)
“…wha hppnd...? (When the floor/bed/cold bath/hospital/person’s arms they’re on/in is very different from the last thing they remember)
“…m’scared…” (because that’s their reaction to knowing nothing)
Of course, Caretaker will have to collect themself enough to explain to Whumpee in simple sentences what happened in a way that lessens the severity of what’s really going on. For example:
“It’s okay, it’s me. You had an accident, but we’re patching you up.” (Whumpee’s body is completely broken)
“You’re in bed. You’re not feeling well” (Whumpee passed the fuck out)
“Hey, shhh shhh… We’re just getting your fever down” (Whumpee wakes up thrashing in a cold bath)
