ToA: The Dark Prophecy Opinion (4/4)
I should have posted this a couple of days ago but I forgot,sorry-
The last part of this serie (technically only completed 2/5 of the bigger one but shhh-) is here! Before we get to the technicalities of this book,I want to give my honest (and final) opinion of it.
The Dark Prophecy is boring,the only salvageable parts are the chapters focused on Apollo and Meg in Trophonius's cave,and a couple of moments here and there between the characters. 80% of this book is completely useless. I preferred THO more than this one,maybe it was because it was the first book ever of this serie,so new things and all,or maybe it had been a while since I read of this universe when I started ToA. Idk. I prefer this Oracle to Dodona's,but this book was extremely underwhelming. This was more of a steeping stone,that started to slowly began to get things moving,for the final battle against the Emperor than anything else really. I hope The Burning Maze will do better and be more entertaining,especially with the Labyrinth now involved.
As for the narrative choice,I don't really have much to say. Apollo is still having episodes where he remembers everything and then the next moments he forgets everything. Like I said the other times,this is the only way Riordan can pull this off,otherwise it's too easy for Apollo since he would know everything. I didn't talk about this in my review of THO,but I like how he justified this by having Apollo's mortal brain not being able to contain all the divine memories of his life. It's actually a very good explanation for this.
I want to talk about the plot armor because it bothers me a lot. I forgot to talk about it when I was reading THO (lol),and even then it was bothering me,so I take the opportunity to do so now. I hate how the plot armor works here. Apollo receives a power boost in the most convenient way possible: divine strength when he needs to fight against dangerous soldiers; light of his former divine form when he needs to do something about Commodus. What's next? The sun will be in tune with him again for a couple of seconds? I don't mind that he still has a bit of his talents with archery and music because that's fine,especially now that he needs to practice and take care of his tools and instruments.
I don't know why it bothers me so much,because PJO and HoO definitely had their moments with inexplicable plot armor moments for the various characters (especially Percy),but it was...more readable? Maybe we could find an explanation for it? Like,for example when Calypso had her powers forced out of her body by Britomartis,a literal goddess that violated her? I can understand that. But I can't stand it when it comes to Apollo. Maybe it's Zeus that gives him those boosts (hope so because it's the most reasonable theory I have,even tho it shouldn't make sense story wise),or it's his desire of protecting Meg or it ties up to the fact that she is his mistress,since it happens only when she is in dangers (the characters also acknowledge that).
When it comes to the characters and their dynamics/interactions I have a lot to say. Let's start with the main trio for this one: Apollo,Leo and Calypso.
I'll start by saying that I will do a proper post focused only on Caleo,because there is a lot I want to discuss about them. It's not like they were horrible in this,but they also weren't great either. I can kinda understand Calypso to a point,being away from the island you were trapped in for multiple millennia and starting a life in a world extremely different from what you remember must not be easy,but after that it gets to a point that her behavior towards Leo is unnecessary and uncalled for. Leo also has his fault in this but I will elaborate later–especially because there in the book,when they needed to separate from Apollo,Calypo made a speech about them that I want to analyze.
Apollo and Calypso had a lot of problems with each other,and the book fortunately acknowledged that and didn't forget about their pasts. Apollo started this book by wanting to abandon her to the blemmyae,and ended it by saying that she is a good friend that he cares about. Calypso also ended up appreciating him,despite their arguments,and tried to make sure that Apollo will always know that they were there for him–even if now they were going to be separated. It was a nice character growth from both of them.
Apollo and Leo,instead,were much more comfortable with each other since the beginning,at the end of THO. I wish we got to see more moments between them,because I liked the friendship they have going on and I love how Apollo understood Leo's view when Calypso didn't. I also liked how Apollo sometimes praised Leo's mechanical skills and how Leo tried to reassure Apollo that everything would be fine. Leo also called Apollo multiple times "ese",and I did my research on it and it meant "friend" in gang culture (Leo you want to tell us something man?). They are underrated.
Now,Meg and Apollo aren't really focus here like last time,but it was nice seeing their relationship progress. I left them last time with Meg betraying Apollo and Apollo still wanting to get her back because he cared,to have them back again together. I liked how Meg was hesitant at the start. She saved Apollo's life because he is a friend she cares about (she also probably felt guilty about what happened in Dodona),but still didn't know if it was ok trusting him after everything because she didn't think she deserved to be forgiven. And Apollo? He didn't yell,didn't get angry or anything really,he just....wanted her to feel welcomed and safe. And also started to help her by making her,little by little,accept how much poisonous Nero is to her. All the interactions and parallelisms they had in the cave? Pure agony for both of them. And I loved every second of it. I'll probably do a post only on that because the flashbacks scenes are living rent-free in my mind right now.
Commodus was underwhelming. He had a great start,especially with Apollo's memories of him before we even got to actually meet him in the book,but everything went flat pretty fast. I know that he is the weakest of the 3 but he got presented as a whole dangerous killing machine,and then? Nothing. I think he is "all brawn no brains" of the group since his strategies weren't really great,and were all based on brute force. I enjoyed Apollo's flashback of him because it gave the opportunity to see how their relationship ("definitely more than friends but we don't know what we are yet" stage?) was,and how Commodus took Apollo's "betrayal". The dude had it coming honestly,especially with how much shit he was doing back in the day.
All the new side characters (that had a bit of screentime and lines) were great. Hemithea and Josephine (with Georgina) were the most important ones without a doubt. I liked their subplot and how they took care of the main group. W acknowledging mental health! This was the first book where I could feel that it mattered. Other than that they were flat. Hemithea backstory is given to us by Apollo while Josephine apparently was a gangster that regretted what she did. Other than that,their characters is all about Georgina. Which fair,she is literally the daughter that went insane and was captured by the bad guy. It's understandable that they worry about her (and the griffins) but their characters are just that: worrying about Georgina. Josephine is barely acknowledged at all most of the time and Hemithea's only interesting subplot was the fact that she had to give up the immortality that Apollo gifted her,and that it wasn't easy for her to do so. But it's never shown. I also have no idea where her sister is,since they went to Artemis together. Is she with the hunters? Is she dead? Somewhere else enterely?
Lityerses had a whole character arc with a final redemption and is by far the one I liked most. Starting from being a total asshole with a desire for revenge against Leo,to being a total asshole to Commodus. We need more Lityerses in this world. The other (ex) prisoners were also flat: there were two demigods (we didn't even get to know their names or their parentage); Jamie that only gave us another pantheon that we will never see again; the hunter was completely useless because the Hunters of Artemis were going to be there anyway; Sssssarah–the comic relief; and probably other people too but that were never named. Out of this group Georgina was the only one that was plot-relevant because of Trophonius's message.
Speaking of him,Trophonius is a complicated one. He deeply cares about Agamethus a lot and is still pained from what happened. He also doesn't like Apollo and tried to kill Meg,but was still civil with them (how??) and even asked Apollo to destroy his cave. His relationship with Apollo is conflicted,because of what happened but he still hopes that one day Apollo will become the dad he never was to him; while him and his brother,even in death,care a lot about each other–which is interesting for me. Trophonius himself killed Agamethus as collateral damage but Agamethus was the one that asked him,and knew it was necessary,otherwise both of them were going to die that night. And Trophonius was devastated by his death,and he was until the end,his last words to Apollo were about his brother. Their story was tragic but they still love each other ever after everything–it's really heartwarming.
Riordan needs to find something else for the Hunters of Artemis since all the times they show up,they can never stay too long because they are going after some dangerous and ancient animals. A bit of creativity no? Ok-
I don't like how the Hunters of Artemis got retconned,because at the start the girls become hunters only to "escape" from men and romance. Now it's extended to "all the romance are off-limits" and as a aroace myself that's something I don't agree with. But I'll do a separate post on them because I hate their whole "man-hating" culture and their attitudes most of the time,but first I want to get to Reyna joining them because I have a lot to say about that too,I might as well do everything together. Artemis has a cult in these books,not a group of young women that are devoted to her.
Thalia is the only exception among them. And speaking of her,I wish Riordan would use her in the main story more,instead of giving her a short cameo per story. She has a lot of potential and let's not forget that she is Zeus's daughter,not a nameless demigod. If Riordan doesn't want her to leave the hunters then it's fine,you don't have to put the hunters everywhere she goes because Thalia is capable of doing things herself–as shown in the short story with Percy and Nico. Everytimes she pulls up there is always something important going on,and her help is always fundamental (not really with Orion but it was more of a Reyna sub-plot,so she had to defeat him). Even here,she saved Apollo and then proceeded to help the Waystation resident to fight Commodus,giving them a chance since the hunters were a lot,and they needed as many people as possible to fight him and his mini-army. Thalia herself is extremely powerful too,she went toe to toe with Percy in TTC and that was when she just come back from being a tree for years. But nope,let's have her almost always excluded from everything.
For the gods instead,it was a surprise knowing of Styx and that she is a real goddess,she is a very interesting concept. I really want to know more about her and I hope that Apollo will meet her again,especially with his broken promise. I'm conflicted on Britomartis because she straight up violated Calypso's magic –in her own body– something extremely important and sensible for her,especially now that it was "gone" (which I don't like because Calypso shouldn't be able to get her magic back after she left her island),but if she hadn't done it,they would have died in that zoo. Maybe she could have destroyed the net herself in another way,but she also couldn't alert Zeus of her presence since he doesn't want gods to help Apollo. There was no in between (maybe).
Artemis was only mentioned but it's still nice knowing that she is trying to stem the rule a bit to help her brother,and that she also cares about him like he does for her. Leto and Zeus's conversation got my attention. I love how Apollo,Artemis and Leto are extremely close to each other and then there is Zeus. Leto begging Zeus to end Apollo's punishment put emphasis on how much she loves him and can't see him suffer. Zeus is still Zeus,but I found it interesting how he was the only one that noticed Apollo during their conversation (if he really heard him like Apollo thought),while Leto couldn't.
I don't really have anything to say about the world building,because they realistically stayed in only 3 places (in the same city btw-) in this whole book,but the addition of the Waystation to this world is nice. It's nice knowing that there are safe places out there for demigods that don't feel under CJ or CHB radars. I loved its concept and it reminded me of a safer CHB,with actual people that help you out instead of whatever the hell Chiron is doing. The Oracle of Trophonius was also very interesting,shame that the cave got destroyed in the same book it got presented,but that's fine. There is a whole new pantheon introduced in this world that I know Riordan will never use again,he is like that after all: he adds everything he wants,but never uses what he has to do something interesting with it. But nope.
This post was lowkey more about the characters than anything else-
Anyway,this is all for now. I'll wait for a bit before starting reading the third book (maybe next week or the future ones),but I do want to get into more details for some elements of this one. The next few days are going to be interesting :D