The Twilight Saga rewrite: New Moon
I wasn't expecting this many people to be interested in this. lol
(PSA: if you're a Twilight fan. Please don't take any offense to this. it's all in good fun and boredom. thank you)
the first rewrite in case you haven't read it already: TWILIGHT REWRITE
So we begin. not where the original story began but with Carlisle. looking at the burning fires of all the vampire bodies in the first story. esme and him have a convo on the voltori. fearing James's rampage might get their attention. we build tension with who they're talking about. They both hold hands concerned about the future of their family...
2 YEARS LATER
it's Bella's birthday. she's reluctantly celebrating it while not really wanting to. she's been having bizarre and cryptid dreams of her mom and other women in robes. she brushes it off just wanting to enjoy her day. things act out the same as in the original but we get some more cute romance between Edward and her. oh and her dad is trying to make sense of the Cullens. he and Carlisle have been talking to each other but after what happened with James and his gang. there's this sense of weirdness in every interaction...
later that night. Bella's birthday is at the Cullen's. Bella and Edward have a conversation on the Voltari. an old group of vampires who act like a monarchy. looking over the vampires for centuries. no one really likes them but they are the oldest and strongest so they're feared...
they have her birthday and all seems normal until Bella goes to the Cullens house to see them gone. the house is still filled with their stuff there. she finds a note saying something critical has come up and they had to leave...
MEANWHILE, Papa Swan is hunting down the last remaining vampire Victoria who is out for blood for what happened to James. he works quick but the men warn him about a section of the forest that's "cursed" with all of the shit he's seen he takes that warning to heart...
THE START OF BELLA'S ARC
Bella is confused, sad, and a bit heartbroken by them just ghosting her. She goes back into town with her friends including Jacob for a night out. bikers begin to harass them Bella in a fit of rage sets the man on fire. but she didn't do it physically she did it with her mind. She freaks out seeing flashes of Edward being ripped apart by the Voltori and she sees HER MOM? trying to talk her down from her panic attack. like a spirit coming to her rescue. She locks herself away for 2 weeks in a deep depression not exactly knowing what happened. She remembers that picture from her mom's stuff. the picture of women dressed in black. she runs to do research only to find out about an old coven of witches who were killed off in Salem. some of which escaped and started secret covens across America...
Bella visits Jacob to fix her car. he's obviously Buffer and taller than the last time she's seen him. They talk and banter about her family she tells him about her visions and her mom. she's ready for him to not take her seriously (at this point she assumes he has no idea about the vampire thing) but he believes her. they hang out for the rest of the day but as night approaches a car crash into the woods. this is no accident. Victoria still hasn't forgotten or forgiven and wants it back in blood. Jacob tells her to run and she does. she hears howls and fighting behind her. she's confused. her mother's spirit yells for her to keep running. she does but falls back seeing three massive werewolves standing in the forest. they jump over her after Victoria. In the heat of the battle, Bella convulses and yells out knocking everyone back. snaping the tall trees nearby in half. the wind blows furiously around her leaves and dirt flies in the air...
ENTER THE WEREWOLVES
the werewolves chase Victoria. they injure her and she falls into a waterfall. (she's obviously alive) through the fight, Bella passes out. She has a moment with her mom in a dreamlike state. She says her emotions control her powers and she must get a hang of them before she hurts herself. she disappears. Bella wakes up in Jacob's parents' house along with his cousins. She walks through a local reservation near the town. she catches up to Jacob as he reveals a long time ago that a chief discovered after being beaten by a wolf was cursed with being a Lycan (a werewolf.) but he found this as a way to protect his people. this newfound power benefited them as no one dared cross them, they prospered forever, and their land was untouched...
Bella is a bit shocked by this new revelation that her best friend is a werewolf. this would no doubt explain his new buff look. (Jacob's abs are still intact this time he's of age, lmao.) Bella continues to read up on her mother's coven and train herself. she's communicating with the spirit of her mother but only through vague messages. no full-on convos. She guides her toward her old spell book buried under the house. (this is a story about Bella's self-discovery. it's focused on her character and her growth not only with her powers but in her confidence with the help of her friends of course.) as time passes she still misses Edward. thinking about him always...
THE VULTORI
Alice shows up at her doorstep telling her that the Cullens are on trial with the vultori for almost exposing the existence of vampires. they've been held in a castle in Romania awaiting their trial. Alice. fearing they might come after the town. the Cullens left to try to lose their trail but they were caught. Bella feels partially responsible for this and goes with Alice to try to help the Cullens. what follows is a game of shadows. the head of the Vultori Aro brings the Cullen family to a twisted dinner. intimidation and mind games ensue...
DINNER WITH THE VAMPIRE CULT
Carlisle defends his family the best way he can but the other vultori want his head. Carlisle and Aro have a history. it's revealed he was at one point a part of the order but left seeing how power-hungry they were. Bella jumps in the convo. she tries using her psychic powers in this ordeal to escape but she's shocked to find vampire witches in the order. they catch on quick. (she only learned that a few days ago. it wouldn't have hurt to try it out now. lol) Edward of course tries to fight his way out against Carlisle's wishes. Bella uses her powers again this time she kills three vultori in the process. aro stops the fight impressed by Bella's abilities. she's more powerful than
he sees the obvious relationship between her and Edward. at some point, he knows she will probably turn and she will be of use to them. maybe even join their order...
Aro lets them go, giving them a warning with a light threat. Only a few humans know of them. nothing they haven't handled before. So they're really no threat to them. YET...
ONE LAST THING
they return home. Edward and Bella make up for the lost time. it's been two years since they first met. he apologizes for having to leave so early and tells her he wanted to tell her something that night before he left...
"will you marry me?"
END.
once again. leaving out some info in this outline but this sums it up the best way I could. lol. thank you for reading this long-ass rewrite...










