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hidey | they/them | 20s | eng/中文 writing @hidey-writes • hideyseek on ao3 周深, guardian/镇魂, the first shot/雪迷宫 on bsky @hideyseek pls come find me

[torstherapy]

[hideyseek]

man. lin qiang is such a pawn of the bank institution, batted around by all the bank partners and department heads, its genuinely difficult to get a sense of him as a character!

[abkvs]

futbol torture nexus

[hideyseek]

leaving a dance class like wow i just spent an hour and a half getting thrown around on the floor?

[enthyrea]

i too can make a twins au

[snarp]

Stimulant addict saved from OD by magical healing sex thinks "wait, so I can keep using meth if I keep fucking this wizard" is in inspired concept to put in an otherwise-banal isekai.

[depsidase]

[graceebooks]

i’m just having fun. hatred is involved but i’m just having fun

[unheardoracle]

If Your Scene Feels Lifeless, Someone Is Being Too Polite

Stories stall when everyone behaves. Real tension appears when someone:

• asks the wrong question • says something they shouldn’t • notices something uncomfortable • refuses to drop the topic • misunderstands something important • interrupts at the worst moment

Conflict doesn’t always look like shouting.

[ariaste]

Couple more options for tension:

They want something REALLY REALLY REALLY bad, but for some reason they can't ask for it -- or can't have it even if they did ask.

They don't notice something that the audience HAS noticed (like in a horror movie when the monster is sneaking up behind the protagonist, or if someone drinks a glass of unboiled water during a cholera outbreak because they don't know about germ theory)

Takes a risk (or otherwise does something they "shouldn't" do) which the audience has to sit through for a prolongued period of time (e.g. slips away from the party to go into the host's private office and rifle through their papers before the guards catch them)

Loses when they thought they were going to win

[crescentalice]

girl with ptsd voice: hey, so something really bad is gonna happen, right? you guys are picking up on that too, yeah? The other shoe is about to drop, I just know it.

[lastdollintheforest]

mwah is a very important word

[morethanfantasy]

i <3 characters giving each other bad advice they're totally convinced is good advice based on their own Problems

[morethanfantasy]

and then it is never called out or addressed in any way

[blckgirlacid]

I need my weird alone time or I will explode

[swagophile]

important reminder that most people you follow online are significantly lamer than you think they are including me. and if you feel insecure comparing yourself to someone online: DON'T. theyre probably also lame and weird. most people on the internet are

[most-sane-classicist]

reblog if you're also lame and weird.

[blairwitchdiaries-deactivated20]

👀👀 not gonna name names but SOME of u are sweet and kind and deserve the world and i am rooting for u

[wooteena]

crazy how there are only 2 hours of doing things every day before you keel over and die. if this werent normal id be worried

[loveridden1999]

person (non-practicing)