The worst thing about the tedious pacing of the Horcrux-hunting camping trip in Deathly Hallows is that it didn’t need to be so tedious. The pacing could’ve remained compelling if the trio actually thought of a few possible places besides Hogwarts where Horcruxes may be hidden and actively staked out those places, only to hit dead ends - rather than just stay passive in the tent month after month with only the Godric’s Hollow trip to stir things up. Harry is well aware of other important places in Tom Riddle’s life. What about the orphanage where Tom used to live? What about Borgin and Burkes, a place full of dark artifacts where Tom used to work and where a Horcrux would potentially fit right in? The logical plot development would be for the trio to use Glamour and the Cloak, if not more Polyjuice, to test and search as many potential hiding places for Horcruxes as possible, however unlikely they may be, and then hit more and more setbacks as these places proved useless. It would still amplify the tension and despair of “how are we gonna succeed” and keep the characters active rather than passive, while avoiding page after page of nothing happening. Moreover, the whole “lack of food” issue in the book is nonsense because they could easily get food from Muggle grocery stores while in disguise or invisible. Hermione could use her Muggle money to buy food and perhaps the boys could transfigure their wizarding money into Muggle money to pay for some of it - and then when they inevitably run out of money, their desperation could lead them to start stealing to survive. All of these moments also could translate well to film and keep the onscreen suspense going. There are seriously SO many ways that JKR could’ve avoided such slow and boring pacing.
















