enemies to lovers but its not "who did this to you?" but its "I did this to you" bc damn in the moment it felt necessary but the cuts weren't supposed to be that deep. the lashes should have faded by now, right? why are they still limping? make your characters self reflect. burden them with guilt and regret :) imagine laying in bed with the person you grew to love, only for them to roll over in their sleep and for you to see the nettled scars you inflicted on them
“Noa didn't know that the images in his head while he slept were dreams”
What if Noa feels many things but doesn’t know how to name them?
Could Mae be the one to teach him the names of the emotions he feels, among other things?
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“It all means something and yet nothing to me” (Stranger like me - Phil Collins)
I’ve mentioned that it's good for both Noa and Mae to have had crushes before so they can recognize their attraction to each other.
I was told it would make sense with Mae. Because if she hadn't fallen in love before, it would lead to confusion. But if she knows what a crush feels like, it would give us more room for a sense of alarm.
Especially considering that this time, her romantic interest would be an ape, supposedly the beasts she wants to defeat.
Now, let's talk about Noa. The same should apply to him. BUT...
Remember the deleted scene:
<<Noa didn't know what dreams were.>>
That makes me think Noa doesn’t know many things, actually. He feels them, sees them, but can’t name them all.
Which creates an opportunity for Mae to explain/teach him things. Like a guide or teacher.
Because who else would he talk to?
Noa knows she knows a lot of things. And he’s very curious.
They just need to break that barrier where Mae doesn’t want to show him much. Give her a sign of trust.
But once Noa can identify his feelings, then he’ll be able to differentiate what he feels for Soona. Whether it’s platonic or something more romantic.
I like that more.
Hence, he could point out that his thing with Soona is platonic.
The point is that Noa can express his feelings to show that the apes are evolving by leaps and bounds. And that they just need guidance.
Do you have any tips for strangers arranged marriage plot? Kinda struggle to start :(
Thx 𖹭
YES absolutely, arranged marriage strangers-to-lovers is so juicy, but yeah, the beginning can feel weirdly hard to crack. like… how do you start a relationship when there's no relationship yet?? you’re trying to build chemistry and stakes from nothing, and still make it feel emotionally real.
so let’s break it down 👇
🌶️the core tension = contract vs connection.
they’re bound together by something external (family, politics, survival, magic law, whatever), not choice. that friction between “we have to be in this” and “do we want to be in this” is your heartbeat.
→ every early scene should let that tension breathe.
→ she doesn’t know if she can trust him. he doesn’t know what she wants. they misread each other. they pull back. they move forward. they get it wrong. it’s messy, because real closeness grows from uncertainty.
🌒 start after the decision, but before the comfort.
you don’t need to open with the wedding or proposal unless it’s plot-critical. honestly, it’s often more powerful to start right after the commitment is sealed.
→ they’ve signed the papers. the ceremony is done. now they’re staring at each other in the hallway of a shared home like: “so… you want the left drawer or?”
→ this gives you room to explore who they are in proximity to each other, and how the arrangement shifts their behavior.
🔍 build tension through contrast.
they should approach this situation differently. one might see it as duty. the other as punishment. one’s trying too hard. the other’s emotionally shut down. one’s deeply polite. the other pushes buttons.
→ the contrast gives you sparks. and from those sparks, you can build emotional ground.
🔥 scenes > exposition.
show the distance through awkward firsts.
→ eating dinner together without talking.
→ realizing they don’t know how the other takes their tea.
→ one getting sick and the other not knowing if they’re allowed to help.
these tiny moments do more than backstory ever could.
🕯️don’t skip the awkward stage.
seriously. lean into it. the first time they argue, the first accidental touch, the first sign of protectiveness or jealousy. even the silence has texture.
→ when you show the shift from “i don’t know you” to “i’m starting to see you,” it hits harder.
you want that moment later where the reader realizes: wait… they know each other now.
💡 quick prompts from me to get started:
she finds something of his in their shared space, something vulnerable.
one of them is forced to defend the other in public, even if they barely know them.
a shared chore, task, or journey where they have to cooperate, but completely clash.
someone from their past shows up and the other gets an unexpected glimpse of who they were before this marriage.
🌼 final note from me:
you’re not writing a romance that starts with attraction. you’re writing one that starts with obligation and grows. and that’s so rich, because everything they learn about each other is earned.
you got this. the start doesn’t have to be perfect, just real. and a little uncomfortable.
(i’m cheering you on from the metaphorical arranged marriage sidelines 🖤)
Some notes on my impression/interpretation of the relationship developments between the Straw Hats in S2:
Zoro & Nami - Continues wonderfully from their established connection in S1, fun sarcastic and sassy banter throughout but also wonderfully sincere moments of support, concern and care for each other.
Vivi - Nami acts as her main emotional focus to help her integrate into the crew, Luffy is the other, which makes for great supportive scenes between them.
Luffy - Has the least amount of emotional one-on-one scenes with the others this season (though there are a few moments) likely because his emotional connection to all of them was the most established in S1. He gets more stuff with the new characters like Vivi.
Nami & Usopp - Very wholesome and supportive interactions throughout, they just get along really well. They don't really joke around or banter with each other and have a little more calmer nature to their conversations than what we see them have with most of the others.
Sanji & Usopp - Two dumbasses supporting each other's dumbassery in a very entertaining and wholesome way. Not really emotional-focused so far but they just naturally feel on the same wavelength in their shenanigans which makes them really fun to watch together.
Zoro & Sanji - Not a very emotionally deep bond either but similarly focused on dumbassery as Sanji & Usopp, just more in the form of rivalry and insulting each other. Not to the point where you'd think they genuinely don't like each other though, they just rub each other the wrong way to some degree.
Nami & Sanji - Very comfortable with each other despite Nami being entirely unimpressed by Sanji's flirting. Sanji is particularly caring towards her which Nami doesn't reciprocate to the same degree but she still accepts and appreciates his emotional vulnerability towards her.
Zoro & Usopp - Also get along well despite the contrast in their personalities and mostly expressed by Zoro encouraging Usopp and genuinely praising him for when he comes through in a fight. Had the only emotionally sincere argument in the crew so far (Usopp snapping at Zoro for making him anxious with his anxiety about Nami) but also quickly solved it with a simple apology from Usopp which was really well done.
It's funny. If I had to say who each member of the crew is closest to I would rank them like this:
Zoro - Nami. It's probably supposed to be Luffy given Zoro's vow to him in S1 but in the episode-to-episode interactions Zoro just feels much more in tune with Nami than with Luffy and also more attentive to her and her emotions and well-being. He's definitely 2nd closest to Luffy though after Nami.
Nami - Zoro. Similar reason as above though Nami feels pretty emotionally close with every Straw Hat. I still see Zoro and Luffy as closer to her than Sanji and Usopp though because she expresses more care and concern towards them and relies on them the most.
Luffy - Romance Dawn Trio. He's pretty instantly emotionally close with pretty much everyone but the way he connected to Nami and Zoro feels more significant because of how emotionally closed off both of them are at the beginning.
Sanji - Usopp. Though Nami is a close second as he pays a lot of attention to her and opens up to her. Interaction-wise he feels more in tune with Usopp as his encouragement and care is better reciprocated by him.
Usopp - Sanji. With Luffy and Nami being a close second and third. He seems to gravitate towards Sanji the most in episode-to-episode interactions but also feels like he's just happy to be there with all of them in general.
How would you develop the love square over the course of the five seasons?
For me, the biggest change I’d make is have Marinette and Adrien’s relationships with Luka and Kagami last from the back half of season three to the end of the first half of season four, as well as focusing on them being actual friends in seasons two through four. I’d also have a mutual identity reveal happen near the end of season three (alongside the other Miraculous holders at the time since Miracle Queen never happens) and create a kind of charm that conceals any miraculous-related thoughts from Shadowmoth to justify the continued knowledge. This leads Adrien and Marinette to re-evaluate their partnership and relationship as they become of the full extent of each other’s natures, rather than just the sides of each other that they each fell in love with.
Also, I’d love for their final admittance of their mutual feelings to be in a Marinette akumatisation episode, where the akuma Marinette gets turned into (maybe the final one Gabriel creates before he’s defeated after learning Marinette’s secret identity) is too powerful for the other heroes to defeat through force. Because of this, Marinette’s loved ones (parents, friends and Adrien) have to try and talk her down, with Adrien’s declaration of love being one of the main factors (outside of supporting words from her parents and assurances from her friends) that inspires Marinette to embrace the willpower necessary to break free from Monarch’s influence.
This episode is in my top 3 episodes of emerald witch arc.
I don't know how you found it. But it really triggered me, that they did not showed Vincent's day of death fully.
And they also made Cedric's death day on the 13th not the 28th. However. We got a little more infos about the parents of Claudia.
What I love more is again the dramatic hint about Ciel being aware of Shinigami. Yes. He may have a foot in the grave, for being so cuddly with this demon. But I still don't think that's the sole reason.
And if we can trust Ciel's feelings. He thinks also something is off.
However. The episode isn't one of my favorite just because of those scenes.
It's more my favorite because here we get such a crass confrontation between the relationship of Ciel and Sebastian, and the relationship between Sieglinde and Wolfram.
Here we don't have Agni telling Sebastian how important it is to make sure his master is safe and sound.
Here we have Wolfram getting to the point his life is only worthy because of the little one by his side.
And let me tell you something?
We already got this confirmation from Sebastian himself this very season.
While Wolfram very early comes to this conclusion by being aware of the colors of live, because of Sieglinde's devotion at him, Sebastian is a demon and so realization of feelings takes longer and probably isn't easy for him.
But we see it. His distress when Ciel was in misery and couldn't bear the touch of an adult. Sebastian was pretty lost. He himself said.
How can he be a butler without being close to his master.
I mean. Tanaka probably didn't need to carry Vincent on his arms nor did he needed to touch him, to be his master. But Sebastian ...
A few episodes later, Ciel being fit and able to let himself touch again only from Sebastian, that demon looks so happy.
And what does he tell us? He enjoy playing the butler disguise more than being a raging beast.
He enjoy this life more than the one he grew up as.
Being human and making his master happy makes his life colorful and bright, while being a simple demon makes it dull.
That's why Wolfram's memories are so important for the story of Ciel and Sebastian. It shows us the deep development that demon made from the first minute of contract until now.
But there is more.
When Sieglinde is so heartbroken over Wolfram's deadly wound, Ciel is harsh, to make her realize she is the only one being able to save her guardian.
Doesn't sound as if we got something like that before. But that's what we got.
Remember when Undertaker hurt Sebastian deadly on the Campania?
Back then it was only Ciel who could help Sebastian. And what did he do? He put himself physically between Undertaker and Sebastian.
He saved Sebastian's life by putting himself in great danger. He couldn't know that Undertaker really would stop because of this. I mean Undertaker just threw Ciel into death a moment before.
Some could say Ciel couldn't risk losing the only tool he had for revenge. But after all the things Yana shows us. No. He did so, because deep down he was just as shocked and thrown off as Sieglinde. The only thing holding his composure is the fact, that Ciel could control his emotions.
That's still not everything.
I also love that the teasing is back, right after three episodes of cuddles and touches and being close to each other.
Sebastian did not even try to hide his beautiful fangs anymore. He is so content.
He still can't help but also gain for a little bit compliments. Poor demon needs his petting after all those weeks of withhold.
And he gets the only way Ciel would give it to him.
I seriously love the ... Clover puts into the subtitles. It's so meaningful.
Of course Ciel won't tell his demon he trust him the most. I mean why should he? Sebastian fucking knows Ciel trusts him. Otherwise their contract wouldn't be that strong.
And it is.
Sebastian also trusts Ciel to make the best decisions. And Ciel trusts to keep himself save. That's why he is nearly sleeping when the bullets fly across them. And is relaxing while Sebastian stabs the Captain in her neck.
Also Ciel doesn't fear his demon nor his abilities. He said so himself. The worse thing than werewolfs are the real monsters. Called humans.
All in all.
Their relationship development is so meaningful and intense, that Yana shows us in every season. Every book. If it wouldn't be that important, she wouldn't take the time to write such a big story around it.
Because if you look at it from afar, that's the real story. Sebastian's and Ciel's developement around each other. And the main character isn't Ciel. But the black butler. Sebastian.
And to close this post with a look at the upcoming chapter. I think this book will rip our hearts out, because Sebastian will get hurt.
